Poems

CookieboogerCookiebooger Join Date: 2005-01-07 Member: 33343Members
edited April 2005 in Off-Topic
<div class="IPBDescription">Post them</div> Rules: Only post Poems. Comments at the bottom.


Okay here's a poem i wrote since I'm depressed since my bird just died =[

<span style='color:red'><b>Darkness</b></span>
Darkness at my door
You're a door with out a brace,
No locks or knobs to turn you in our out,
Just metal and swinging through the air,
Run through your hair as if it was clay,
But you can't see the light,
Because you're blinded by darkness.
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  • MantridMantrid Lockpick Join Date: 2003-12-07 Member: 24109Members
    edited April 2005
    A Haiku, by Mantrid:

    Images abound
    Color and form both dancing
    Your sig is too big.
  • CookieboogerCookiebooger Join Date: 2005-01-07 Member: 33343Members
    Reply to Mantrid.

    Who cares
    Not me
    The moderators go oh well
    So do posters and spammers
    So why do you care?
    Because you're not swell


    =]
  • MrRadicalEdMrRadicalEd Turrent Master Join Date: 2004-08-13 Member: 30601Members
    There's a hunter
    On a trail
    Got a track to follow

    There's a dust cloud
    There's a tail
    Fill a sack with sorrow

    In a second
    Still to panic
    Blood turns to nitroglycerin

    Gone scurryin'
    It's a black

    Back of his mind
    Nowhere to find

    Place to hide
    Or to rest

    Collapse to the beat of the world in his chest

    Can he find it

    There are secrets in the hills
    With the furrows, brows of the motherland

    Omni chambers
    Lots and ills

    From a time when they spoke of another kind of living

    The power to be one with the creatrix
    A trinity of power like a matrix

    In synch, this link to the source
    A river and its course

    What is Rock 'n' Roll?

    Living water
    Where money flows

    Molds the landscape
    To what it know

    Stranger running
    Running from fear

    Danger size never looked so clear

    And it's faces
    Claims to be places pure

    But how can a love be achieved by a warlike state
    When it's already in your power to be great

    But have to steal or appear to effect

    Your every act is live and direct
  • GlissGliss Join Date: 2003-03-23 Member: 14800Members, Constellation, NS2 Map Tester
  • Cold_NiTeCold_NiTe Join Date: 2003-09-15 Member: 20875Members
    edited April 2005
    <!--QuoteBegin-pjofsky+Apr 27 2005, 11:46 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (pjofsky @ Apr 27 2005, 11:46 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> nice haiku there <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Who said it has to be a Haiku.

    OH FFS fine here's a damn poem in my post. I didn't even see the rule. I was too busy reading the poem. It's nonstandard, so it's not going to be any recognizable type of poem.
    <span style='color:light blue'> </span>

    <i>Soft soft soft</i>,
    <span style='color:blue'>Blue</span> on <span style='color:white'>white</span> on <span style='color:red'>red</span>,
    Carry me out instead,
    Split the <span style='color:green'>Earth</span> and Tear the <span style='color:lightblue'>World</span>,
    I sing with angel's wings unfurled,

    <i>Soft soft soft</i>,
    Break the <span style='color:grey'>b</span><span style='color:white'>o</span><span style='color:grey'>n</span><span style='color:white'>e</span><span style='color:grey'>s</span> that hold you up,
    Pour your soul in <span style='color:silver'>silver</span> cup,
    Force your brother into the <span style='color:brown'>muck</span>,
    Now he's <b><span style='color:grey'>d</span><span style='color:black'>e</span><span style='color:grey'>a</span><span style='color:black'>d</span></b> you're out of <span style='color:yellow'>luck</span>,

    <i>Soft soft soft</i>,
    Sing with me into the sky,
    Let your voice float and fly,
    To that place where the father cries,
    And the grinner <span style='font-size:7pt;line-height:100%'>smiles</span> then <span style='font-size:7pt;line-height:100%'>sighs</span>.
  • DOOManiacDOOManiac Worst. Critic. Ever. Join Date: 2002-04-17 Member: 462Members, NS1 Playtester
    PJ broke the rule
    Now we will taunt him some more
    Plus he sucks at DOOM
  • MantridMantrid Lockpick Join Date: 2003-12-07 Member: 24109Members
    Heres an idea
    We should have a haiku fight
    Anyone agree?
  • DOOManiacDOOManiac Worst. Critic. Ever. Join Date: 2002-04-17 Member: 462Members, NS1 Playtester
    I see your challenge!
    And I raise you another:
    Each line must make sense!
  • LikuLiku I, am the Somberlain. Join Date: 2003-01-10 Member: 12128Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-DOOManiac+Apr 27 2005, 10:38 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (DOOManiac @ Apr 27 2005, 10:38 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> PJ broke the rule
    Now we will taunt him some more
    Plus he sucks at DOOM <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    But he rules himself,
    He is 22KB,
    PJ for the win.
  • MantridMantrid Lockpick Join Date: 2003-12-07 Member: 24109Members
    I agree to that
    We will have a show-down, Doom
    And I will beat you!
  • DOOManiacDOOManiac Worst. Critic. Ever. Join Date: 2002-04-17 Member: 462Members, NS1 Playtester
    It wont' be right now
    Because I am already
    late to go to bed

    I'll dream up some lines
    To pwn you on tommorrow
    Until then, goodnight.

    :P
  • MantridMantrid Lockpick Join Date: 2003-12-07 Member: 24109Members
    I also must sleep.
    But tomorrow, prepare.
    You will be my ****.
  • CookieboogerCookiebooger Join Date: 2005-01-07 Member: 33343Members
    Hahah this is getting out of line
    Stop fighting to save some damn lines!
    all you do is **** and whine!
  • ComproxComprox *chortle* Canada Join Date: 2002-01-23 Member: 7Members, Super Administrators, Forum Admins, NS1 Playtester, NS2 Developer, Constellation, NS2 Playtester, Reinforced - Shadow, WC 2013 - Silver, Subnautica Developer, Subnautica Playtester, Pistachionauts
    To screw it all up
    I will post an interlude
    'tween Doom and Mantrid
  • CookieboogerCookiebooger Join Date: 2005-01-07 Member: 33343Members
    Nice poem to type up in here
    we've got moderators going in this too
    gee, i should get some sleep and eat some food
  • MantridMantrid Lockpick Join Date: 2003-12-07 Member: 24109Members
    Haikus are structured.
    They go seven, five, seven.
    Please note this, Cookie.
  • CookieboogerCookiebooger Join Date: 2005-01-07 Member: 33343Members
    Well now i know this
    and now i will go back to poems
    my sig is too big and it needs to be fixed
    comprox made my sig all screwy
    and now im sad because i have no sig
    because comprox is a meany head
    who made me pee my bed
    after fixing my sig
    with his fictious rules
    including his man boobs

    no offending intended ^_^
  • Private_ColemanPrivate_Coleman PhD in Video Games Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7510Members
    I want to be raped
    By a lusty succubus.
    Oh damn, I am dead.
  • SpacerSpacer Invented dogs Join Date: 2003-05-02 Member: 16008Members
    This isn't the greatest haiku
    In the world, oh no.
    This is just a tribute, oh!
  • CookieboogerCookiebooger Join Date: 2005-01-07 Member: 33343Members
    Like omg this thread is so long!
    I must go home and tell john!
    his poems are a mess and so are his pants
    maybe i should put cackroaches in his underpants
    maybe i shouldn't
    maybe i will
    but who cares
    my name is bill

    ^_^
  • CyndaneCyndane Join Date: 2003-11-15 Member: 22913Members
    I am going to break the haiku.. because I am horrible at writing them with my own non-standard poem.

    <!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->
    <span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'> Hand to hold </span>

    It took me one year to understand
    How far it had went
    Guilt in blood
    As if I were guilty
    For some cheap crime
    I have backed down the mountain

    Feel the hand
    The cold hand of sleep
    Feel it gently touch your face, your lips, your soul
    Breathe slower, close your eyes
    Embrace it, Let it flow into you
    Im’ waiting

    See the calmness flow into the bosom of the bay
    Silently waiting for the night

    Feel the day slowly, sitting down
    Listen to the song of the summer night
    it exists

    blue winds and water
    Blue skies and oceans
    Blue feelings in the night
    I have fallen
    God knows how I’ve felt
    I couldn’t explain the signs any longer
    and I had no hand to hold

    I gave it all away
    I gave it all away
    Now I’m taking it back
    <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
  • GlissGliss Join Date: 2003-03-23 Member: 14800Members, Constellation, NS2 Map Tester
    <!--QuoteBegin-DOOManiac+Apr 27 2005, 10:38 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (DOOManiac @ Apr 27 2005, 10:38 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> PJ broke the rule
    Now we will taunt him some more
    Plus he sucks at DOOM <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    I broke the rule? What?
    There was no rule stating that.
    You suck at reading.
  • CookieboogerCookiebooger Join Date: 2005-01-07 Member: 33343Members
    edited April 2005
    You're all crazy and demented.
    I'm the one with the best poems posted
    you're all garbage compared to me
    when it comes to rhyming no one can beat me
    because i have the rythme and the beat
    so if i were you id go home and beat your meat
    because you have no chance against me
    with your silly haiku's
    making me laugh and stand about with glue
    glue my self to the screen and play this wonderful game
    but please CHILDREN stay away from my game

    Changing the game a little bit now
    i'm hoping you can understand it
    because there should be a new flow
    and please don't have a fit
    because we're all gamers
    and we're all poets
    but please understand that comprox is only a child
    and he wants to ruin your sig
    make funny faces at him and make him mad wild
    he'll snap your neck in half like a twig
    so don't complain or he'll come back for you
    and break your limbs if he has to.
  • CForresterCForrester P0rk(h0p Join Date: 2002-10-05 Member: 1439Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin-Cookiebooger+Apr 28 2005, 09:03 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Cookiebooger @ Apr 28 2005, 09:03 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> his poems are a mess and so are his pants
    maybe i should put cackroaches in his underpants <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    You rhymed pants with pants.
    You have broken a standard rule.
    Get out of my thread.

    <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • Seph_KimaraSeph_Kimara Join Date: 2003-08-10 Member: 19359Members
    Magic Roundabout
    Zebedee finally snaps
    "GET THE **** TO BED"
  • CookieboogerCookiebooger Join Date: 2005-01-07 Member: 33343Members
    You're all evil
    and in denial
    please refrain from using harsh words
    because there are children on this board
    who have not one clue
    to what we are saying
    so stop the damn haiku!
  • CForresterCForrester P0rk(h0p Join Date: 2002-10-05 Member: 1439Members, Constellation
    You are just bitter.
    Because I pwned you in the face.
    Crowbar to the head.
  • Seph_KimaraSeph_Kimara Join Date: 2003-08-10 Member: 19359Members
    Haiku form works well
    To swiftly expose your thoughts.
    Now get me a sandwich.
  • GlissGliss Join Date: 2003-03-23 Member: 14800Members, Constellation, NS2 Map Tester
    <!--QuoteBegin-Cookiebooger+Apr 28 2005, 07:08 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Cookiebooger @ Apr 28 2005, 07:08 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> You're all evil
    and in denial
    please refrain from using harsh words
    because there are children on this board
    who have not one clue
    to what we are saying
    so stop the damn haiku! <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    There are no children.
    Except for Mantrid, that dork.
    or jy, that ****.
  • CookieboogerCookiebooger Join Date: 2005-01-07 Member: 33343Members
    Stop the damn haiku!
    You really suck at them man!
    you just suck balls heh
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