<!--QuoteBegin-Destroyer+Feb 11 2004, 04:20 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Destroyer @ Feb 11 2004, 04:20 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> cookie for YOU! <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd--> DAMN RIGHT That story rocked x10, i hope there will be many more to come.
<!--QuoteBegin-Fire Eel+Feb 11 2004, 08:40 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Fire Eel @ Feb 11 2004, 08:40 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> its a common occurance known as "Relationship formed under intensive circumstances"
No, seriously. You have heard of it don't you? <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd--> heej.. gimme a break.. was just messing around..
I said before i loved your story.. and i'll say it again ! your story rox! now the TSA can copy this brave story and make it to be thought to those little TSA-newbies !
Tell us all when u start another <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
This story owns Harry Potter anytime <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> . But the only thing is i am not really in with those story where everyone die.
Thanks for the replies guys, if Behemoth does get stickied.....wow. My aim for the Behemoth at first was to reach at least 2000 views and be stickied, if you read the earlier chapters.
Anyway, my next thing to do would be to include 'Reference Guide To The Monsters Of Behemoth'. Maybe by today, it will be done.
After that, I would do proof reading.
After that, I would do even more stories linked to Behemoth.
Lastly, someone tell me how to prevent this story from getting deleted should the forums suddenly be down or something.
let the person who wanted to map it map it <!--emo&:0--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wow.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wow.gif' /><!--endemo-->
<!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->After that, I would do proof reading.<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd--> Good idea. You do have some random spelling mistakes here and there.
<!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->After that, I would do even more stories linked to Behemoth.<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd--> Yea!!!!!!!!!!!!
<!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->Lastly, someone tell me how to prevent this story from getting deleted should the forums suddenly be down or something.<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd--> You put it on a seperate server. Say your own. Link it up. Done.
aonomusDedicated NS Mastermind (no need for school)Join Date: 2003-11-26Member: 23605Members, Constellation
woooooooooooooooooooow, that is such a map to make... <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
I am <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
WOW! I started reading at like 4:30 this afternoon and read off and on 'till now at 9:00! So much for catching up on the tons of homework I was gonna do! great story man.
Hey! First! Nice work! Your fanfiction is great! I´m also a good story writer, but I´m a German and my storys are (mostly) in german. I´m currently writing on a Natural Selection fanfiction , since a couple of weeks. I´ve got 17 Pages now (in MS Word). I´m thinking about translating this story into english. But mainly I´m thinking about printing my story as a book. I don´t know, how many guys of ya are good in german :/ Maybe, I can post a part of my story here... It would be nice, when u can give me some feedbacks about this... Now, to the writer of this story! U did a great job! really! <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> go on as u did before <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo--> cya greetings from Berlin,Germany <!--emo&::marine::--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html//emoticons/marine.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='marine.gif' /><!--endemo-->
thx for the replies guys. Actually, multiple people have suggested to me that I actually publish the book, but I wouldn't do it, not unless Flayra gives the 'yes'.
Oh yeah, I 'd appreciate it if you people would read Ns The Behemoth Platinium. Afterall, it is supposed to be the improved version with more goodies.
Well I think, that I will just print 10 books. 5 are for my squad members (cuz my story is about me and my squad) and the rest hmm I think I will sell them to good friends or stuff like that...
Just 1 thing i wonder in chap 7 when the marine got spored. Aint spores choking so you cant breath not acid that burns the flesh and armor off you or am i wrong here? Hm but the armor does go down in NS but i recall that i somewhere redd "Choking spores"
Quote from the manual : "This insidious attack appears to come from nowhere, filling a volume of around 12 cubit feet with a corrosive cloud of spores. These spores appear to rot any foreign organic matter – thankfully, marine structures and turrets are unaffected"
Okay this is the first time I read your story, and I think it's AWESOME. I'm new to these forums and to NS, so maybe someone can clear something up for me.... WHAT THE HECK IS A SCORPIAN THAT HOVERS WITHOUT FLAPPING?! Was it some sort of alien that was never implemented into NS?
BTW, I'm not gonna shoot onos anymore; actually, I'm going to drop down on 'em with my JP and knife their heads. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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i wish this would be stickied,it should be greatest story evar!!!!
DAMN RIGHT
That story rocked x10, i hope there will be many more to come.
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No, seriously. You have heard of it don't you? <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
heej.. gimme a break.. was just messing around..
I said before i loved your story.. and i'll say it again ! your story rox!
now the TSA can copy this brave story and make it to be thought to those little TSA-newbies !
I swear i got chills..... woah...
U rock man
~Jason
Tell us all when u start another <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
Anyway, my next thing to do would be to include 'Reference Guide To The Monsters Of Behemoth'. Maybe by today, it will be done.
After that, I would do proof reading.
After that, I would do even more stories linked to Behemoth.
Lastly, someone tell me how to prevent this story from getting deleted should the forums suddenly be down or something.
Make another one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dustin Michaels
Good idea. You do have some random spelling mistakes here and there.
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Yea!!!!!!!!!!!!
<!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->Lastly, someone tell me how to prevent this story from getting deleted should the forums suddenly be down or something.<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
You put it on a seperate server. Say your own. Link it up. Done.
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Its bascially a slightly improved version of Behemoth without all the gramer mistakes and with slightly more detail, along with a new layout.
<span style='font-family:Arial'>Behemoth</span>
<span style='font-family:Times'>Behemoth</span>
<span style='font-family:Courier'>Behemoth</span>
<span style='font-family:Impact'>Behemoth</span>
<span style='font-family:Geneva'>Behemoth</span>
<span style='font-family:Optima'>Behemoth</span>
P.S : You guys think I should concentrate on Nightmare or Behemoth Platinium or make a Behemoth RPG?
best story ever. <----
you ever thought of becoming a professional writer?
First! Nice work! Your fanfiction is great! I´m also a good story writer, but I´m a German and my storys are (mostly) in german.
I´m currently writing on a Natural Selection fanfiction , since a couple of weeks. I´ve got 17 Pages now (in MS Word). I´m thinking about translating this story into english. But mainly I´m thinking about printing my story as a book. I don´t know, how many guys of ya are good in german :/
Maybe, I can post a part of my story here...
It would be nice, when u can give me some feedbacks about this...
Now, to the writer of this story! U did a great job! really! <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> go on as u did before <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->
cya
greetings from Berlin,Germany <!--emo&::marine::--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html//emoticons/marine.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='marine.gif' /><!--endemo-->
Oh yeah, I 'd appreciate it if you people would read Ns The Behemoth Platinium. Afterall, it is supposed to be the improved version with more goodies.
5 are for my squad members (cuz my story is about me and my squad) and the rest hmm I think I will sell them to good friends or stuff like that...
uhm what about my story? Is somebody interested?
Now you understand?
BTW Magnifiscent story especially loved the berzerk chap with hundreds of Kharaas, heh hmg and shotty strong fella *imagines*
BTW, I'm not gonna shoot onos anymore; actually, I'm going to drop down on 'em with my JP and knife their heads. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->