Ns - The Behemoth

meatball

hehe a scorpian that hovars without flapping... well quite some time ago some guy wrote an extremly funny thread in S&I and among other things he mentioned teh scorpian ...

[edit] I think it was "smart bomb" who did write about it give it a search and you'll probably find it[/edit]

fodder0

<!--emo&:0--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wow.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wow.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Pyrotechnic

I'm surprised you didn't add the Grenade Launcher in as a weapon that they would find <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif' /><!--endemo--> I was hoping that when they were in the battle with all those aliens surrounding them, they would find a Grenade Launcher or something... Maybe like they would find it right beside the dead corpse of a marine <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo--> Anyhow great story! Keep up the good work!

Fire_Eel

Announcing The Future of NS The Behemoth and NS The Nightmare

The good news is, I am currently working upon Behemoth and improving it tremondously. Yes, that means an error-free Behemoth, with a slightly new layout and.......best of all, NEW CHAPTERS!!!

I estimate and hope that the new Behemoth would be 25-50% longer than the original. Currently, although I am still only working at the part where the EX-200 is just attacked, I have already added TWO NEW CHAPTERS. And that is only the beginning portion.

Bad news is, I will have to push Nightmare to one side for the moment. Reason is becoz Nightmare takes up too much of my time, and it is far easier to improve Behemoth.

Also, suggest to me how do you guys want me to release the new Behemoth? When everything is done or a chapter at a time?

I am warning you guys, this is my O'Level year and the progress would be very very slow.

P.S : Doing all these also ensures my fanfics remains at the top in the NS forums <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Nuub

God... Like these... erm 30(?) chapters wouldnt be enough, you still have to make more....





GREAT <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Fire_Eel

Ahhhh........heck. I will be releasing the new Behemoth hopefully soon. Still need to gather more background NS information.

maybe I will call it "NS The Behemoth Gift Edition"

Nah....sounds too stupid. "NS The Behemoth Two"?

Too misleading. "NS The Behemoth Revisited"?

Weird........"NS The Behemoth Rewritten"

NS The Behemoth Reloaded................

Erm......help me to think of a name pls!

Kamahl

NS The Behemoth The sequal
NS The Behemoth The Returning

TommyVercetti

The Behemoth Crisis..? Not very good at thinking up names for other people's stuff. Anyways, Eel, I posted in your RPG thread but it seems no one else is interested.

Fire_Eel

The name shall be.........*drums beat*

NS : Destruction of The Behemoth

If you guys are lucky enough, I may be in time to post a few beginning chapters today, and you guys can judge if it is better than the original.

P.S : Tommy, I am glad you replied to my RPG. It's unfortunate that little people are interested in it, but its okay. Afterall, its not a good idea to have so many Behemoth stuff.

hidden_snper

if you need help, i can spell/grammer check the entire thing and edit as well. that would leave you plenty of time to just write...

Mr_COWmaster

This is truly an excellent peice of work. I've read alot of fiction before, but this is probably one of the best. I especially like the scorpion that hovers without flapping. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Nuub

Hmm, wonder how you found this thread, been gone for a loong time. Shame there propably wont be any more behemoth stories.

Mag

write the whole thing up on word.. and host tha file
... then i can read that

m0nk3y

great story........

HEY WHERES THE GUIDE!?!?

mr_skulk

[COLOR=gray]The best story I have ever read and i have looked at them all <!--emo&::asrifle::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/asrifle.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='asrifle.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--emo&::gorge::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/pudgy.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='pudgy.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Nineteen

ya i woner if fire el is still around to post some more of this its prolly my favourite one on these forums for a long time.

ShadowHunter

yeh can SOMEBODY plz make into 1 big file
i wanna keeps a copy printed out <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

and yeh i am CONSIDERING writing up a big **** NS story one day soon

i can be creative when i want but meh lil busy now <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

keep up the good work and SOMEBODY HOST THIS SHIZNAT when its all compiled <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

ill host it on my ISP webspace IF YOU WANT

i love it

m0nk3y

good.. good.. add more plz... add pictures too because books with pictures are far better then a book with only words...

Nineteen

says the grade 2 <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

it would be pretty good if it was a good artist

ShadowHunter

mmm seems like he not around much hehe

ah wells <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

hopefully he come back n compile it with maybe some graphics n all that <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Kittamaru

aw man, don't have em die! You need an encore-

have em escape somehow, Id on't care how, just do it <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/tounge.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=":p" border="0" alt="tounge.gif" /> The hero's NEVER die!

Chocolate

This story is the best thing to happen to the NS community since Ns the game and EASILY dwarfs the invention of sliced bread!

Keep up the good work! I read the Behemoth Source and couldn't help reading this to end it <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/tounge.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=":p" border="0" alt="tounge.gif" />.

(I r sad because I can't post as many <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/asrifle.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="::asrifle::" border="0" alt="asrifle.gif" /> <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/skulk.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="::skulk::" border="0" alt="skulk.gif" /> emoticons as i wanted to <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/sad-fix.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=":(" border="0" alt="sad-fix.gif" />)

Edit: This topic reached 8,000 views! Im not sure if that was your goal because I read too much behemoth today!