Creative people... input please :D

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  • esunaesuna Rock Bottom Join Date: 2003-04-03 Member: 15175Members, Constellation
    ITT: amateur designers trying to act professional
  • lolfighterlolfighter Snark, Dire Join Date: 2003-04-20 Member: 15693Members
    esuna: Offering no helpful advice.
  • ConfusedConfused Wait. What? Join Date: 2003-01-28 Member: 12904Members, Constellation, NS2 Playtester, Squad Five Blue, Subnautica Playtester
    <!--quoteo(post=1695046:date=Dec 3 2008, 06:08 PM:name=esuna)--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(esuna @ Dec 3 2008, 06:08 PM) <a href="index.php?act=findpost&pid=1695046"><{POST_SNAPBACK}></a></div><div class='quotemain'><!--quotec-->Not to mention how hideously inappropriate it is for a design company to use a logo created by a third party.<!--QuoteEnd--></div><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Good thing he's founding a development company then.

    Also, I was unaware that drawing pictures on the internets for luls was considered a professional sort of application of my time. I will clearly need to straighten up, found a design company, and charge people ludicrous amounts for my time.
  • ZeroByteZeroByte Join Date: 2002-11-01 Member: 3057Members
    He does have a partner to handle the design part of their company. I'm not against doing random art things for people on forums but esuna does have a point that it would be silly if their company logo wasn't something they've designed themselves. That being said, I don't really like the logo, it's too busy and the font/type being used feels too heavy. Here's what I would do.

    <div align="center"><img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v334/chemikhazi/logo-quicky.png" border="0" class="linked-image" /></div>

    Yeah, my hypocrisy level is over 9000. I just wanted to avoid doing actual work so I scratched this itch instead <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/tounge.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=":p" border="0" alt="tounge.gif" />
  • SvenpaSvenpa Wait, what? Join Date: 2004-01-03 Member: 25012Members, Constellation
    I actually like it, the one on the right, give or take moving some parts.
  • GoogleMaleGoogleMale Join Date: 2008-12-03 Member: 65643Members
    <!--quoteo(post=1695060:date=Dec 4 2008, 04:17 AM:name=Psyke)--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Psyke @ Dec 4 2008, 04:17 AM) <a href="index.php?act=findpost&pid=1695060"><{POST_SNAPBACK}></a></div><div class='quotemain'><!--quotec-->So is balance, which is why I disagree with everything you said except for the last.
    More space between I and Say will help them appear as separate words, but your other suggestions I fear would make it feel off balance.<!--QuoteEnd--></div><!--QuoteEEnd-->

    It's not balanced either. The S is too far away from the A. And the exclamation mark is too far from the Y. The whole 'I Say!' looks disjointed. Don't take this the wrong way though. It's a nice logo
  • remiremi remedy [blu.knight] Join Date: 2003-11-18 Member: 23112Members, Super Administrators, Forum Admins, NS2 Developer, NS2 Playtester
    <!--quoteo(post=1695191:date=Dec 5 2008, 04:24 AM:name=GoogleMale)--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(GoogleMale @ Dec 5 2008, 04:24 AM) <a href="index.php?act=findpost&pid=1695191"><{POST_SNAPBACK}></a></div><div class='quotemain'><!--quotec-->It's not balanced either. The S is too far away from the A. And the exclamation mark is too far from the Y. The whole 'I Say!' looks disjointed. Don't take this the wrong way though. It's a nice logo<!--QuoteEnd--></div><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Yeah, I noticed those. Horizontal balance could take a little work, but I think the vertical balance is good.
  • HazeHaze O RLY? Join Date: 2003-07-07 Member: 18018Members, Constellation
    <!--quoteo(post=1694840:date=Dec 1 2008, 10:10 PM:name=Psyke)--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Psyke @ Dec 1 2008, 10:10 PM) <a href="index.php?act=findpost&pid=1694840"><{POST_SNAPBACK}></a></div><div class='quotemain'><!--quotec-->That's quite cute. Not sure what your point is, but yeah.<!--QuoteEnd--></div><!--QuoteEEnd-->

    You disappoint him by being so sensitive to a word.
  • remiremi remedy [blu.knight] Join Date: 2003-11-18 Member: 23112Members, Super Administrators, Forum Admins, NS2 Developer, NS2 Playtester
    <!--quoteo(post=1695264:date=Dec 5 2008, 04:22 PM:name=Haze)--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Haze @ Dec 5 2008, 04:22 PM) <a href="index.php?act=findpost&pid=1695264"><{POST_SNAPBACK}></a></div><div class='quotemain'><!--quotec-->You disappoint him by being so sensitive to a word.<!--QuoteEnd--></div><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Heh. I see.
  • CrispyCrispy Jaded GD Join Date: 2004-08-22 Member: 30793Members, Constellation
    edited December 2008
    <!--quoteo(post=1695099:date=Dec 4 2008, 04:46 PM:name=ZeroByte)--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(ZeroByte @ Dec 4 2008, 04:46 PM) <a href="index.php?act=findpost&pid=1695099"><{POST_SNAPBACK}></a></div><div class='quotemain'><!--quotec-->He does have a partner to handle the design part of their company. I'm not against doing random art things for people on forums but esuna does have a point that it would be silly if their company logo wasn't something they've designed themselves. That being said, I don't really like the logo, it's too busy and the font/type being used feels too heavy. Here's what I would do.

    <div align="center"><img src="http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v334/chemikhazi/logo-quicky.png" border="0" class="linked-image" /></div>

    Yeah, my hypocrisy level is over 9000. I just wanted to avoid doing actual work so I scratched this itch instead <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/tounge.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=":p" border="0" alt="tounge.gif" /><!--QuoteEnd--></div><!--QuoteEEnd-->I like this design better because the proportions are nicer. Also I think the black/white colour scheme works better with the tophat and monocle theme. You can't really take it any further because you'd risk encroaching on Monopoly-man territory.

    What I don't like about it is the "I". Some ideas:

    - Any way to make the S into a moustache/mouth and still be legible as an S?

    - Would it work at all having the I a bit bigger and rotate the 'Say' text 90 degrees to make it fit into a square/oblong shape and be a little more playful on the eye? This way the logo could imply you look at challenges from different angles to get a better result than the competition.

    - Could it work if you made the "I" miniscule ("i") and a different colour/tone and placed it right in front of the Say (like iMac)?
  • A_Boojum_SnarkA_Boojum_Snark Join Date: 2003-09-07 Member: 20628Members
    <!--quoteo(post=1695359:date=Dec 6 2008, 12:02 PM:name=Crispy)--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Crispy @ Dec 6 2008, 12:02 PM) <a href="index.php?act=findpost&pid=1695359"><{POST_SNAPBACK}></a></div><div class='quotemain'><!--quotec-->- Could it work if you made the "I" miniscule ("i") and a different colour/tone and placed it right in front of the Say (like iMac)?<!--QuoteEnd--></div><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    It was previously determined it was a bad thing to use a small i and make it seem mac-ish.
  • CrispyCrispy Jaded GD Join Date: 2004-08-22 Member: 30793Members, Constellation
    Yeah I saw that, but I didn't see any sound reason for not doing it like that. Tying into the iMac brand, even if not by direct association and only by subtle inference, could exploit the positive qualities of that brand and apply them to your own in the eyes of a first-time customer. Apple is generally considered cool, well-designed, unique, etc. All of these are qualities that you might want for your website, so if there are allusions to them in the name, I say why not go for it (left that pun in as soon as I noticed it!).
  • enf0rcerenf0rcer intrigued... Join Date: 2003-03-16 Member: 14584Members
    meh:

    <img src="http://www.uoguelph.ca/~hayt/isay.jpg" border="0" class="linked-image" />
  • remiremi remedy [blu.knight] Join Date: 2003-11-18 Member: 23112Members, Super Administrators, Forum Admins, NS2 Developer, NS2 Playtester
    <!--quoteo(post=1695444:date=Dec 7 2008, 12:26 AM:name=enf0rcer)--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(enf0rcer @ Dec 7 2008, 12:26 AM) <a href="index.php?act=findpost&pid=1695444"><{POST_SNAPBACK}></a></div><div class='quotemain'><!--quotec-->meh:

    <img src="http://www.uoguelph.ca/~hayt/isay.jpg" border="0" class="linked-image" /><!--QuoteEnd--></div><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    That looks great. I think it should say Web Development or Web Design rather than A Web Company, but the I Say part looks awesome.
  • A_Boojum_SnarkA_Boojum_Snark Join Date: 2003-09-07 Member: 20628Members
    The "web design" part of the wording really needs to stay part of the actual name to feel right, not a side-note explaining the name. Gotta imagine an old English gentleman saying "I say! Web design!", such as if he had seen the design work done and felt like exclaiming the grandeur and magnificence of it in a manner along the meaning of "Now that's what web design is!"
  • remiremi remedy [blu.knight] Join Date: 2003-11-18 Member: 23112Members, Super Administrators, Forum Admins, NS2 Developer, NS2 Playtester
    <!--quoteo(post=1695531:date=Dec 7 2008, 06:19 PM:name=A_Boojum_Snark)--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(A_Boojum_Snark @ Dec 7 2008, 06:19 PM) <a href="index.php?act=findpost&pid=1695531"><{POST_SNAPBACK}></a></div><div class='quotemain'><!--quotec-->The "web design" part of the wording really needs to stay part of the actual name to feel right, not a side-note explaining the name. Gotta imagine an old English gentleman saying "I say! Web design!", such as if he had seen the design work done and felt like exclaiming the grandeur and magnificence of it in a manner along the meaning of "Now that's what web design is!"<!--QuoteEnd--></div><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    I disagree there. "A Web Company" makes it lose that feeling, but just "Web Design" makes it so that it can be read that way, or interpreted as a company that's web designs cause people to exlaim "I say!"
  • A_Boojum_SnarkA_Boojum_Snark Join Date: 2003-09-07 Member: 20628Members
    <!--quoteo(post=1695547:date=Dec 7 2008, 07:16 PM:name=Psyke)--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Psyke @ Dec 7 2008, 07:16 PM) <a href="index.php?act=findpost&pid=1695547"><{POST_SNAPBACK}></a></div><div class='quotemain'><!--quotec-->I disagree there. "A Web Company" makes it lose that feeling, but just "Web Design" makes it so that it can be read that way, or interpreted as a company that's web designs cause people to exlaim "I say!"<!--QuoteEnd--></div><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    What, exactly, are you disagreeing with? It sounds like you are saying the same thing. My post was referring to enf's and all previous versions of logos in that the "I say" isn't the major part, the whole phrase is.
  • remiremi remedy [blu.knight] Join Date: 2003-11-18 Member: 23112Members, Super Administrators, Forum Admins, NS2 Developer, NS2 Playtester
    <!--quoteo(post=1695556:date=Dec 7 2008, 09:44 PM:name=A_Boojum_Snark)--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(A_Boojum_Snark @ Dec 7 2008, 09:44 PM) <a href="index.php?act=findpost&pid=1695556"><{POST_SNAPBACK}></a></div><div class='quotemain'><!--quotec-->What, exactly, are you disagreeing with? It sounds like you are saying the same thing. My post was referring to enf's and all previous versions of logos in that the "I say" isn't the major part, the whole phrase is.<!--QuoteEnd--></div><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Sorry for my lack of clarity. I was disagreeing about the side-note thing. I think it looks fine with the non-isay part in a smaller font to the right of it (and without an exclamation mark).

    I also was commenting that I think it saying "A Web Company" makes it lose the feeling that you were talking about, while "Web Design" or "Web Development" wouldn't.
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