Co_exploited

Charge

<div class="IPBDescription">Screenies from my box map (WIP)</div> Readyroom (thats the hive room u can see thru the doors):

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Readyroom (another angle):

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Hive room:

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Hive room(another angle):

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Marine start:

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Jezpuh

Looks kinda empty.. but nice work.
But you should edit the textures in marine base.

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Retextured hive room w/ walkway(which needs polishing):

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Marine start with some new textures and another angle:

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Varsity

The marine start still looks ver bland. Perhaps some more features on the walls, and some more texture variation?

chis1

looks good

i think it needs some more detail tho

dux

You've got soem good ideas for your rooms, but fail to make them really interesting to look at. Every wall there is pretty much a flat un - interesting brush with a texture on it. Try adding in some pipes, curvy architechture, diverse levels, fancy lighting, particle effects etc etc. Something to break up the flatness.

Varsity

I do like the arrows in the rr, though.

Charge

<!--QuoteBegin-Varsity+Feb 1 2004, 01:42 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Varsity @ Feb 1 2004, 01:42 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> I do like the arrows in the rr, though. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
but of course you do <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Charge

Slightly retextured MS(with screwed up glass):

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bliNk

I don't think I have seen a worse marine start then that.

It had to be said, what with all these other people giving it "wowz0rz!!!" then your never gonna get better.

It's basically a square room with a ramp.

Needs work mate. The quality of ns2.wad just about keeps your head above the water.

Charge

Some small detailing... a lot more needed tho <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> those are pipes under the floor

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Charge

Too much wires?

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Kouji_San

THe MS has potential only its also very onos friendly. You should add some support pillars in the middle makes it look much better. And mayb some boxes near the cc or the other side of the MS. In short its a to open area...

<b>Now onto the Hive room:</b>
Its to open for skulks/gorges, 2 mayb 3 marines can camp out in each corner and start the evil spawn killing and the skulks spawning wont even have a chance. add some more attributes. Just a few boxes or pipes can do the trick. Also why isnt there any infestation on the ramp and pipes near the hive <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->

One more question on the MS and Hive, how many exits do they have?

GreetzZz Kouji San

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<!--QuoteBegin-Kouji San+Feb 1 2004, 04:45 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Kouji San @ Feb 1 2004, 04:45 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> THe MS has potential only its also very onos friendly. You should add some support pillars in the middle makes it look much better. And mayb some boxes near the cc or the other side of the MS. In short its a to open area...

<b>Now onto the Hive room:</b>
Its to open for skulks/gorges, 2 mayb 3 marines can camp out in each corner and start the evil spawn killing and the skulks spawning wont even have a chance. add some more attributes. Just a few boxes or pipes can do the trick. Also why isnt there any infestation on the ramp and pipes near the hive <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->

One more question on the MS and Hive, how many exits do they have?

GreetzZz Kouji San <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
The hive will have 3, 2 doors and 1 vent. Marine start will have 1 door and 1 vent but the corridor that the door leads to divides shortly.

I tried to make those support pillars, but they looked veeeery ugly <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Charge

Boxesh!

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More boxesh!

Charge

That big red box in the second pic is a sneaky one, you can hide inside it <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Anyways, off to sleep ->

Kouji_San

I like the hive better now (is that the same room <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->), but whats that a counterstrike skin on that container, correct me if im mistaken <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Mayb you can try in the MS not to use pillars but support beams along the ceiling. looking from the screen from left to right and lower the middle part just a little below the suport beams where the 2 ceilings meet

GreetzZz Kouji San

[edit] typos <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo--> [/edit]

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<!--QuoteBegin-Kouji San+Feb 1 2004, 05:11 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Kouji San @ Feb 1 2004, 05:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> I like the hive better now (is that the same room <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->), but whats that a counterstrike skin on that container, correct me if im mistaken <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Mayb you can try in the MS not to use pillars but support beams along the cieling. looking from the screen fomr left to right and lower the middle part just a little below the suport beams where the 2 ceilings meet

GreetzZz Kouji San <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
It's a Half-Life texture. And im making the support beams tomorrow. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Charge

Some detail added.

Kouji_San

Improved <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
Hehe nevermind I was going to say: Oi! wheres the resnode but its combat nm on that.

Maybe one more little suggestion:

The floor grate maybe make 2 platforms like this

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And let pipes go underneath then or something so the elevations make sence...
Ah well play arround with the inventory of the MS.

Its getting better, just compare the 1st screen with the last

GreetzZz Kouji San

Note: ascii art hurts Koujis fingers <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->

[edit]typo <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif' /><!--endemo--> [/edit]

Restrik

nice, add some computer consoles, and things of that nature...i think someone mentioned support pillars, that would also be very nice. From a "RP" stand point, it doesn't look like there's any purpose to the space station/craft (which ever) just looks like a big metal thing floating in the sky.

Add some reason to it, and you'll have yourself a damn good map <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->

brute_force

PLEASE fix the texture on the crates in MS. The texture is meant to be 1/4 of the pic on each crate. What you do is you select the face you want, press "Fill", then double both the amounts in scale x and y. Then do TL, TR, BL, or BR. (t=top, b=bottom, l&r=left&right)

Just a suggestion. Also, the MS looks alot better now.

MrMojo

I like the hive room, but the MS seems too straight and narrow, with only one entrance. All the combat maps have two or three entrnaces. I suggest making it into more of a square design instead of the rectangle.


The hive looks really good though.

Jezpuh

Get that window texture in MS spreaded and the align the box textures good.

wRaven

MS is way to open, to much like a gauntlet.

Get rid of the crates and put up actual barriers (overtruned tables, proped up grates, ext) or make the crates as if they were aranged more for defensive purposes