In Need Of Critisism

Wilkins

<div class="IPBDescription">Constructive, mind you ;)</div> Alright, well, some of you might know me, and how I like to post pictures, and then get some constructive critisism on it to improve myself, and I know I haven't posted anything in awhile, but oh well, right?

Anyway, I made this in photoshop today (except for the pencil part, so much easier by hand <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->) and I need to know if there's anything that seems like it could use improvement.

Anyway, critisise away! <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->

Vyvn

Hmm...I'm assuming that the cloud is one of them "metaphor" things to show that he's upset, so I won't comment on cloud being just a few inches above his head. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->

Looks good. Nice drawing, and nice coloring too. My only suggestion would be to give him some eyes, since right now he either looks like some sort of ghost/monster (that may be the idea, dunno), or it looks like his glasses are fogged up, which doesn't serve much purpose. You can use eyes to convey a lot of feeling, so go for it.

And whether or not you want to add a nose in is up to you. Personally, I think I would give him a small one.

Mr_Headcrab

A very Machallk-esque art style, I like it, In fact, I'm downloading it

Inuss

OMG!!!! CAN YOU DO THE SCENE FROM ZIM WITH...

"Not now son, I'm making.. **sizzle, zap, electrical noise**...TOAST!"

THAT WOULD BE THE BEST!

Wilkins

So, I take it that it get's this? (I just got done making this lol, and yes, I know the text sucks <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->)

kida

It gets my approval..gj..

Quaunaut

Its good, but I would draw the legs, but have them fade. OTher than that, SWEET JOB!

Visual_Mirage

I like the picture! very simplistic style, i like that.

Perhaps make the cloud not so...black? as in...not ALL just black? <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

ViPr

get rid of the pencil scratches and it's good. put the pencil sketch scan on a seperate layer so it doesn't appear in the final image but just acts as a guide for you to trace.

CoolCookieCooks

the pencil lines are the final touch, u cannot remove the pencil lines!

coil

Megatokyo meets MacHall... nice work. (:

It works well; my only suggestion would be to work on how the head attaches to the shoulders. Unfortunately, I can't quite pick out why it doesn't work, it just doesn't quite fit. You may want to try a thinner neck, and play with where it connects to the head. Check out Megatokyo and MacHall... their styles are similar to this.
www.megatokyo.com
www.machall.com