i made a new one a heavy marine dying/falling <img src='http://mitglied.lycos.de/jumpingjoda/heavy.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
and again with my favorite filter <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> <img src='http://mitglied.lycos.de/jumpingjoda/heavy-filter.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
i would love to hear ur coments/critics, as usual <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
lol u think i drew him while he is standing? <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
this was my reference <img src='http://mitglied.lycos.de/jumpingjoda/heavy-ref.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
i cant change the death animation sry <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
Your drawings are looking a hell of a lot better, while still quite messy, they're definately an improvement, although you still have a few proportion issues with the LA marine.
Also, is that a biro / rollerball pen you're drawing with? I'd suggest against it really, the flow of ink from them tends to be sporadic at times and there's no room for creating any shapes with your linework. Try moving to a fine drawing pen.
thx esuna well... i am drawing with the most minimal equipment yep its a rollerball pen, a quite cheap one... it was free, got it from my dentist <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo--> and the paper im drawing on was also a gift <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
yeah, I was just gonna say, invest in some better art materials.. the difference will be immense. Also try different surfaces..to get a different outlook and mood. e.g.
Corrogated card...Its hard to draw on..but my Art teacher goes wild..
Watercolours with ink fineline..if you like detail..and using black ink..then this is your perfect solution. While the watercolours make a pleasing colourful picture..the ink creates detail on a huge scale. Lovely balance, especially for this type of drawing...the scope is huge!!!
etc etc.
Styles and materials can stretch the creativity boarders. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
It's because you post in every thread 50000x times <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
i think im gonna use only "simple" stuff... u know, something where u can draw anytime, anywhere i dislike everything else then pencils... i just cant use anything else <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
joda, omg! That's so nice! What filter is that? More more <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> I want that filter so I can try it.
omg thats a standard photoshop filter <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> in photoshop, go to: Filter->Artistic->Cutout
and there it is <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
i like it alot too <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
my new projects will be images with a background, and less use of reference
<!--QuoteBegin--jumpingjoda+Dec 22 2003, 06:54 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (jumpingjoda @ Dec 22 2003, 06:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> omg thats a standard photoshop filter <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> in photoshop, go to: Filter->Artistic->Cutout
and there it is <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
i like it alot too <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
my new projects will be images with a background, and less use of reference <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd--> Thanks <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
<!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> its really cool to give advice on something and then see someone improve like overnight. I hope you guys continue to grow artistically.
im doing it as best as i can, and thx to all that gave me cool advices! it helped alot <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> tomorow is the last day in school for me in this year, yeeeehaaaa! so im gona practise alot more
hope i will rise my drawing level <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
Looks like you are progressing well. Im chiming in late, but better late than never. I'll drop some advice as well, to build on what has already been said.
1. Killing trees will bennifit you. Keep drawing, nothing comes overnight. If you have no work to do in study hall, start drawing people around you.
2. If you have the extra cash, looking into investing in an anatomy for the artist book. This can be used as a reference when you are stuck or provide model for a character study.
3. If you are having problems with a pose or facial expression; use a mirror it will help you visualize it better.
There is not much to say that has not already been said. I would highly suggest you pick up the pencils that were previously sugested. Pick up a kneeded eraser as well, you can shape it to erase narrow sections of your work.
<!--QuoteBegin--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->2. If you have the extra cash, looking into investing in an anatomy for the artist book. This can be used as a reference when you are stuck or provide model for a character study.<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
i like that, sounds good, i will see where i can find it
Comments
a heavy marine dying/falling
<img src='http://mitglied.lycos.de/jumpingjoda/heavy.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
and again with my favorite filter <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
<img src='http://mitglied.lycos.de/jumpingjoda/heavy-filter.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
i would love to hear ur coments/critics, as usual <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
u think i drew him while he is standing? <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
this was my reference
<img src='http://mitglied.lycos.de/jumpingjoda/heavy-ref.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>
i cant change the death animation sry <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
Also, is that a biro / rollerball pen you're drawing with? I'd suggest against it really, the flow of ink from them tends to be sporadic at times and there's no room for creating any shapes with your linework. Try moving to a fine drawing pen.
well... i am drawing with the most minimal equipment
yep its a rollerball pen, a quite cheap one... it was free, got it from my dentist <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
and the paper im drawing on was also a gift <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
im gona buy today/tomorow some better stuff
Also try different surfaces..to get a different outlook and mood. e.g.
Corrogated card...Its hard to draw on..but my Art teacher goes wild..
Watercolours with ink fineline..if you like detail..and using black ink..then this is your perfect solution. While the watercolours make a pleasing colourful picture..the ink creates detail on a huge scale. Lovely balance, especially for this type of drawing...the scope is huge!!!
etc etc.
Styles and materials can stretch the creativity boarders. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
experiment.
*EDIT* Hey, I'm a queen now........****!
i dislike everything else then pencils... i just cant use anything else <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
max results with min material, this is my way
Keep it up!
Also, that Filter makes it look really cool!
in photoshop, go to:
Filter->Artistic->Cutout
and there it is <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
i like it alot too <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
my new projects will be images with a background, and less use of reference
in photoshop, go to:
Filter->Artistic->Cutout
and there it is <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
i like it alot too <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
my new projects will be images with a background, and less use of reference <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
Thanks <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
Vulgar: +1?
tomorow is the last day in school for me in this year, yeeeehaaaa! so im gona practise alot more
hope i will rise my drawing level <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
1. Killing trees will bennifit you. Keep drawing, nothing comes overnight. If you have no work to do in study hall, start drawing people around you.
2. If you have the extra cash, looking into investing in an anatomy for the artist book. This can be used as a reference when you are stuck or provide model for a character study.
3. If you are having problems with a pose or facial expression; use a mirror it will help you visualize it better.
There is not much to say that has not already been said. I would highly suggest you pick up the pencils that were previously sugested. Pick up a kneeded eraser as well, you can shape it to erase narrow sections of your work.
<!--QuoteBegin--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->2. If you have the extra cash, looking into investing in an anatomy for the artist book. This can be used as a reference when you are stuck or provide model for a character study.<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
i like that, sounds good, i will see where i can find it