Ns Comedic Flash Toon

Visual_MirageVisual_Mirage Join Date: 2003-05-01 Member: 15973Members
in Artwork Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">No popcorn included</div> Hey all,
I started using Flash MX about 2-3 weeks ago, i'm still vaguely learning it, so please excuse the crappyness of the cartoon (hehe)
Many of the sounds may seem out of place so uhh, excuse that too!

NOTE1: TURN VOLUME UP, Some sounds are quiet!
NOTE2: You may need Flash 6+ to view this?.. just try it out
NOTE3: File is 320kb, let the page load it if you're on slow dial up

Enjoy!

<a href='http://members.optushome.com.au/mmitsios/flash%20toons/nstoon.html' target='_blank'>Clicky Clicky here to watch!!!!!</a>
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  • FrickenMoronFrickenMoron Join Date: 2002-11-21 Member: 9498Members
    funny but it should have an ending :o
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  • JezpuhJezpuh Join Date: 2003-04-03 Member: 15157Banned
    Great <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • nightdragonnightdragon Join Date: 2003-01-05 Member: 11848Members, Constellation
    Wickid <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->

    ND
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  • LancedresLancedres Join Date: 2003-09-01 Member: 20458Members
    Dude that's awesome, i once tried to learn flash... i sucked at it so i quit... but oh well.

    Anyways, i think it's great nice job with the sound hehe. I want to see more of it <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> btw who's the voice of the marine?
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  • homerxhomerx Join Date: 2003-04-01 Member: 15094Members
    Awesome. <!--emo&::nerdy::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/nerd.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='nerd.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • JimmehJimmeh Join Date: 2003-08-24 Member: 20173Members, Constellation
    Quality
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  • BeastBeast Armonkyi Join Date: 2003-04-21 Member: 15731Members, Constellation
    Very funny, but it needs some kind of ending like others said <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • CoolCookieCooksCoolCookieCooks Pretty Girl Join Date: 2003-05-18 Member: 16446Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor, Constellation
    lol thats gd flash <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • sportysporty Join Date: 2003-06-29 Member: 17782Members
    funny indeed, i like the ns sounds in there <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • RPG_JssmfulhudRPG_Jssmfulhud Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 4006Members
    If you're a beginner, I can't say anything bad about the flash and especially not about the Onos animation. Very good! As for the ending, I think that no ending leaves you in a suspense of sort. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • AlignAlign Remain Calm Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 5216Forum Moderators, Constellation
    It's <b>great.</b>
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  • WurmspawnWurmspawn Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 19Members
    gj
    i really like the ending, or lack thereof...for a bit i thought something was going to happen when devour finished ~;o
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  • SudzzSudzz Join Date: 2003-08-01 Member: 18663Members, Constellation
    Haha, nice. Should have an ending <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • BogglesteinskyBogglesteinsky Join Date: 2002-12-24 Member: 11488Members
    very nice
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  • Owen1Owen1 Join Date: 2003-04-13 Member: 15457Members
    u should just have the onos crap sumthing at the end
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  • FixFix Join Date: 2003-09-28 Member: 21291Members
    dude have the guys say "alien sptted" as he's sitting in the onos. Well it would make me laugh anyways.
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  • CatCopCatCop Join Date: 2003-08-28 Member: 20296Members, Constellation
    Im gonna remake this and maybe add a few things.
    If your agianst this remake mirrage jsut say and ill stop.
    Ill post a screeny soon.
    (IF you have any good ideas mail em to me)
    Ill also give you credit for the idea.
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  • WilkinsWilkins Join Date: 2003-03-15 Member: 14556Members
    For the ending, it could be followed by "Move to your waypoint" and the WP being by the tape recorder or something. For timing, it'd most likely be 3-5 seconds after the onos eats him.

    Don't mind me, i'm on a caffine high so I can get homework done before I pass out from exhastion.
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  • Visual_MirageVisual_Mirage Join Date: 2003-05-01 Member: 15973Members
    hehehe! thanks for the great coments guys!!
    I just woke up, and teres 18 responses, was glad to read them all, let me try and answer some!!

    <!--QuoteBegin--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->Lancedres Posted: Sep 30 2003, 09:47 AM 
    ..."btw who's the voice of the marine?"<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    When he says "What the **** is that?", thats Joe Pesci! (you may remember him as the smaller thief from home alone!)

    <!--QuoteBegin--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->[DRS]Lt.S.Owen Posted: Sep 30 2003, 03:39 PM 
    u should just have the onos crap sumthing at the end<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    I was actually thinking of doing that! Either just a loud burp, or the marine tries to knife his way out, or he poops him out!, but.... i tell you that i will be making hopefuly another NS toon very soon <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    <!--QuoteBegin--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->Delta-Snipe Posted: Sep 30 2003, 05:46 PM 
    Im gonna remake this and maybe add a few things.
    If your agianst this remake mirrage jsut say and ill stop.
    Ill post a screeny soon.
    (IF you have any good ideas mail em to me)
    Ill also give you credit for the idea. <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Sure! I'd love to see this remade and have things added, mines a very crappy version that just is a way of me portraying my ideas!...in flash form! hehe

    <!--QuoteBegin--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->Wilkins Posted: Sep 30 2003, 07:09 PM 
    Don't mind me, i'm on a caffine high so I can get homework done before I pass out from exhastion.<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Ok! i wont mind you <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • CatCopCatCop Join Date: 2003-08-28 Member: 20296Members, Constellation
    Im not exactly the BEST animator ither.
    But ill give it a go.
    im about half way done (Not including sounds or touch ups)
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  • Visual_MirageVisual_Mirage Join Date: 2003-05-01 Member: 15973Members
    <in heroic, yet evil voice> "I HAVE STARTED A REVOLUTION !!!, HA! HA! HAAA!"
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  • LuKe-EnFoLuKe-EnFo Join Date: 2003-07-15 Member: 18165Members
    what can i say jas, youve done it again <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • Sir_RobinSir_Robin Join Date: 2003-05-26 Member: 16724Members
    did u use that "hmm" from DN?
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  • DoombringerDoombringer Join Date: 2002-11-15 Member: 8679Members, Constellation
    Here's your ending..

    After the Onos swallows, fade to black, then fade in to the Onos stomach image (from when you're being digested in game). Roll credits. Insert zany music <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->

    Credits end, fade to black as the "marine dying" sound plays (same sound heard when you die inside an Onos stomach). Done!
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  • CaLFiNCaLFiN Join Date: 2002-11-04 Member: 6909Members
    I think it should zoom into the Onos' stomach where the marine buys a little house, gets married, has several children and lives happily-ever-after.
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  • FunkyFungusFunkyFungus Join Date: 2003-09-09 Member: 20691Members
    Enjoy!

    Clicky Clicky here to watch!!!!!

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    <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> sweeeeeeeet
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  • GeminosityGeminosity :3 Join Date: 2003-09-08 Member: 20667Members
    there's no clicky <!--emo&:0--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wow.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wow.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • ShloomShloom Join Date: 2002-07-25 Member: 997Members
    I was staring at the onos for about 10 minutes befor I relised nothing was going to happen
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  • DelarosaDelarosa Naturally Custom Join Date: 2002-11-29 Member: 10214Members, NS1 Playtester
    I commend you, FlashMX is by FAR, the hardest version of Flash to animate in.

    i have tried flash 4, 5 and mx, my personal preference is flash5...


    except for missing the whole "principle's of animation" deal (technical animation execution) you did an awsome job...
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  • QuaunautQuaunaut The longest seven days in history... Join Date: 2003-03-21 Member: 14759Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    As said before, ending needed(to let us know when its done...I waited for a good 15 seconds there!), but otherwise, great. Me laugh hard!
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