Unknown Enemy: Chapter 19

RobRob Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
in Fan-Fiction Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">Hell's Gates</div> Here's Chapter 19. Let me know what you think!

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  • ScytheScythe Join Date: 2002-01-25 Member: 46NS1 Playtester, Forum Moderators, Constellation, Reinforced - Silver
    Now <b>that's</b> more like it.

    My only complaint about the last couple chapters was the scarcity of action.

    I know, I know, you've gotta have plot and character development but action seems to be more enjoyable.

    /me chews fingers off *

    C'mon chapter 20!

    --Scythe--
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  • SpecterSpecter Join Date: 2003-02-05 Member: 13159Members
    great work! now i get the cutted wires and the slaughterd gypsy <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> go on like that and more fighting <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
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  • realityisdeadrealityisdead Employed by Raven Software after making ns_nothing Join Date: 2002-01-26 Member: 94Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor
    Again, this one is really just incredible, rob.

    It comes out very powerful and aggressive, a lot like the previous "wow" battles of hera.

    Keep it up, can't wait to read more. :)
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  • bobthemagicalfishbobthemagicalfish Join Date: 2002-11-03 Member: 6007Members
    edited February 2003
    ***SPOILER***


    <!--QuoteBegin--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->
    Turns out that alien played right into my hands, too. Did you actually think that little…little,” Victor stumbled, trying to remember the name of the alien that jumped down the ventilation shaft.

    Skulk?” Lionz said sarcastically.

    “I guess you could call it that – I call ‘em Bobs,” Victor replied quickly. “Did you really think it was that thing that took the lights out? Please.”

    <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->

    heheeh i feel loved <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> bob the skull <!--emo&::skulk::--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html/emoticons/skulk.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='skulk.gif'><!--endemo--> *rawr*
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  • RobRob Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
    Thanks all!
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  • Llama_KillerLlama_Killer Join Date: 2002-07-30 Member: 1029Members
    YAY your my hero! Me wuvs it! i wonder if that mine trick would work in game...

    /me goes over to Bast DIE ONOS SCUM!!! ouch...

    no it dont work...
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  • GwahirGwahir Join Date: 2002-04-24 Member: 513Members, Constellation
    ****spoiler****


    Maybe you could have them toss Victor's body at them next chapter <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->

    Aside from a few tiny spelling errors (loose for lose, through for threw), well done, and thank you for turning at least one mystic happening into a logical side-plot
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  • bobthemagicalfishbobthemagicalfish Join Date: 2002-11-03 Member: 6007Members
    <!--QuoteBegin--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Maybe you could have them toss Victor's body at them next chapter <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->

    hehe they stick expolseive in it and leave it as bait and boom all aliens die muahah
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  • xectxect Join Date: 2002-11-24 Member: 9807Members
    Nice, real good stuff. Waiting for the 20eth.
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  • SpecterSpecter Join Date: 2003-02-05 Member: 13159Members
    *waiting for 20th part*

    give it to me! give it! please! please! please!
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