Unknown Enemy: Chapter 19

Rob

<div class="IPBDescription">Hell's Gates</div> Here's Chapter 19. Let me know what you think!

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Scythe

Now <b>that's</b> more like it.

My only complaint about the last couple chapters was the scarcity of action.

I know, I know, you've gotta have plot and character development but action seems to be more enjoyable.

/me chews fingers off *

C'mon chapter 20!

--Scythe--

Specter

great work! now i get the cutted wires and the slaughterd gypsy <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> go on like that and more fighting <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->

realityisdead

Again, this one is really just incredible, rob.

It comes out very powerful and aggressive, a lot like the previous "wow" battles of hera.

Keep it up, can't wait to read more. :)

bobthemagicalfish

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Turns out that alien played right into my hands, too. Did you actually think that little…little,” Victor stumbled, trying to remember the name of the alien that jumped down the ventilation shaft.

Skulk?” Lionz said sarcastically.

“I guess you could call it that – I call ‘em Bobs,” Victor replied quickly. “Did you really think it was that thing that took the lights out? Please.”

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heheeh i feel loved <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> bob the skull <!--emo&::skulk::--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html/emoticons/skulk.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='skulk.gif'><!--endemo--> *rawr*

Rob

Thanks all!

Llama_Killer

YAY your my hero! Me wuvs it! i wonder if that mine trick would work in game...

/me goes over to Bast DIE ONOS SCUM!!! ouch...

no it dont work...

Gwahir

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Maybe you could have them toss Victor's body at them next chapter <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->

Aside from a few tiny spelling errors (loose for lose, through for threw), well done, and thank you for turning at least one mystic happening into a logical side-plot

bobthemagicalfish

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hehe they stick expolseive in it and leave it as bait and boom all aliens die muahah

xect

Nice, real good stuff. Waiting for the 20eth.

Specter

*waiting for 20th part*

give it to me! give it! please! please! please!