Black Ops Assassin

BallistoBallisto Join Date: 2003-05-19 Member: 16503Members
<div class="IPBDescription">The result of extra time on a test</div> Did this in class on the back of a test I had extra time on... so a lot of text and stuff show through the paper. The grenade in his hand (that's what that is!) is a little off, and the sniper rifle is too plain. Didn't have a handy model. Go ahead and photoshop the hell outta this, colors, w/e. I think it'd make a good wallpaper if touched up. A lot of white space, with this guy on the left.

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  • RaVeRaVe Join Date: 2003-06-20 Member: 17538Members
    He needs more height!

    That said, it's a really nice picture though. Just a few proportional anomalies, like the hip being a bit too....high.
  • TychoCelchuuuTychoCelchuuu Anememone Join Date: 2002-03-23 Member: 345Members
    His proportions look fine, except his left shoulder guard is sort of large. Nice drawing.
  • taboofirestaboofires Join Date: 2002-11-24 Member: 9853Members
    He's six heads high, which is why he looks a little odd. Not that it wouldn't be to the advantage of an assassin to be a small target...

    If you lengthen the thing on the end of the barrel, it will look more like a silencer (I'm guessing that's what it is). If it's just for gas expansion then you should probably exaggerate it more so we can tell.
  • SkySky Join Date: 2004-04-23 Member: 28131Members
    I've tried to read the background text for like 10 minutes.....sad I know.

    gj on the drawing though
  • RaVeRaVe Join Date: 2003-06-20 Member: 17538Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-TychoCelchuuu+Sep 6 2004, 09:26 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (TychoCelchuuu @ Sep 6 2004, 09:26 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> His proportions look fine, except his left shoulder guard is sort of large. Nice drawing. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    *points to hip area*
    *points to length of arms*

    Okay, now stand and place your hands at your side. Now compare length.

    I still think it's nice though <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • SRT_RabbSRT_Rabb Join Date: 2004-01-31 Member: 25808Members
    edited September 2004
    looks good
    but heres a small crit need more contrast <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • BallistoBallisto Join Date: 2003-05-19 Member: 16503Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-SRT Rabb+Sep 8 2004, 12:35 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (SRT Rabb @ Sep 8 2004, 12:35 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> looks good
    but heres a small crit need more contrast <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Bah humbug! Stupid scanners!

    Thx for all the tips guys. This is actually a pretty old picture... but I'm still not the best at proportions. Getting a lot better though!

    As for silencers and gas expansion... I could use some help learning to draw guns.
  • SRT_RabbSRT_Rabb Join Date: 2004-01-31 Member: 25808Members
    edited September 2004
    talk to me on AIM or something I'll be glad to help put another artist
    /offtopic check my new post out its fabulous

    [edit]
    aim- dubya tee eff m8
  • Fog_cartoonsFog_cartoons Join Date: 2003-09-08 Member: 20658Members
    Just cover up everything but his legs, then reveal everything and see how out of scale it is. Im not saying that the actual quality isn't good
  • PriestPriest Join Date: 2003-01-08 Member: 12042Members
    edited September 2004
    had a look see at it... edited it and retouched some parts... might go on to color it just for giggles
    EDIT; dont mind the eyes though, was a test of sorts <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • BulletHeadBulletHead Join Date: 2004-07-22 Member: 30049Members
    Woah... it's a GORILA assassign XD *due to how the arms are down halway the legs*
  • DragonMechDragonMech Join Date: 2003-09-19 Member: 21023Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    Definetly not someone you'd want to run into in a dark alley. Good job.
  • Crm_GreyCrm_Grey Join Date: 2003-01-05 Member: 11890Members
    legs look buff... well.. body proportion is wrong, but hey, cartoons are meant to be like that..
  • ThantosThantos Join Date: 2004-05-26 Member: 28940Members, Reinforced - Supporter, Reinforced - Diamond
    edited September 2004
    <a href='http://koti.mbnet.fi/thantos/Kuvia/omaa%20saatoa/omaa%20sahellysta/halo.jpg' target='_blank'>http://koti.mbnet.fi/thantos/Kuvia/omaa%20...llysta/halo.jpg</a>

    something what i created <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/confused-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    Halo <!--emo&::marine::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/marine.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='marine.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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