Ties Of War - Updated.

kallethkalleth Join Date: 2002-11-01 Member: 2574Members
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<div class="IPBDescription">12 chapters instead of just 4..</div> Here we go..
First NS fanfic, loosely based upon the NS universe. There's 12 chapters here, but it's nowhere near finished. I've got so many ideas in my head that i could take it to around about 80 chapters easily (but i won't <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->)

Will write the next few chapters when i have time, but for now:

<a href='http://kalleth.2tone-dev.com/ns_fanfic.htm' target='_blank'>click here for the story</a>
(as it stands, 7,071 words.)
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  • SpacerSpacer Invented dogs Join Date: 2003-05-02 Member: 16008Members
    i gotta say that was a very cool story, although the cliffhanger at the very end was a little wrong, "the world exploded" just doesn't seem right. I doubt anyone could survive 5 years in a room, even if it had unlimited food and drink, also it seems most unlikely that there would be a room with a food/drink replicator and consoles uncharted on the ship, only reachable through a vent duct :S

    otherwise though, that story was most excellent
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  • kallethkalleth Join Date: 2002-11-01 Member: 2574Members
    thanks for reading <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->.

    As to your question about the guy in the room.... You have to realise the story isn't finished yet. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    That's all i'll say.
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  • Jean_Luc_PicardJean_Luc_Picard Join Date: 2003-02-03 Member: 13051Members
    HOLY HELL! This is NOT the thing to read at 2 am!\\


    I'm NEVER sleeping tonight... GOOD JOB DUDE! I LOVE IT~!
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  • AbixAbix Join Date: 2003-12-14 Member: 24359Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    :o

    Nice story. Nice writing. Keep up the good work.
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  • kallethkalleth Join Date: 2002-11-01 Member: 2574Members
    ty4comments guys <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> much appreciated and i'm glad you enjoyed it
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  • ParhelionParhelion Join Date: 2003-05-29 Member: 16821Members, NS1 Playtester
    Damn, nice story <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> Keep it up.

    You know...I think I read this before, at least up to the fades dying part - you posted this a while ago? Good to see you taking the time to keep going with it <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • kallethkalleth Join Date: 2002-11-01 Member: 2574Members
    yeah, i did post the first 4 chapters a while ago... long time ago though now <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    Kinda found it sitting on my laptop hdd and continued it for something to do.
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  • hidden_snperhidden_snper Join Date: 2004-03-18 Member: 27412Members
    really nice story, the only part i didn't like was the fact that it ended. write those 80 chapters man!
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  • CyndaneCyndane Join Date: 2003-11-15 Member: 22913Members
    That was very well written... I can't wait to read the other 72 chapters. :-)
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