Back Ground Story For NS2
Annihilatorza
Join Date: 2007-01-07 Member: 59490Members
Join Date: 2007-01-07 Member: 59490Members
Hey guys I was busy with my new level called Thorius Base for NS2 and iI came up with this back ground for it tell me what you think this is a rough intial draft.
Doing this help come up with ideas and concepts for my level, I move from this to sketching the level from a top down view then move onto a Isometric view of the imprtant rooms.
Sorry for the bad topic I cant change it.
Marines
Story Line
07:45
Your Attention Marines
We received the information that you are about to see at 04:00 this morning and it has been classified top secret.
The Thorius base has been compromised and has fallen into enemy hands.
Your mission will be to secure the facility and if not destroy it by any means necessary.
You will undergo new experimental treatment called NIK which means Neural Impacted Knowledge that will equip your team with the knowledge for the new equipment for this mission, the risk is extremely high but if the enemy gains access to the Thorius main Computer that contains Earth Coordinates and the Jump Beacons, It will only be a matter of time before Earth will be lost.
The last message was badly garbled and the analyst’s are still busy trying to make out more information as we speak, standard encryption on all military information is in place
However it will be only a matter of time before they break into the room and crack the encryption and gain access to the data you must stop this from happening at all costs.
Your landing zone, while the initial site is not considered hot it will quickly become so.
The messages have confirmed our worst fears that the “alien race’ are on the move and aggressively expanding there territory.
Previous encounters with this alien menace had exactly 1 survivor
Srgt McNicolas
The cost was high but we did learn some of there weaknesses, that’s why you got some new toys to use against these scum
First up is the new HMG. Your standard nano’s aint gonna know ish about these babies therefore you are all getting a brand new upgrade
This little peashooter got the recoil of a fart and the stopping power of a tank . You ain’t getting anything better than that anytime soon
Then there is your new home away from home. The Advanced Combat Suit, this thing nearly thinks for you and for some of you that is an improvement. It makes you stronger ,faster and a whole lot meaner. The information the NIK will give you is only the beginning by the end of this trip you will know everything about these suits You will know it or you will die .
These toys don’t make you invincible. It just give you a even chance
There might be some new stuff on the base that haven’t been passed back here yet. Another reason for us sending you there. The research there needs to be captured intact. Anything you find in working order use it.
You will be on your own until we can get some relieve organized this side. There is no option for retreat and the aliens DOES NOT give quarter.
After Dismissal fall in at the medic bay so that they can give you your new nano packages and run you through the NIK. We leave here in 48 hours. And you got 3 weeks to learn your suit systems and the guns
We will not Fail
Dismissed.
<img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/wink-fix.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=";)" border="0" alt="wink-fix.gif" />
Doing this help come up with ideas and concepts for my level, I move from this to sketching the level from a top down view then move onto a Isometric view of the imprtant rooms.
Sorry for the bad topic I cant change it.
Marines
Story Line
07:45
Your Attention Marines
We received the information that you are about to see at 04:00 this morning and it has been classified top secret.
The Thorius base has been compromised and has fallen into enemy hands.
Your mission will be to secure the facility and if not destroy it by any means necessary.
You will undergo new experimental treatment called NIK which means Neural Impacted Knowledge that will equip your team with the knowledge for the new equipment for this mission, the risk is extremely high but if the enemy gains access to the Thorius main Computer that contains Earth Coordinates and the Jump Beacons, It will only be a matter of time before Earth will be lost.
The last message was badly garbled and the analyst’s are still busy trying to make out more information as we speak, standard encryption on all military information is in place
However it will be only a matter of time before they break into the room and crack the encryption and gain access to the data you must stop this from happening at all costs.
Your landing zone, while the initial site is not considered hot it will quickly become so.
The messages have confirmed our worst fears that the “alien race’ are on the move and aggressively expanding there territory.
Previous encounters with this alien menace had exactly 1 survivor
Srgt McNicolas
The cost was high but we did learn some of there weaknesses, that’s why you got some new toys to use against these scum
First up is the new HMG. Your standard nano’s aint gonna know ish about these babies therefore you are all getting a brand new upgrade
This little peashooter got the recoil of a fart and the stopping power of a tank . You ain’t getting anything better than that anytime soon
Then there is your new home away from home. The Advanced Combat Suit, this thing nearly thinks for you and for some of you that is an improvement. It makes you stronger ,faster and a whole lot meaner. The information the NIK will give you is only the beginning by the end of this trip you will know everything about these suits You will know it or you will die .
These toys don’t make you invincible. It just give you a even chance
There might be some new stuff on the base that haven’t been passed back here yet. Another reason for us sending you there. The research there needs to be captured intact. Anything you find in working order use it.
You will be on your own until we can get some relieve organized this side. There is no option for retreat and the aliens DOES NOT give quarter.
After Dismissal fall in at the medic bay so that they can give you your new nano packages and run you through the NIK. We leave here in 48 hours. And you got 3 weeks to learn your suit systems and the guns
We will not Fail
Dismissed.
<img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/wink-fix.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=";)" border="0" alt="wink-fix.gif" />
Comments
Plus better to use a positive expression like 'we will succeed' instead of a negative one 'we will not fail'.