ns - monster

DeepShadowsDeepShadows Join Date: 2003-02-11 Member: 13408Members, Constellation
edited November 2006 in Fan-Fiction Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">stuff nobody's read</div>Due to being unable to access tripod, I was never able to post the current story location. I haven't worked on it in a long time....

For those who have NOT read it, the story was written back during a patch up to 3.0 I believe... I might be wrong. Point is, the Kharaa tec tree made a huge turn and the story was sort of meant as an expo for it.

anyhow, the link:

<a href="http://www.monkeysociety.com/Monster/Index.htm" target="_blank">http://www.monkeysociety.com/Monster/Index.htm</a>

I miss having feedback.

Comments

  • BadMouthBadMouth It ceases to be exclusive when you can have a custom member titl Join Date: 2004-05-21 Member: 28815Members
    I remember monster! It was amongst the best fan-fics around and one of my favourites. deepshadows, u r a terrific reader. im going to read it all over again now.
  • Soul_RiderSoul_Rider Mod Bean Join Date: 2004-06-19 Member: 29388Members, Constellation, Squad Five Blue
    Thank you DeepShadows..

    I have reformatted and lost all my links..

    I know what i shall be reading all afternoon at work...

    Have you written any new chapters?
  • DeepShadowsDeepShadows Join Date: 2003-02-11 Member: 13408Members, Constellation
    I've half of one I haven't seen about finishing. The updates have been half years to years, so there you go <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/tounge.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=":p" border="0" alt="tounge.gif" /> I was considering revamping the whole thing though... rereading it I found a lot of errors/immaturities in the writing. Mostly when it comes to the dialogue....

    Anyhow I'll gander through it again and see if I can't finish the thing.
  • Soul_RiderSoul_Rider Mod Bean Join Date: 2004-06-19 Member: 29388Members, Constellation, Squad Five Blue
    I'm planning on re-working my own Brobdanagian story, although i lost the entire file, including all the future chapters i had written, and all my re-written earlier chapters, so all i have left is what i managed to slavage from my forum posts here.

    It was a great idea, but i think may have bene a bit too ambitious for a first time story!!
  • White_KnellWhite_Knell Join Date: 2006-12-01 Member: 58807Members
    A truly fantastic read. It so deftly recreates the <i>feel</i> of Natural Selection that I cannot help but be reminded of my own panic-stricken first experiences as a marine within the game.

    Please continue.
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