Suggestions?

SwiftSwift Lost Keys Join Date: 2005-02-19 Member: 41683Members, Constellation
<div class="IPBDescription">(Not NS related</div> If this is in the wrong froum, please move it ( not delete).

<a href='http://img180.echo.cx/my.php?image=map10ep.jpg' target='_blank'><img src='http://img180.echo.cx/img180/5351/map10ep.th.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' /></a>

This is my first map. ever.

I would like a few suggestions.

also, how would i have triggered events? (player walks into a zone and something blows up, for example.)

I am finally getting into mapping and would like any type of responses.

Comments

  • aeroripperaeroripper Join Date: 2005-02-25 Member: 42471NS1 Playtester, Forum Moderators, Constellation
    edited April 2005
    <a href='http://www.hl2world.com/bbs/beginner-mapping-help-vf51.html' target='_blank'>http://www.hl2world.com/bbs/beginner-mapping-help-vf51.html</a>

    those guys know everything about hl2 mapping
  • moultanomoultano Creator of ns_shiva. Join Date: 2002-12-14 Member: 10806Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor, Constellation, NS2 Playtester, Squad Five Blue, Reinforced - Shadow, WC 2013 - Gold, NS2 Community Developer, Pistachionauts
    first suggestion. Use lighting.
  • SwiftSwift Lost Keys Join Date: 2005-02-19 Member: 41683Members, Constellation
    If you noticed, i don't have a roof yet. I am not done, but yes, I do realize that i will need lighting..... thanks.
  • Lt_GravityLt_Gravity Join Date: 2003-04-28 Member: 15909Members
    than buy a roof <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
    seriously... erm? do you want to show us your first steps in a 3D editor?
    doesnt belong in this forum, doesnt belong to ns, doesnt belong to hl1. so why did you post it here? Im just curious.
  • SwiftSwift Lost Keys Join Date: 2005-02-19 Member: 41683Members, Constellation
    A map forum so I suppose people that map are aquanted with the hammer and could give me suggestions without flame.
  • ThaldarinThaldarin Alonzi&#33; Join Date: 2003-07-15 Member: 18173Members, Constellation
    For Half-Life 2 mapping try the following for better feedback.

    <a href='http://www.snarkpit.net' target='_blank'>http://www.snarkpit.net</a>
    <a href='http://www.interlopers.net' target='_blank'>http://www.interlopers.net</a>
  • moultanomoultano Creator of ns_shiva. Join Date: 2002-12-14 Member: 10806Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor, Constellation, NS2 Playtester, Squad Five Blue, Reinforced - Shadow, WC 2013 - Gold, NS2 Community Developer, Pistachionauts
    edited April 2005
    Don't take offense, but it looks like you are more at the read-another-tutorial level than the critique level at the moment. There isn't much in the way of suggestions we can give. We don't know the purpose of the map, the intent of the map, or even what you are going for in the shots. Get something that has lighting at least.

    The general consensus around here is that its only really worth posting screenshots when at the very least its compilable, and preferably when it has started to look pretty good.

    I understand the excitement of posting something new that you've made, but there isn't really much we can tell you until you have more done. Come back with more, then we'll critique it. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    Happy mapping.
  • SwiftSwift Lost Keys Join Date: 2005-02-19 Member: 41683Members, Constellation
    Alright, thanks. I will work on it.

    It's a level for a mod.. uh.. me and a couple of friends to work on.
  • Lt_GravityLt_Gravity Join Date: 2003-04-28 Member: 15909Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-Swift+Apr 25 2005, 03:15 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Swift @ Apr 25 2005, 03:15 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> A map forum so I suppose people that map are aquanted with the hammer and could give me suggestions without flame. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    its called "Natural Selection -> Mapping Forum".

    so where is the hive? where is the marinestart? where is anything related to ns???

    and even if: this goes into the "Mapping Help"-forum. you arent new here, you should know that <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    good luck with your mod. may it NOT die like some other hl2 mod projects.
  • SwiftSwift Lost Keys Join Date: 2005-02-19 Member: 41683Members, Constellation
    edited April 2005
    Gravity. Read the subtopic.

    If you do not like the fact that it is not related to NS, then you don;t have to post here. I am very grateful for all suggestions, but I don't need reminding that this is not a NS map.

    I am new to mapping as you know, and so, new to this particular forum.
  • SwiftspearSwiftspear Custim tital Join Date: 2003-10-29 Member: 22097Members
    edited April 2005
    swift: you haven't been around the mapping forum long, so let me explain how it works. No one posts ANYTHING except for NS map release or NS map WIP threads in the main or else the goblins come and use magic trogan attacks to put leaks in all our maps when we aren't looking. Clearly you can see that that is the reason all the mappers are so anal about this being in the wrong forum. After all when goblins are on the attack you don't have to be <b>A MOD TO TELL A POSTER WHAT IS A FRIGGING APPROPRIATE POST OR NOT.</b>
  • DarkATiDarkATi Revelation 22:17 Join Date: 2003-06-20 Member: 17532Members, Reinforced - Shadow
    <!--QuoteBegin-Swiftspear+Apr 26 2005, 08:06 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Swiftspear @ Apr 26 2005, 08:06 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> swift: you haven't been around the mapping forum long, so let me explain how it works. No one posts ANYTHING except for NS map release or NS map WIP threads in the main or else the goblins come and use magic trogan attacks to put leaks in all our maps when we aren't looking. Clearly you can see that that is the reason all the mappers are so anal about this being in the wrong forum. After all when goblins are on the attack you don't have to be <b>A MOD TO TELL A POSTER WHAT IS A FRIGGING APPROPRIATE POST OR NOT.</b> <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Ignore swift... er, swift. We're getting him help. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    You should check out <a href='http://www.vlatitude.com/' target='_blank'>the 69th Vlatitude</a> those guys tutorials helped me out when I was just getting started.

    It looks like you're doing pretty good for a newbie, keep up the good work!

    ~ DarkATi
  • Lt_GravityLt_Gravity Join Date: 2003-04-28 Member: 15909Members
    run vhe4.0 via shortcut and disable updates... now I know why the new editor sucks <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    this tutorial might be the pretty helpful, thats right. I like the comparison to the vhe 3.5.
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