Wootage

BelgarionBelgarion Join Date: 2002-07-19 Member: 973Members
<div class="IPBDescription">decent web site</div> Well, I bunkered down and created something worthwhile. My first attempt at a proper website.

<a href='http://belg.thezazi.net/main/' target='_blank'>http://belg.thezazi.net/main/</a>

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  • EplekongenEplekongen Join Date: 2002-11-16 Member: 8915Members
    Ok, I'll just ge right to the point.

    What I think needs tweeking/fixing/overhauling:

    -The link texts on the left, ALL link text should be of same font, size and color.
    -The border that follows around the two boxes (main text area box and link/header area box):
    -They should be worked on, you should probably try and make them thinner or more discreet in some manner, my advice would be to make them thinner (3-5px width) or/and lessen the 3D effect on the two lines.
    -Under the links the border of the link area box stops but the main area box continues, it gives the impression of badly placed boxes. I would try doing a more natural trancendence to the black background (simple fading or an image of something happening to the border (breaking/falling apart/rusting)). Personally i would have just continued the two boxes down to the bottom of the screen so they would always have the same length, or i would have dropped the box around the link text (the last one may be a bit too drastical).
    -The image on the header should have a better text, The current one does'nt fit as well and it is hard to read (not direcly difficult to read, but harder than nessecary, the title should always be obvious without looking too dramatical (NO NEON LETTERS TAKING UP HALF THE PAGE))
    -The image on the header should also fade better into the links box, just looks too fast and baly worked out.

    Well yeah, you didn't directly asc for help on it but it's the only way I'll feel useful posting here <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' /><!--endemo--> Sorry for being such a critic, hope it helps. And everything I say are things I believe would be nice, it's your choice in the end.


    Lol, I need to take it easy on the critics, bah! It's all constructive! <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo--> Take it or leave it. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • SpacerSpacer Invented dogs Join Date: 2003-05-02 Member: 16008Members
    It does not compare to the power and the glory of the mapping websites I have constructed.
  • BelgarionBelgarion Join Date: 2002-07-19 Member: 973Members
    pfff. it's my first time, give me a break. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
    I do appreciate the input Eplekongen. better than some others i've heard. *cough SPACER cough* .. excuse me. i seem to have a cough recently. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • SpacerSpacer Invented dogs Join Date: 2003-05-02 Member: 16008Members
    YOU WANT SOME INPUT HUH WELL I WILL GIVE YOU SOME INPUT... RIGHT INTO THE GROUND!

    I like how you've kept a theme throughout the pages by just changing the screenshot in the menu. The only thing I'd say would be REMOVE THAT GOD AWFUL ANIME in the first page, it looks really uncool compared to the other pages :\.
  • BelgarionBelgarion Join Date: 2002-07-19 Member: 973Members
    omg! How dare ye mock the most beloved Faye Valentine! I'm glad you like the rest of it though. That seems to be the best part of it. I'm definetly keeping everyone's (even spacers) comments in mind for the next iteration though, whenever that is. I seem to not have the time or inclination to fix it right now.

    Btw Eple, if I knew how to put a text box or something similar to what most people put in for "news", I would probably do that. ^_~
  • EplekongenEplekongen Join Date: 2002-11-16 Member: 8915Members
    <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' /><!--endemo--> those text boxes are most of the time just tables with rows and collums filled with either colors or images to make a border and the main box in the middle for the text. If you can make the rest out on your own
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