My Flash Thing..

antifreezeantifreeze The guy with the goods! Join Date: 2003-05-12 Member: 16232Members, Constellation
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<div class="IPBDescription">What i created for uni.</div> For uni i have to create a flash application advertising a mobile phone, only a prototype though not a fully fledged app like on the nokia site. I'm only year 1 so don't expect alot. I have come to the evaulation chunk of the documentation and want some second oppinions from people who will say what they think! Ok, maybe not that brutal.

<a href='http://www.hawxby.com/stuff/ica/' target='_blank'>My Flash Thing</a>

Cheers
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  • jumpingjodajumpingjoda Join Date: 2003-12-14 Member: 24367Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    I think you should use real pictures of that phone, I also found a typo (calculater).
    Man, what a whicked earth you have there <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    There is not much to explore, but it's ok.
    Did you use action scripting or just tweening? Not that it matters, i just wanted to know <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    Tip: speed up the menu, the visitors don't want to wait for things, by making all of you animation more quick will add more life to the whole thing. Just incrasing the speed will make the site even less content rich, so you will need more animations probably.

    I'm not a pro, just my 2 pance.
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  • antifreezeantifreeze The guy with the goods&#33; Join Date: 2003-05-12 Member: 16232Members, Constellation
    Cheers.

    The real images thing i agree with but in the specification the only images allowed are flash vector graphics. I had to import images then trace around them then delete the images again, a total pain.

    The intro is in the spec too. It must have a short introduction sequence which introduces the phone.

    The app is tweens and action script.
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  • AbraAbra Would you kindly Join Date: 2003-08-17 Member: 19870Members
    uuuh flashy!


    couldnt have done it better myself. one thing though, the intro needs more frames ei. quicker animations... something

    great work!
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  • BathroomMonkeyBathroomMonkey Feces-hurling Monkey Boy Join Date: 2002-01-25 Member: 78Members, Retired Developer, NS1 Playtester, Contributor
    edited January 2005
    24+ fps is your friend <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • AbraAbra Would you kindly Join Date: 2003-08-17 Member: 19870Members
    <!--QuoteBegin-BathroomMonkey+Jan 19 2005, 09:56 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (BathroomMonkey @ Jan 19 2005, 09:56 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> 24+ fps is your friend <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    right you are
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