Ns Poem

RueRue Join Date: 2002-10-21 Member: 1564Members
edited January 2005 in Fan-Fiction Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">=]</div> I was doing some work for my DA account (check my sig =] ) and I found an old poem I wrote for NS. Hope you enjoy it =]
The resources must flow is a ref to Dune if you havent seen the movie or played the game <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

"Nsplayer build that tower" he heard over the comms
The player looked at a fountain of bright white light
As he moved close a sharp bang gave him a fright
A tower of steel fell from the roof
Four legs shot out and held the tower up strong
The player moved near but he felt something was wrong
"Need back-up" he called but no answer came back
As he looked round, the tower stood still in the dark
The comms roared into life "Get back to base its under attack!"

The player stood firm, as if he had dreamed the plea
He moved to the tower with a welder and LMG
Got out his tools and begin to build
Nuts and bolts went flying, but he mission was clear
A weld here and there brought the tower to life!
"No....portals left...player..base" crackled over coms
The player brought out his gun and got off his knees
"Its Time To dance" The player heard, with a chukle he froze
He looked at his gun and in red flashing lights it said "Low Ammo"
But the player didn?t care because 'The Resources Must Flow...'


  • Fire_EelFire_Eel Join Date: 2003-08-19 Member: 19950Members
    nice poem to describe newbies.

    Some parts didn't seem to rhyme, but I think that's okay <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
  • MEKUDpalindromeMEKUDpalindrome Join Date: 2005-01-10 Member: 34546Members
    <b>I love poetry... <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' /><!--endemo--> - its so beautiful...... <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo--> </b>

    Here's another of mine:

    NSPlayer lies awake,
    too much NS, too much Quake.
    Nightmare of his future hell,
    If he's to make the CPL
    NSPlayer starts to shake.

    Getting up, from his bed,
    he puts his helmet on his head
    Loads up windows, Steam won't load
    He suddenly has an episode
    He decides to go ouside instead.

    Outside he sees a commander chair
    sees 1 skulk, no 2 - a pair
    But these can talk
    On two legs walk
    Takes out a knife, he doesn't care.

    Into their flesh he pushes the blade
    Less impressive than killing a fade
    Their bodies fall
    Blood on the wall
    NSPlayer wakes to find the mess he's made

    Both his siblings he must mourn
    His parents hearts have been torn
    Admitting nothing to himself
    He puts his CPL dreams back on the shelf
    And returns to his hardcore online porn.


    A tragic tale based loosely on my own personal experiences of NS.
  • AmbrosekAmbrosek Join Date: 2003-12-06 Member: 24018Members
    Nice one man.
    Really fun
  • That_Annoying_KidThat_Annoying_Kid Sire of Titles Join Date: 2003-03-01 Member: 14175Members, Constellation
    "As he moved close a sharp bang gave him a fright
    A tower of steel fell from the roof
    Four legs shot out and held the tower up strong"

    the middle line seems akward to me for some reason <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    best ns poem evar? NIGHT BEFORE KHARAASMAS!

    oh and if you want more NS poems, check the directory I know we should have a bunch there
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