New Song Parody (wip)

SDJason

<div class="IPBDescription">ode to the commander sung to Celine Dion</div> MY song title: "Because you commed me"

Sung to Celine Dion's "Because you loved me...

For all those times you stood by me
For all the aliens that you made me see
For all the guns that you brought to my life
For all the hives that you made die
For every dream you made come true
For all the love I found in you
I'll be forever thankful to you
You're the one who held us up
Never let us fall
You're the one who saw us through, through it all

You gave me meds when I was weak
You read my mind when I couldn't speak
You were my eyes when I couldn't see
You saw the grunt that was in me
Dropped me Jet-Packs when I couldnt reach
You gave me guns 'cause you believed
We won the game today
Because you trust me

You gave me wings and made me fly
You dropped a phase to take out the hive
I lost my gun, you gave it back to me
You said no game was out of reach
You stood by me and I stood tall
We watched in tears, the hive will fall
I’m grateful for each day you commed me
Maybe I don't know that much
But I know this much is true
I was blessed because I was commed by you

You gave me meds when I was weak
You read my mind when I couldn't speak
You were my eyes when I couldn't see
You saw the grunt that was in me
Dropped me Jet-Packs when I couldnt reach
You gave me guns 'cause you believed
We won the game today
Because you trust me

You were always there for me
Dropping meds to carry me
Off to the hive, I know I wont die, when you are there
You've been my inspiration
Of all the things we did to lose
The game was a better game because of you

You gave me meds when I was weak
You read my mind when I couldn't speak
You were my eyes when I couldn't see
You saw the grunt that was in me
Dropped me Jet-Packs when I couldnt reach
You gave me guns 'cause you believed
We won the game today
Because you trust me

You gave me meds when I was weak
You read my mind when I couldn't speak
You were my eyes when I couldn't see
You saw the grunt that was in me
Dropped me Jet-Packs when I couldn’t reach
You gave me guns 'cause you believed
We won the game today
Because you trust me

We won the game today
Because you commed me



This is a WIP, and im very open to suggestions for lyrical changes, as some of them dont quite fit right yet... as soon as i can get it better i wanna sing it and put it to backroud acoustical music.... :-P


Any lyric change suggestions

(I think i say gun to much)
(In the beginning, the line "For all the aliens that you made me see" has too many syllables, i need it changed)

lots of other things...

Ideas??

~Jason

todd1Ok

haha. ill sing this to the guys on #scf.comm server tomorrow. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

DragonMech

"For all the skulks you made me see" might work.

I can tell the song is going to be a hoot though. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

rennex

I swear a song like this exists already.

billcat

Somebody needs to get some new tunes.

Where do you come up with this stuff..!?!?!?!



Celine Dion?? Come on man.. Listen to something that's not crap...

SDJason

<!--QuoteBegin-Dragon_Mech+Nov 11 2004, 08:14 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Dragon_Mech @ Nov 11 2004, 08:14 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> "For all the skulks you made me see" might work.

I can tell the song is going to be a hoot though. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
For all the ammo you gave me
For all the scans you gave me to see
For all the guns that you brought to my life
For all the hives that you made die
For every hive we ran into
The aliens we must pursue
The Kharaa all are dead, commander
You're the one who held us up
Never let us fall
You're the one who saw us through, through it all

You gave me meds when I was weak
You read my mind when I couldn't speak
You were my eyes when I couldn't see
You saw the grunt that was in me
Dropped me HA, As I shout with glee
You gave me guns 'cause you believed
We won the game today
Because you trust me

You gave me wings and made me fly
You dropped a phase to take out the hive
I lost my gun, you gave it back to me
You said no game was out of reach
You stood by me throughout the brawl
We watched in tears, the hive will fall
I?m grateful for each day you commed me
Maybe I don't know that much
But I know this much is true
I was blessed because I was commed by you

You gave me meds when I was weak
You read my mind when I couldn't speak
You were my eyes when I couldn't see
You saw the grunt that was in me
Dropped me HA, As I shout with glee
You gave me guns 'cause you believed
We won the game today
Because you trust me

You were always there for me
Dropping meds to carry me
Off to the hive, I know I wont die, when you are there
You've been my inspiration
Of all the things we did to lose
The game was a better game because of you


I changed it to this.. it sounds much better now (busted out a rhyming dictionary, woot)

i thought of the skulks see thing... but i wanted to vary it...... i still think i talk about guns to much... oh well

DragonMech

What's an NS song without a lot of guns? (Except those that are focused on the aliens. Clense Da Intruders anyone? <!--emo&::skulk::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/skulk.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='skulk.gif' /><!--endemo-->)

SDJason

Im having 2 problems....

1. Finding an acoustical only version of that song...

I re recorded it via a mic and the kareoke setting on my cd player.... but its low quality...

Even then, i cant sync it with my voice singing real well...

Im using Acid Music studio 5.0.... is there something else i can try??


Any help would be appreciated, ive NEVER done anything like this before... so im kinda noob.... ill keep trying tho