Mission 2.35.711

Dissonance

This story is an account, told in the first person, of one of the missions our clan has been sent on. The names used are all names of clanmembers (current, inactive or past). I have their approval to use them in my story, as well as the DFA clan name. The story is at least a third finished though it's far too large to house here. If you're interested in viewing it, please go to:

<a href='http://www.dfaclan.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1110' target='_blank'>http://www.dfaclan.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1110</a>

You may post comments as replies to this thread, or you may post them on our clan page at:

<a href='http://www.dfaclan.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1111' target='_blank'>http://www.dfaclan.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=1111</a>

Constructive criticism is very welcome. This is my first, true science-fiction piece as I usually write fantasy. If you see something that looks out of place or would like to suggest additions/changes in general, also feel free to post. You may also email me directly:

mellyn@ix.netcom.com

Please include something about NS or DFA in the subject line of your email.

Thanks!
Diss

Dissonance

Hrmm... well since I posted my links, I've noticed that most folks who've posted on this forum completely disregarded the rules of only posting half a page. Undecided about whether I should post the installments of my story here or no. We'll see. I'd really appreciate comments, good or bad (constructive crit please). Thanks.

Diss