My First Map

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Status : 7,5-10% completed
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* Rebrush corridor "Command Center to Storage 1-a"
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Jezpuh

Nice start for a first map, but the brushwork in the 5th and 7th screenshot looks terrible. Also, those textures in the marine start don't work out very well together. Scale the marine start a bit down also.

carioca

<a href='http://www.vlatitude.com/tutorials.php' target='_blank'>http://www.vlatitude.com/tutorials.php</a>

<a href='http://articles.thewavelength.net/section/9/' target='_blank'>http://articles.thewavelength.net/section/9/</a>

<a href='http://collective.valve-erc.com/index.php?...ategory=mapping' target='_blank'>http://collective.valve-erc.com/index.php?...ategory=mapping</a>

some link to help u map better <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Mentar

the wall behind the colums in the last few screens, that texture really doesnt suit there. and you might want to get a bit more lighting in it, but im thinking your just not done with it yet since youve got light textures on there that havnt actualy been made lights yet.

like the ones around the edges of the roof in ms.

other than that it looks pretty good, just adjust some of the textures/alignment and fiddle with lighting and it will look great. the general rooms themselves look good, but maybe a bit to open if you can find a way to break them up / block line of site

Crispy

carioca apart from citing tutorial pages, don't be tempted to start giving people tips.

Sky

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anyways, yeah, I agree with jezpuh; also, I like how you made that "cave-in". Could use a little more detail IMO, but you've got more important things to worry about right now <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->