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Wub wuBUK Join Date: 2003-10-25 Member: 21926Members, Constellation
Wub wuBUK Join Date: 2003-10-25 Member: 21926Members, Constellation
(yeh a weird name <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo--> )
It's a story in the making, non NS related (so moderators move this if you wish, to where -I don't know <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> )
What I have done so far
<!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->Harold awakes from a scream that came from outside. He cannot see much from the window as it has metal bars along the width of it outside. It is still night-time, he walks to the locked door and tries to open it. He shouts,
?Hey what time is it? no answer. Harold bangs on the door to get the guards attention, but to no avail. He walks back to the window trying to look for anything.
The door flies off the hinges; Harold turns round, sees a creature take a deep breath in and out and starts to slowly walk towards him. He tries to back up, but he is already on the wall. The creature raises its arm to grab Harold, a little chinking noise is heard and then a white flash. The creature screams and is shot down by two people in masks, Paul and Eleanor. They pick up dazed Harold and carry him out of the building.
Harold awakens in a darkened area with a small light, inside a humvee. Paul turns from the passenger seat and sees Harold awake
?You?re lucky, we weren?t going to go in the nutter house.? Harold acknowledges Paul with a grunt.
?I?m Paul? he introduces himself,
?And she?s Eleanor,?
?I?m Harold.?
Harold is puzzled and looking at the supplies that Paul and Eleanor have in the rear of the truck, where Harold is, Paul reassures him that he is not a hostage, but a victim of a monstrosity.
?There?s some food in the box next to you? Eleanor scowls at Harold. He opens the box, a metal box that had a flick lock and asks
?What am I allowed to eat from in here?? As he looks at the assorted food items,
?Anything you want, don?t eat everything though ? we are on rations? Paul tells Harold.
?There?s a petrol station, we?ll see if they have any ? Paul you go see if there is any food in the store, you stay in here? Eleanor purposely not saying Harolds? name. Eleanor jumps out and starts filling the humvee with petrol. Paul runs across the petrol station to the store. Seconds later he rushes back from the store,
?We have to leave, now!? Eleanor runs around the humvee and jumps back into the drivers seat and accelerates with so much speed Harold is nearly thrown from where he was sat.
?What??? Harold asks puzzled, he looks out of the rear windows of the humvee to see some kind of figure running towards the humvee ? and gaining on it. Harold sees Paul get a large rifle that has some sort of launcher on the bottom of it, he half climbs out of the sunroof and turns towards the figure, he loads a grenade fires it at the figure ? nothing happens fires another two after each other
?It?s god damn swallowed them? he shouts at Eleanor,
?****?? she replies
?WHAT THE **** IS THAT? Harold shouts at the top of his voice, as he finishes what he says a loud explosion occurs making Eleanor steer frantically and crashes.
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What do you think so far?
EDIT: another update (from the crash - this is where a SP mod could start) <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->
It's a story in the making, non NS related (so moderators move this if you wish, to where -I don't know <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> )
What I have done so far
<!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->Harold awakes from a scream that came from outside. He cannot see much from the window as it has metal bars along the width of it outside. It is still night-time, he walks to the locked door and tries to open it. He shouts,
?Hey what time is it? no answer. Harold bangs on the door to get the guards attention, but to no avail. He walks back to the window trying to look for anything.
The door flies off the hinges; Harold turns round, sees a creature take a deep breath in and out and starts to slowly walk towards him. He tries to back up, but he is already on the wall. The creature raises its arm to grab Harold, a little chinking noise is heard and then a white flash. The creature screams and is shot down by two people in masks, Paul and Eleanor. They pick up dazed Harold and carry him out of the building.
Harold awakens in a darkened area with a small light, inside a humvee. Paul turns from the passenger seat and sees Harold awake
?You?re lucky, we weren?t going to go in the nutter house.? Harold acknowledges Paul with a grunt.
?I?m Paul? he introduces himself,
?And she?s Eleanor,?
?I?m Harold.?
Harold is puzzled and looking at the supplies that Paul and Eleanor have in the rear of the truck, where Harold is, Paul reassures him that he is not a hostage, but a victim of a monstrosity.
?There?s some food in the box next to you? Eleanor scowls at Harold. He opens the box, a metal box that had a flick lock and asks
?What am I allowed to eat from in here?? As he looks at the assorted food items,
?Anything you want, don?t eat everything though ? we are on rations? Paul tells Harold.
?There?s a petrol station, we?ll see if they have any ? Paul you go see if there is any food in the store, you stay in here? Eleanor purposely not saying Harolds? name. Eleanor jumps out and starts filling the humvee with petrol. Paul runs across the petrol station to the store. Seconds later he rushes back from the store,
?We have to leave, now!? Eleanor runs around the humvee and jumps back into the drivers seat and accelerates with so much speed Harold is nearly thrown from where he was sat.
?What??? Harold asks puzzled, he looks out of the rear windows of the humvee to see some kind of figure running towards the humvee ? and gaining on it. Harold sees Paul get a large rifle that has some sort of launcher on the bottom of it, he half climbs out of the sunroof and turns towards the figure, he loads a grenade fires it at the figure ? nothing happens fires another two after each other
?It?s god damn swallowed them? he shouts at Eleanor,
?****?? she replies
?WHAT THE **** IS THAT? Harold shouts at the top of his voice, as he finishes what he says a loud explosion occurs making Eleanor steer frantically and crashes.
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What do you think so far?
EDIT: another update (from the crash - this is where a SP mod could start) <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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(Doesn't seem anyone is interested in this, so this is the last part I will be posting in this forum???)
<!--QuoteBegin--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->Eleanor wakes up from being unconscious and sees Paul’s barrel from his gun impaled through his head, she shows a hint of disgust, she turns and looks at Harold – he is conscious and staring at the side of the humvee gasping deep breathes.
“What… what the hell was that?” he tries to say calmly,
“It is a mutated monkey crossed with a hyena with some form of waste injected as it was growing,”
“Considering you know about them…” Harold takes a big deep breath,
“Did you make create these things?”
“No,” she replies her voice being less intimidating as before,
“So, the only other thing is… there are more of them?”
She doesn’t say anything
“Come on, help me get Paul’s back pack off him – you’re going to have to carry some of this stuff”
About twenty minutes later Eleanor and Harold have equipped themselves with various things that where in the, now wrecked, humvee. Eleanor passes Harold a P-90, Harold takes a hold of it and pulls it towards him – Eleanor doesn’t let go straight up and looks into Harold’s eyes as if to say ‘be careful, and you know how to use a gun’ he nods and she lets go.
Eleanor takes a compass reading and takes them both in the southeast direction.
“That’s where we are going,” she passes Harold the map. It has bits of blood across the page, with an area marked out measure about 500metres by 500metres – Harold looks puzzled and sighs,
“It’s a safe area, most of us are military,”
“Oh.”
“So why where you in the nutter house?” Eleanor asks quickly,
“Heh,” Harold almost laughs,
“I was saying the world is coming to an end…”
“This, what is happen to now – or at least of what I’ve seen up to now” he says more seriously.
“Hold on I gotta go ****,” Eleanor says, she wonders off into the bushes. Harold looks up in to the sky, sees a full moon and lots of stars. Eleanor wonders back out and whispers
“Don’t move,” she slowly grabs her pistol and aims it, what looks like, towards Harold. He tries to say don’t shoot, but nothing comes out. From Harolds point of view the explosion from inside the gun came out super slowly, he opens his eyes and hears something hit the floor beside him. He looks down at a corpse, almost screaming like a girl and walks quickly over to Eleanor.
“That’s what happens when whenever they inject that stuff, into a human, that happens” she says with haterd,
“Who are ‘they,’ eh?”
“Scientists and terrorists, most of them are dead now because the ‘creations’ broke out of the labs and killed them – I suppose some people got out, probably the terrorists, as they probably **** themselves every time they where in there.” Eleanor sees a red dot appear on Harold’s chest with someone shouting
“Put your guns down and hands in the air,”
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