[con] Very Early Cencept

RhodriRhodri Join Date: 2003-06-21 Member: 17575Members
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<div class="IPBDescription">Please leave feedback and C&C</div> Okay, this is only the second cencept I've ever drawn so I think it's fair to say I'm still fairly new to this but any idea what more I should add to this (based on the H&K G36 rifle). I'm debating wether to add a stock or not but currently quite like the look of it how it is. Please note: this is no where near finished but it's 20 past 12 and I've got work tomorrow so I'm off to get some sleep.

Cheers, Rhodri.
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  • ChronoChrono Local flyboy Join Date: 2003-08-05 Member: 18989Members
    should be in concept forum but still nice
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  • CaptainPanakaCaptainPanaka Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 4718Members
    edited May 2004
    not bad, but it needs a stock <!--emo&:0--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wow.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wow.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    /edit: wrong forum <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • DrfuzzyDrfuzzy FEW... MORE.... INCHES... Join Date: 2003-09-21 Member: 21094Members
    Looks good.

    Little g36ish if you ask me though <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • BAshhBAshh Join Date: 2003-08-26 Member: 20222Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor
    edited May 2004
    o_O 1000?

    i dont see how it's that much but oh well. still not too bad, good concept
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  • ZupEZupE Join Date: 2003-11-10 Member: 22446Banned
    whats the point of the back part popping out?? that wont rest on your sholder or anything.. seems pointless
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  • sheena_yanaisheena_yanai Join Date: 2002-12-23 Member: 11426Members
    edited May 2004
    <!--QuoteBegin-ZupE+May 28 2004, 09:33 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (ZupE @ May 28 2004, 09:33 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> whats the point of the back part popping out??  that wont rest on your sholder or anything.. seems pointless <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    no, that part contains the space the receiver needs to reload from the mag...
    uhm.. 1 glitch, the reload handle should be in the fron position.
    looks like a bastardisation of g36 ,thompson,and uhm... some kind of kitchen tool...oh.. and the trigger and the trigger guard is awfull.. a little bit smaler would be cool.. kinda reminds me on a mp5 hhmmm <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • MintmanMintman Join Date: 2003-05-30 Member: 16866Members
    edited May 2004
    More than dead: The model looks nice, as the concept did, but you seem to be using a few extra polies.
    Here's my tip for you:
    Think about what will be seen in game. In game you normally only see the left hand side of the model. Therefore you don't need all the details on the right hand side to be modelled, it just has to look the general shape.

    I'll attach a pic in a minute showing you the bits which could be removed from the right hand side.

    Edit: Removing these bits of detail which will never be seen will save you a hundred polies or so I'd guess. Also, it will not detract from the quality of the model.
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  • wnnwnn Zombie Panic modeller Join Date: 2003-06-03 Member: 16960Members
    edited May 2004
    <a href='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/index.php?act=ST&f=19&t=71976&st=0#entry1087696' target='_blank'>http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/in...=0#entry1087696</a>

    <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->))))
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  • RhodriRhodri Join Date: 2003-06-21 Member: 17575Members
    Okay done a bit more work in good ol' paint and put a basic colour scheme on - wow it's not green!? <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    Cheers, Rhodri.
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  • sheena_yanaisheena_yanai Join Date: 2002-12-23 Member: 11426Members
    <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif' /><!--endemo--> youre ignoring me
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  • RhodriRhodri Join Date: 2003-06-21 Member: 17575Members
    edited May 2004
    maybe it's jammed <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo--> sorry im going on holiday for a bit but I'll change it when I get round to it. Yeh I did take inspiration from a WW2 Thompson and an Mp5 a bit aswell for the grip.

    Cheers, Rhodri.

    PS - Ok rushed it a bit but I've got to go in 2 minutes so see you all in a bit.
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  • sheena_yanaisheena_yanai Join Date: 2002-12-23 Member: 11426Members
    looks good so far <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo--> now to the grip trigger part.. you could do the grip bigger, so it would be a smg then..or you do the trigger and the guard smaller, it would be a assault rifle then.. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
    looks nice.. only the proportions are not exact
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