Co_hope

Kardoffel

<div class="IPBDescription">first map ever c&c plz</div> These are the first pics of my really first map ever!
<img src='http://home.arcor.de/kingurmel/Screens/co_hope0001.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
<img src='http://home.arcor.de/kingurmel/Screens/co_hope0002.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
<img src='http://home.arcor.de/kingurmel/Screens/co_hope0003.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
This is just the marinestart tock me about 2 hours! I´ll maybe rename the map this was the first name in mentioned!

TranquilChaos

Good for a first attempt. However still a fair amount of room for improvement.

Some examples:

-Your lights are blue, but give off white light. Also, if you're using light entities, texlights would be a better choice.

-Make the computers glow or at least some of them, it will make them look like they're actually working computers and not pretty decals on the walls.

-The texturing of the floor looking very bad. Having a single texture repeated over and over, and having that particular texture (the metal plates intesecting with objects in the room, looks bad. Add some variation.

Nice first attempt, the architecture and most of the texturing looks fairly good.

MeanMrMustard

Nice texture placement, and it seems really good for your first map.

the post before me has pretty much summed it up.

Although..

Try and create more character around the comm chair, make it an attraction, maybe by texture placement, light values, or even architecture changes.

The comm chair is the most important aspect at the Marine start, it needs good positioning. At the mo it just looks like its been slapped in the middle.

Still, looking promising.

Coblet

Better than my first map.

Varathar

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I really like it, but It's look so "boring". <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif' /><!--endemo-->
I want more light in there.. <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo--> Mostly blue... <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->

Starchy

That is a very nice design you have around the CC. Keep it up. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->