Jin Roh Model Posing

ObstObst Join Date: 2003-03-12 Member: 14436Members, Constellation
edited April 2004 in Artwork Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">[artwip] :D</div> <img src='http://mitglied.lycos.de/adolfkrug/rohshot4_2.gif' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://mitglied.lycos.de/adolfkrug/rohshot5_2.gif' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

Burn will get me a nice background shot for it, I'll fix the transparency on the Jin Roh logo. Tell me what more please I'm new to 2D art <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • OmegamanOmegaman Join Date: 2004-01-11 Member: 25239Members
    Holy. Crap.

    That is AWESOME!!!! <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • ObstObst Join Date: 2003-03-12 Member: 14436Members, Constellation
    Hm got the transparency and the cooling-hole placement fixed but I still need to get a background to look nice...

    <img src='http://mitglied.lycos.de/adolfkrug/rohshot4_3.gif' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

    <img src='http://mitglied.lycos.de/adolfkrug/rohshot5_3.gif' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
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  • DethGauntDethGaunt Join Date: 2003-06-02 Member: 16938Members
    erm.. the way he err.. looks at you, makes you feel like he is deeply in love with you or something, and seems to ruin the atmosphere of the picture
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  • ObstObst Join Date: 2003-03-12 Member: 14436Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin-DethGaunt+Apr 12 2004, 08:45 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (DethGaunt @ Apr 12 2004, 08:45 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> erm.. the way he err.. looks at you, makes you feel like he is deeply in love with you or something, and seems to ruin the atmosphere of the picture <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Bah, my mom said the same <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif' /><!--endemo-->
    What could one do against that?
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  • Ghost5Ghost5 Join Date: 2004-04-06 Member: 27749Members
    i think that the soldier looks in the first picture more angry than in the second one.. but the second one is also nice <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
    dont you want a soldier to be your friend and looking so evil ^^
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  • BallistoBallisto Join Date: 2003-05-19 Member: 16503Members
    I like it. What's the player model from.

    Tilt the head down (forward) to make him look angrier. Tilting the head sideways makes him look lovey dovey.

    Is that a dod mg-42? <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • ToboldTobold Join Date: 2003-06-16 Member: 17405Members
    make him look down at you rather than over his shoulder and up
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  • DethGauntDethGaunt Join Date: 2003-06-02 Member: 16938Members
    edited April 2004
    <!--QuoteBegin-Obst & Gemuese+Apr 12 2004, 04:16 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Obst & Gemuese @ Apr 12 2004, 04:16 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-DethGaunt+Apr 12 2004, 08:45 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (DethGaunt @ Apr 12 2004, 08:45 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> erm.. the way he err.. looks at you, makes you feel like he is deeply in love with you or something, and seems to ruin the atmosphere of the picture <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Bah, my mom said the same <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif' /><!--endemo-->
    What could one do against that? <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    lol <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    thats the only problemo i see <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    try changing where he is looking and the angle of his head perhaps
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  • CoolCookieCooksCoolCookieCooks Pretty Girl Join Date: 2003-05-18 Member: 16446Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor, Constellation
    save it as a jpg, then you wont get those weird lines on the shading
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  • ObstObst Join Date: 2003-03-12 Member: 14436Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin-CoolCookieCooks+Apr 13 2004, 09:15 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (CoolCookieCooks @ Apr 13 2004, 09:15 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> save it as a jpg, then you wont get those weird lines on the shading <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    And it won't support transparency, then <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • ctxctx Join Date: 2002-11-02 Member: 4592Members
    You don't NEED transparency. Just make the background of the image the same color as the forum post background.
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  • TofumasterTofumaster Join Date: 2004-04-10 Member: 27829Members
    Have him looking more down at you - that's more evil.
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  • SariselSarisel .::&#39; ( O ) &#39;;:-. .-.:;&#39; ( O ) &#39;::. Join Date: 2003-07-30 Member: 18557Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin-Tobold+Apr 13 2004, 06:46 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Tobold @ Apr 13 2004, 06:46 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> make him look down at you rather than over his shoulder and up <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Exactly. One of the things they teach you in basic art class.. give the character a sense of power by making the audience look up at him, give the audience a sense of power by making them look down at the character. And the posture, don't leave the character leaning backwards against air - that is a classic pin-up shot.
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  • ErrbaErrba Join Date: 2003-08-12 Member: 19571Members
    Darken his eyes make it less bright, a good background portrait for this would be a screenshot of ns_hera in that walkway to the right of marine spawn where it is dark, by the crate <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->.
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  • LikuLiku I, am the Somberlain. Join Date: 2003-01-10 Member: 12128Members
    I'd suggest a better MG42 Model, you could find one easily from the DoD community. Other than that it's great.
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  • ObstObst Join Date: 2003-03-12 Member: 14436Members, Constellation
    Does he still look like in love?
    (Oh, and edited the shoulder pads <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> )

    <img src='http://mitglied.lycos.de/adolfkrug/final_roh1.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

    <img src='http://mitglied.lycos.de/adolfkrug/final_roh2.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
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  • SkylightSkylight Join Date: 2004-04-19 Member: 28020Members
    edited April 2004
    <!--QuoteBegin-Obst & Gemuese+Apr 12 2004, 04:16 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Obst & Gemuese @ Apr 12 2004, 04:16 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin-DethGaunt+Apr 12 2004, 08:45 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (DethGaunt @ Apr 12 2004, 08:45 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> erm.. the way he err.. looks at you, makes you feel like he is deeply in love with you or something, and seems to ruin the atmosphere of the picture <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Bah, my mom said the same <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif' /><!--endemo-->
    What could one do against that? <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->

    I think he looks damn cool, the gaze is rather spooky in my opinion... like one of the helghast soilders in killzone (not like I've played it or something, but that's the image i get <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif' /><!--endemo-->).
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  • TofumasterTofumaster Join Date: 2004-04-10 Member: 27829Members
    These are pretty much better, but a problem with the first is that his ****/legs are too prominent. He should be leaning over you slightly more. 2nd one is pretty damn good, It could maybe be a bit bigger though.
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  • ObstObst Join Date: 2003-03-12 Member: 14436Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin-Tofumaster+Apr 21 2004, 01:42 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Tofumaster @ Apr 21 2004, 01:42 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> 2nd one is pretty damn good, It could maybe be a bit bigger though. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Meh?

    <img src='http://mitglied.lycos.de/adolfkrug/final_roh3.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

    <!--emo&::nerdy::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/nerd.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='nerd.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • TofumasterTofumaster Join Date: 2004-04-10 Member: 27829Members
    edited April 2004
    yeah, that looks good.

    Another thing you could try doing is to adjust the eyes and contrast/brightness in photoshop - that could add a lot to the feel.
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  • ObstObst Join Date: 2003-03-12 Member: 14436Members, Constellation
    edited April 2004
    Change in which way (more/less contrast/brightness)? I really suck at 2D, so please tell me everything precisely <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    :UPDATE:

    Somebody wanted a new MG42 model? <!--emo&::asrifle::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/asrifle.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='asrifle.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    <img src='http://mitglied.lycos.de/adolfkrug/final_roh4.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

    And yes, that is no blatendly wrapped on v_model, It took me some hours to make a full real p-model out of the v, without holes and a not-so-high polycount of 804 XD
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  • phuxphux Join Date: 2004-01-18 Member: 25438Members
    nice work obst&gemuese - like all things before <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • TofumasterTofumaster Join Date: 2004-04-10 Member: 27829Members
    The newest is much better- try selecting the eyes, and increasing contrast while lowering brightness. Also try messing around with hue/saturation to get different effects.

    Another thing to try is to make the gun pointed at us a little more, but dont if it clips.
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  • ObstObst Join Date: 2003-03-12 Member: 14436Members, Constellation
    edited April 2004
    Ah, so you mean that the eye's inside sticks out to much? OK, I'll fix that.

    :UPDATE: I also fixed the gun getting fatter at the front.

    <img src='http://mitglied.lycos.de/adolfkrug/final_roh5.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
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  • DethGauntDethGaunt Join Date: 2003-06-02 Member: 16938Members
    rofl... that last one.. lol anyhow, the 2nd ones you did.. the top one looks kinda constipated..

    they are definately improving.. so keep going with them

    in the last one though it gives me the impression that his helmet has slid down over his eyes and he is having difficulty seeing..

    but gj!! keep it up
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  • ObstObst Join Date: 2003-03-12 Member: 14436Members, Constellation
    Meh?

    <img src='http://mitglied.lycos.de/adolfkrug/final_roh6.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
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  • DethGauntDethGaunt Join Date: 2003-06-02 Member: 16938Members
    much better imo , got a better atmosphere about it
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  • BurncycleBurncycle Join Date: 2002-11-24 Member: 9759Members, NS1 Playtester
    I personally like the first two best.
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  • ObstObst Join Date: 2003-03-12 Member: 14436Members, Constellation
    edited June 2004
    <img src='http://mitglied.lycos.de/adolfkrug/jr_title_full.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />
    Some people said the models needed more contrast to the background or such, but I'm too dumb in 2D matters <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif' /><!--endemo-->
    If anyone would like to help me making it better I'd send over the .psps <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    :EDIT: Another BG tone.... I suck <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    <img src='http://mitglied.lycos.de/adolfkrug/jr_title_full2.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

    :EDIT2: Wark?

    <img src='http://mitglied.lycos.de/adolfkrug/jr_title_full3.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

    :EDIT3: Wark? [Lower right soldier is bigger]

    <img src='http://mitglied.lycos.de/adolfkrug/jr_title_full4.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

    :EDIT4: BTW that background pic is from readyroom.org...
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  • REDDmonkeyREDDmonkey Join Date: 2004-03-10 Member: 27256Members
    very nice obst, good work <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo--> (way better than i could do lol). I think i like the second one in your last post the best, shows the models well and looks good. Also, i like that mg42 (think ive seen it before), its all quite mean looking <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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