Co_aurora

VoodoVoodo Join Date: 2004-01-18 Member: 25431Members
in Mapping Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">my first map :)</div> This is my first map, and i know, it isnt perfect, but i think, its playable.
You can download it from <a href='http://www.umszki.hu/~demien/co_aurora.rar' target='_blank'>http://www.umszki.hu/~demien/co_aurora.rar</a>
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  • VoodoVoodo Join Date: 2004-01-18 Member: 25431Members
    Its only a beta <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • enf0rcerenf0rcer intrigued... Join Date: 2003-03-16 Member: 14584Members
    could you posts some pics? It takes me about 10 mins to load up an NS map cause Steam hates me. <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • VoodoVoodo Join Date: 2004-01-18 Member: 25431Members
    pics are bigger, than 120k, and i dont know, how to make them lower <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • DragonMechDragonMech Join Date: 2003-09-19 Member: 21023Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    Open them with paint and save the .bmp files as .jpeg - that will often shrink the file to less than 120K.
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  • VoodoVoodo Join Date: 2004-01-18 Member: 25431Members
    they are at .jpg, and still bigger
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  • VoodoVoodo Join Date: 2004-01-18 Member: 25431Members
    First pic
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  • VoodoVoodo Join Date: 2004-01-18 Member: 25431Members
    second one
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  • VoodoVoodo Join Date: 2004-01-18 Member: 25431Members
    and the third one, is less than 120k
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  • TequilaTequila Join Date: 2003-08-13 Member: 19660Members
    It's blue. It's red. It's green. You really need to tone down the lighting as it's washing out everything, from the atmosphere to the architecture itself.

    Also, use a more neutral colour shuch as white or light yellow as your main light source, with reds, blues and greens etc being the supporting lighting.
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  • JanosJanos Join Date: 2002-08-02 Member: 1050Members, Constellation, NS2 Playtester
    Since i havent downloaded the actual map yet i cant comment on the layout instead ill just comment on the pics.

    First off try an add a little diversity to yurr lighting instead of just one intense light

    an secondly add detail to the level, there are alot of flat walls and ceilings in there.

    Throw in a few pipes now an again or a cpu console to add a lil spice to the level <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • MeanMrMustardMeanMrMustard Join Date: 2003-11-23 Member: 23456Members
    Apart from the obvious 'Travolta' Lighting system, try adding rims etc, this helps create boldness and emphasis to the architecture that its framing.

    e.g. the glass roof on the third pic. Its a good idea, encorporating natural light..but
    add some nice rims..or pipes like previously stated.

    It will improve it ahell of alot.

    Keep it up.
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  • ShenTraXShenTraX Join Date: 2003-11-10 Member: 22434Members, Constellation
    Holy color contrast, Batman!
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  • NzNexusNzNexus Join Date: 2004-02-16 Member: 26605Banned
    OMG no! this is too much like an disco-raveroom. RED, GREEN AND HEAVY MARINE BLUE COLORS DONT FIT IN ONE PLACE ON THE MAP. NO!

    srry but no it's ugly <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • Kouji_SanKouji_San Sr. Hινε Uρкεερεг - EUPT Deputy The Netherlands Join Date: 2003-05-13 Member: 16271Members, NS2 Playtester, Squad Five Blue
    edited March 2004
    <!--QuoteBegin-Nz-Nexus+Mar 31 2004, 05:08 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Nz-Nexus @ Mar 31 2004, 05:08 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> OMG no! this is too much like an disco-raveroom. RED, GREEN AND HEAVY MARINE BLUE COLORS DONT FIT IN ONE PLACE ON THE MAP. NO!

    srry but no it's ugly  <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html//emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    well only the lighting saturation is to high... But for a <i>first</i> map (looking trough the heavy colored lighting) its looks ok... However not only fix them lights a little but also some texture alignments (2nd screenshot)

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    judging by the screenshots btw, havent actually walked arround in it, maybe I'll do that later on <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • BlackPlagueBlackPlague Join Date: 2004-02-02 Member: 25990Banned
    its kinda boxxy if ya ask me, try and add some kool architcture in it...... like lamps, stairs, steam, particle systems, etc..
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