Ns_achio (map)

Kouji_SanKouji_San Sr. Hινε Uρкεερεг - EUPT DeputyThe Netherlands, Hoogezand Join Date: 2003-05-13 Member: 16271Members, NS2 Playtester, Squad Five Blue Posts: 15,686 Advanced user
edited January 2004 in Fan-Fiction Forum
mission briefing
The back story of ns_achio work in progress, I thought it would be fun to read, so uhm have fun biggrin.gif

If you are having trouble reading it (due to the layout) you can also read it on my website. It has a better layout then I can get onto this forum...

GreetzZz Kouji San

MISSION BRIEFING,

Salvage of the battle carrier Achio

Ship information:
- Experimental elite assault class vessel (prototype).
- Dreadnought (new type, this is the most powerful vessel ever built).
- Galaxy class vessel.
- Material displacement experimental drives (up to 6 times the speed of current known vessels).
Offensive:
- 2 front ion cannon based “trigun” arrays *
- 50 “lock beam” lasers providing a 95% coverage of the entire vessel *
- The capability to launch all onboard 50 fighter craft in approximately 10 seconds, this is possible due to the second command bridge called launch control.

Current commander: Michael J. Tennard

Minimum testing operating staff:
- Sergeant Jason P. Black
- Dr. Jurgen Schmitt
- Lieutenant Jake C. Bench
- Dr. Yumi Takashoii
- Corporal Eve P. Lena

Trigun *
This is a new type of weapon based on the original ion cannon base design. It has 3 times more power then the original ion cannons.
This system needs a lot of power , this is the reason for 2 separate independent generator arrays onboard.

Lock beam *
These lasers lock onto their target and fire a constant stream of extremely hot fast moving partials for a maximum duration of
10 seconds then they have to cool down for 6 seconds before they can fire again these are best used against enemy fighter planes.

Achio mission short version:
This new type of warship was send into the outer rim of the current known galaxy
for testing the capabilities of this new type of vessel. There is an unexplored planet
located there called Nerva. Nerva is 4th, probably dead, planet from the sun in
that planetary system surrounded in a shroud of fast moving meteorites which
could be used in target practice.
Since this was a highly covert mission the transmissions into and from that sector
are very few due to the strict security policy controlled by the military.

However the authorities have made the following available to us.
The last messages recorded from Achio:

>start transmission 1<
Commander Tennard: Central command. Come in central.

Central: This is central.

Commander Tennard: We have arrived at the planet Nerva and are ready to begin charging the weapons systems and do the final testing.

Central: Affirmative proceed as planned.

Commander Tennard: Roger proceeding as planned.
>end transmission 1<

>start transmission 2, 23 minutes later<
Commander Tennard: Achio to central command

Central: This is central.
Commander Tennard: Weapons are fully charged we'll keep u posted on the progress of weapons testing.

Central: Confirmed we'll keep the channel open.

Commander Tennard: Black lock ion cannon 1 on asteroid baring 1.4.7

Sergeant Black: Roger that sir targeting asteroid. Having trouble getting a confirmed lock there is some strange interference. Compensating… Lock confirmed.

Commander Tennard: Nicely done. Fire on my mark... Fire!

Sergeant Black: Target destroyed in 0.14 seconds.

Commander Tennard: Roger that. Central we have a positive result on array 1. Now testing array 2. Confirm please.

Central: You have conformation. Proceed with array 2.

Commander Tennard: Black target asteroid baring 8.6.2 and fire at will.

Sergeant Black: Roger that Sir I'm having trouble with that interference again. Can't get a lock.

Lieutenant Bench: Try to compensate.

Sergeant Black: Yes sir. Compensator at 100%. Still no lock.

Commander Tennard: Dr. Takashoii? Any ideas what could interfere our sensors like this?

Dr. Takashoii: I'm scanning for energy reading in this sector of probable cause. Hmmm.

Commander Tennard: Hmmm? I hate it when doctors say hmmm. What have you found doctor.

Dr. Takashoii: There is some kind of energy displacement 500M on our starboard. Attempting to identify. Yes there is something there alright. Gravitational weight estimated at 250000 metric tons. The size of an asteroid 15m/20m in diameter. Visual reading negative still due to the gravitational reading the existance of it is highly probable.

Lieutenant Bench: What does this mean in plain English doc.

Dr. Takashoii: In plain English, as you so nicely put it, there is something there but it's above 98% invisible to the naked eye.

Corporal Lena: Sir!

Commander Tennard: Yes corporal what is it.

Corporal Lena: Sir! The object on our starboard is moving toward us.

Commander Tennard: Alright take us out of here. Move the ship up 60km that should take us well out of range

Corporal Lena: SIR WE HAVE INCOMMING ON BARING 1.1.8 SPEED 468M/S, DISTANCE APROXIMATELY 2800M!!! SAME ENERGY READING AS THAT OTHER INVISIBLE OBJECT.

Commander Tennard: EVASIVE ACTION COME ABOUT 60 DEGREES PORT!!!

Corporal Lena: IT'S ADJUSTING COURSE TO MATCH OURS. IMPACT IMMENANT.

Commander Tennard: THIS IS THE COMMANDER! ALL HENS BRACE FOR IMPACT…

>radio silence< *static*

Central: Central to Battle Carrier Achio. Come in Achio. Tennard answer me. Achio!!!
>end transmission 2<

>start transmission 3, 4 hours later<
Lieutenant Bench: *static* This is Achio to cen *static* l. Come in Central.

Central: This is central, What happened out there Tennard.

Lieutenant Bench: Sir, this is Lieutenant Bench! The commander is in med lab he was hit*static* support beam. I'm acting as commanding officer at the moment

Central: Lieutenant. What happened?

Lieutenant Bench: We where hit *static* n asteroid in starboa *static*. Well no not asteroid they where invisible and could only be tracked by...

Central: Yes we know that so far. But what kind of technology could cloak a entire asteroid.

Lieutenant Bench: No technology *static* this asteroid. When we where hit it became visible. And *static* seems it was some sort of an all ice asteroid and it s*static* ems our new material displacement engine was pulling towards us...

VOICE COMM: WARNING ANOMOLOUS MATERIAL DETECTED ON STARBOARD SYSTEMS!

Lieutenant Bench: What the hell. Sergeant get dr. Schmit and Takashoii in here asap. Sorry sir we have a problem. I'll have to get back to you.

Central: Confirmed contact us as soon as possible.

Lieutenant Bench: Roger, Bench out.
>end transmission 3<

>start transmission 4, 12 minutes later<
Sergeant Black: CENTRAL PLEA*static* COME IN.

Central: Who is this and how did you get this frequency.

Sergeant Black: CENTRAL *static* IT'S SERGEA*static* BLACK ONBOARD ACHIO WE'VE *static* ALIE*static* THEY KILLED EVERY*static*

Central: SERGEANT CALM DOWN WHO WAS KILLED

Sergeant Black: IT'S THEM THEY *static*CLOACKE *static* ASTEROID WHICH WAS COVERED IN SO *static* ME WEIRD SLIME STUFF *static*

Central: SERGEANT! WHO IS THEM?

Sergeant Black: THEM I'VE HEARD *static* ALIENS T *static* KILLED EVERYONE *static* I'M ONLY ONE L *static*EFT ONBOARD I'M ON THE BRIDGE NOW.

VOICE COMM: WARNING UNKNOWN LIFEFORM DETECTED ON BRIDE! BRIDGE COMPROMIZED!

Sergeant Black: OH MY GOD NO! WHAT IS THAT THING AAAAAAAAARGH!!!

Central: SERGEANT! WE'LL SEND HELP ASAP! SERGEANT?

Achio communication *static*

Central: ACHIO RESPOND!!!

Achio communication *weird sounds, it sounds like some kind of laughing*

Achio communication *static*
>end transmission 4<

The mission is as following:

Upon docking we'll set up base in the loading bay of the vessel Achio. It is believed
that there is only one hive active and most likely it is located somewhere in the
starboard section of the vessel. This assumption is based on the communication
between central command and Achio.
We know that the bacterium will seek out the most wet or warm environments.
Most likely location are: the starboard generator array, the starboard engine or
the aft engine. Possible other location are the port engine and the port generator
array. We'll have to search the vessel for the location upon arrival.

The life-support systems were deactivated so it seems likely that the hive which is
there is in hibernation mode.
Be advised this is not an easy mission as some of you think since the hive is in
hibernation. Because as soon as we dock the internal systems of the vessel will
detect us (humans) and it'll reactivate the life-support systems. The hive will wake-
up and start its ultimate mission. To infest the entire ship. We have to stop this
from happening.
They are getting smarter and smarter, there is a slight chance they know how to
operate the vessel, we can't let this powerful vessel fall into their hands no matter
what.

>IMPORTANT NOTE<

All information in this document and all information or hardware seen onboard the
vessel Achio are strictly classified. Any violation of security to pass on information
to a 3rd party is strictly prohibited. The law of TSA correction will be applied to
any violators of these demands.

Kouji_Soft [By Kouji_San]
? Copyright 1982-2003 Martin Borgman.

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Comments

  • noobynooby Join Date: 2003-04-21 Member: 15717Members Posts: 472 Fully active user
    Aaaah no, I've seen the classified material, they're coming to get me. Keep going.
  • NEO_PhyteNEO_Phyte We need shirtgons&#33; Join Date: 2003-12-16 Member: 24453Members, Constellation Posts: 1,369
    QUOTE (nooby @ Feb 1 2004, 04:48 AM)
    Aaaah no, I've seen the classified material, they're coming to get me. Keep going.

    im with him
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  • CrazySailorCrazySailor Join Date: 2004-05-06 Member: 28510Members Posts: 20
    edited June 2004
    nice. very nice. like that part about the asteroid+starship.
    if i leak the weapons information, will i be 'vaporized' or locked in the brig forever?
  • Kouji_SanKouji_San Sr. Hινε Uρкεερεг - EUPT Deputy The Netherlands, Hoogezand Join Date: 2003-05-13 Member: 16271Members, NS2 Playtester, Squad Five Blue Posts: 15,686 Advanced user
    I thought this thread already died, since I'm usually hanging arround in the mapping/art forum and all.

    About the leaking of informations. You'll be forced to play ns, FOREVER!!!
    Or at least till the time they switch to the Half-Life 2 engine confused.gif

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  • NuubNuub Join Date: 2004-01-05 Member: 25059Members Posts: 419
    Oh noes, how cruel sad.gif.

    The text was 100 times better than my own, wish i could write at all :/
  • jaboojaboo Join Date: 2004-01-05 Member: 25076Members Posts: 132
    that was sweet cant wait till the map is done so i can kill those cloaked oneos's and fades asrifle.gif tiny.gif tiny.gif
  • CrazySailorCrazySailor Join Date: 2004-05-06 Member: 28510Members Posts: 20
    no problem. ill keep on playing till i die, or go blind or get alzheimers or parkinsons or lose my reflexes.
  • ChronoChrono Local flyboy Join Date: 2003-08-05 Member: 18989Members Posts: 5,865
    can my name be on the staff list? maybe as the fighter squadron commander considering im the guy making your fighter smile.gif
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