Sy-217: T. A. R.

BijiyBijiy Fantastic Damage Join Date: 2003-11-28 Member: 23697Members
<div class="IPBDescription">Pleh...</div> Okay so this is the SY-217 Tactical Assault Rifle. I drew it kinda fast and I'm gonna fix the tac light, scope, mag, and ejector port later. C&C...?

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  • SWAT_PointmanSWAT_Pointman Join Date: 2003-10-05 Member: 21458Members
  • BijiyBijiy Fantastic Damage Join Date: 2003-11-28 Member: 23697Members
    The butt stock needs work too...
  • BijiyBijiy Fantastic Damage Join Date: 2003-11-28 Member: 23697Members
    A slightly better butt stock...
  • the_unlucky_onethe_unlucky_one Join Date: 2003-08-13 Member: 19620Members
    <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> lookz really really nice ^^, curious wut color are u going to put in..
  • BijiyBijiy Fantastic Damage Join Date: 2003-11-28 Member: 23697Members
  • BrigadierWolfBrigadierWolf Join Date: 2003-05-30 Member: 16876Members, Contributor
    Well, My two cents would be to Make the Stock a Bit more massive.. the first one looked better... And possibly move the magazine foward about an inch or so, Just looks a bit too close to the handle right now.
    But, thats just my opinion.
  • Foxtrot_UniformFoxtrot_Uniform Join Date: 2003-06-12 Member: 17328Members
    It has a lot of charcter. Really cool. I like it.
  • CaptainChetCaptainChet Join Date: 2003-04-21 Member: 15737Members, Constellation
    I liek the beefy, powerful look it has to it. This one should get modeled, definitly. perhaps by me, hmmmmmm...
  • BijiyBijiy Fantastic Damage Join Date: 2003-11-28 Member: 23697Members
    <!--QuoteBegin--BrigadierWolf+Jan 4 2004, 06:04 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (BrigadierWolf @ Jan 4 2004, 06:04 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Well, My two cents would be to Make the Stock a Bit more massive.. the first one looked better... And possibly move the magazine foward about an inch or so, Just looks a bit too close to the handle right now.
    But, thats just my opinion. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Your's would be about one of the best.
  • MilitaryPoliceMilitaryPolice Join Date: 2003-10-12 Member: 21623Members
    yea the beefy look to it is nice and so it looked more proportioned with the first stock.

    Make the front handle a bit smaller and the clip more forward and you got yourself a winner! <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • BijiyBijiy Fantastic Damage Join Date: 2003-11-28 Member: 23697Members
    Okay, I'll get to that when I get some more tracing paper or another light box.
  • funbagsfunbags Join Date: 2003-06-08 Member: 17099Members
    <!--QuoteBegin--BrigadierWolf+Jan 4 2004, 09:04 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (BrigadierWolf @ Jan 4 2004, 09:04 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> Well, My two cents would be to Make the Stock a Bit more massive.. the first one looked better... And possibly move the magazine foward about an inch or so, Just looks a bit too close to the handle right now.
    But, thats just my opinion. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    i agree, it looks like someone put the front of an OICW on the back of an mp5
  • samussamus Join Date: 2003-06-04 Member: 17005Members
    I really like it with the clip close to the handle. I definately like the beefy look to it.
  • rabbityrabbity Join Date: 2003-07-02 Member: 17866Members
    for something that huge, the magazine looks a lil puny, i think you should make it bigger, in terms of width
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