Wilcox backstory

RobRob Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
in Fan-Fiction Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">And hopefully some new info...</div><a href="http://members.fortunecity.com/rob6264/" target="_blank">Check out Wilcox's backstory</a>.  

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  • Nemesis_ZeroNemesis_Zero Old European Join Date: 2002-01-25 Member: 75Members, Retired Developer, NS1 Playtester, Constellation
    Damn well written, as usual. I'm still pretty proud you used 'my' Eniant corp.
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  • GreedoGreedo Bounty Hunter Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 37Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor
    Well, I'd say that this was quite a departure from your previous style.  I couldn't exactly put my finger on it, but it seemed to be a bit "lighter" in that it flowed much more fluently than some of your previous chapters.  The tension in thatr battle at the end was certainly something.  This definitely helps in understanding Wilcox quite a bit.  Now write some more.
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  • MonsieurEvilMonsieurEvil Join Date: 2002-01-22 Member: 4Members, Retired Developer, NS1 Playtester, Contributor
    Terrific stuff. It was pretty refreshing for the fight to not be about creepy critters. Gave that more human touch to it, and how the protaganists came to be so hard bitten. More?
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  • RobRob Unknown Enemy Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 25Members, NS1 Playtester
    Thanks guys.
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  • FreestylerFreestyler The First NS Fan Join Date: 2002-01-24 Member: 20Members
    Very good.  I love your style and I love the way you used Eniant!  Its not quite my vision of the company however.
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