Non-ns Design

esunaesuna Rock Bottom Join Date: 2003-04-03 Member: 15175Members, Constellation
edited November 2003 in Artwork Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">C&C please :D</div> Welly welly welly well then. While i've been sitting here horrendously slandering everyone's work, i've not really come up with any proof that i actually do anything artistic at all. Well, i do. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->

Basically i've been working on version 1.0 for my website (creativeblank.com - still coming) so i've been tossing a few design ideas around. This one actually made me follow through and it's pretty complete. It took about 3 hours in total, most of that was just tweaking, however.

One thing i'm pretty sure i will change is the size of the content area. While i do want it kept small, i think 280px is a little <i>too</i> small. Although, come to think of it, i did once make a site where the content area was about 200x50 before. I was big on minimalism at that time. Heh.

Anyway, here's the wip shot, feel free to C&C, but please keep it constructive.

*EDIT: Ignore bad jpeg compression, it's murdered the background. But i can't really afford to post this good quality, it's a bit big. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
*EDIT: Decreased the distance on the shadowing and saved it at a higher quality. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

Comments

  • DocterJDocterJ Join Date: 2003-04-09 Member: 15357Members
    So it will be a teeny window with the red backround around it?
    Or a popup thing?
  • MazkalineMazkaline Join Date: 2003-02-11 Member: 13409Members
    Wait a sec... theres no flashy lights, no shining metal, no complex grid... no moving parts, not much gradients and very little unnoticable textures...

    I love it <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->

    Just I would try shrinking the shadow behind it, or sharpen the shadow.
  • esunaesuna Rock Bottom Join Date: 2003-04-03 Member: 15175Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin--DocterJ+Nov 19 2003, 01:27 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (DocterJ @ Nov 19 2003, 01:27 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> So it will be a teeny window with the red backround around it?
    Or a popup thing? <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    What you see is what you get. No popups.
  • esunaesuna Rock Bottom Join Date: 2003-04-03 Member: 15175Members, Constellation
    If you wanna see a *very* early prototype, goto <a href='http://www.btinternet.com/~diesirae/cb10/' target='_blank'>http://www.btinternet.com/~diesirae/cb10/</a>. The scrollbar will be replaced (i know it's ugly) and the transparency with the shadow needs blending properly, but this is how it'll work in the end. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • EndEnd Join Date: 2003-11-11 Member: 22566Members, Constellation, Reinforced - Shadow
    text!

    woo yay, look at this text!

    TEXT TEXTY TEXT TEXT



    my face hurts



    get off of it!



    POO!!!!!!!!!!!!



    WWEEEEEE!!!

    lol
  • CaLFiNCaLFiN Join Date: 2002-11-04 Member: 6909Members
    I like it but, I find it hard to read the text on the right hand side. Also, why is it that far down? I use 1024 x 768 and have to scroll down halfway to see the main part.

    Like it though <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> The metal effect reminds me of the textures from the Jedi Knight games.
  • JimmehJimmeh Join Date: 2003-08-24 Member: 20173Members, Constellation
    I love it.

    I wish i was that good at PS <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • Fox_OneFox_One Join Date: 2003-01-15 Member: 12310Members
  • enf0rcerenf0rcer intrigued... Join Date: 2003-03-16 Member: 14584Members
    i just seems too small for my liking. It would be very cool if the links made other windows pop up on the same page. I have no idea how you'd do that without flash though. Just seems like the red is a waste of canvas when you have such a pretty window in the middle. My 2c.
  • esunaesuna Rock Bottom Join Date: 2003-04-03 Member: 15175Members, Constellation
    edited November 2003
    <!--QuoteBegin--enf0rcer+Nov 19 2003, 11:05 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (enf0rcer @ Nov 19 2003, 11:05 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> i just seems too small for my liking.  It would be very cool if the links made other windows pop up on the same page.  I have no idea how you'd do that without flash though.  Just seems like the red is a waste of canvas when you have such a pretty window in the middle.  My 2c. <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    You consider it to be a waste of space, i consider it creative placement. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    Not every page must touch the borders, not all pages must be left aligned. This site is not designed to conforum to standard practices, creativeblank.com is my creative output, essentially, where i will endeavour to do something a little different. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    *EDIT:

    <!--QuoteBegin--CaL_FiN+Nov 19 2003, 05:59 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (CaL_FiN @ Nov 19 2003, 05:59 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->I like it but, I find it hard to read the text on the right hand side.  Also, why is it that far down?  I use 1024 x 768 and have to scroll down halfway to see the main part.

    Like it though <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->  The metal effect reminds me of the textures from the Jedi Knight games.<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    I use 1240x1024 and it still requires scrolling. The main content will be opened in the iframe (or layers, i've not decided yet) so you'll only need to scroll down the one time.

    Also, the menu doesn't use real words either, so it doesn't really matter if you can read them. I might look out for a new font though, i'm using it on my map too and people are complaining they can't read it.
  • enf0rcerenf0rcer intrigued... Join Date: 2003-03-16 Member: 14584Members
    edited November 2003
    i understand the placement it's just really small. I'm not saying the red is a waste of place it's just that you have little room to add content. meh, it's your site, if you wanted comments then you've got mine, you have no reason to justify your choices to me.

    e/ oh so you will have another space for content. in that case i guess it's ok i just have to squint to see it.
  • RedfordRedford Monorailcatfjord Join Date: 2002-04-28 Member: 528Members, NS1 Playtester
    Like I said in the chat, esuna, it's Uber.
  • ZeroByteZeroByte Join Date: 2002-11-01 Member: 3057Members
    Mah eyes?

    Design wise, I like it. The background shapes could be picked out more though. However, if you look at it usability wise, it's pretty bad. Small space to read the pages, don't really appeal to me. Also, if a page get's really wordy, having it all stuck on one small area might make some people really go meh.

    As for site navigation, also difficult. The navigation doesn't really come out at you, it blends in too well with the design. Also, the text on the navigation is hard to read.
  • DocterJDocterJ Join Date: 2003-04-09 Member: 15357Members
    Just basing this on your beta version, i'd say your "console" should be a little higher up. When i open the page, its at the bottom of my screen.
  • DelarosaDelarosa Naturally Custom Join Date: 2002-11-29 Member: 10214Members, NS1 Playtester
    i'm tempted to steal it...





    but i know better.
  • Pho3niXPho3niX Join Date: 2003-09-22 Member: 21118Members
    edited November 2003
    I agree <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->

    (i don't type much, me = lazy, still)

    Andy Jones
    <!--emo&::asrifle::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/asrifle.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='asrifle.gif'><!--endemo-->

    EDIT: arg delarosa, you type too fast, <sigh> in case your confused, i'm responding to DocterJ's post. <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • LikuLiku I, am the Somberlain. Join Date: 2003-01-10 Member: 12128Members
    Good, but I don't like how it's a little nothing in a big something.
  • esunaesuna Rock Bottom Join Date: 2003-04-03 Member: 15175Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin--Delarosa+Nov 20 2003, 11:50 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Delarosa @ Nov 20 2003, 11:50 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> i'm tempted to steal it...





    but i know better. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Theft would result in me killing you 34 times. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    But as to everyone, i'm not ignoring your comments, just if i don't take it on board, don't be offended.

    The bottom line of this site is style over content. It's my creative output, i'm not doing the designs to be easy to use, i'm making them to be pretty to look at. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

    And before someone decides to jump in and say "Well if you're making websites it should be......" I don't care, i've been doing websites for too long now, i know what i need to do for clients, and it's that which makes me want to have a purely creative output as well.
  • sk84zer0sk84zer0 Join Date: 2003-06-18 Member: 17478Members
    wow that looks very good for web design
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