Ns Player-written Literature

aegaeon

<div class="IPBDescription">Two ns players need your opinions!</div> Hello. A friend of mine and myself have written a few chapters with NS as the inspiration and the base. We have made a website and we would GREATLY APPRECIATE the Natural-selection community's feedback on the stories.

Any feedback, positive or negative, is welcome.
Note: The stories are on halt until we get some comments from the community>

www.triad.s5.com

that is the website where the stories can be located. Thank you for your support and your time.

Daxx

So help me god if this leads to Outwar....


Thank god, its Legit!


Reading now, but there is a whole forum for this stuff you know <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

Edit: And considering the amount of traffic through these boards, I hope you don't pay for hosting based on bandwidth <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->

uranium_235

Haven't read Mike's but the story about Vin... needs some work. It's well written, I mean, the guy obviously knows how to use the English language, but it needs... STORY-type work. Who is Vin? Why do I like him? Honsetly, I didn't like his name and I knew nothing about him, so I didn't care to hear the story about him.

LogicBox

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need some pictures !! hehe


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LogicBox
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