My Render!

IcarusIcarus Join Date: 2003-04-21 Member: 15706Members
<div class="IPBDescription">...Back and looking better than ever!</div> Well...<img src='http://icarus.gamersnetwork.org/pov-ray/battle.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image'>

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  • MavericMaveric Join Date: 2002-08-07 Member: 1101Members
    Nice. Very good job with the window reflection.
  • RedfordRedford Monorailcatfjord Join Date: 2002-04-28 Member: 528Members, NS1 Playtester
    Your bullet still looks nothing like a bullet, and it has no sense of motion. Just so you know.
  • IcejellyIcejelly Join Date: 2003-06-10 Member: 17176Members
    wow....great render....but the ceiling kinda doesnt blend with the whole picture... <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • LikuLiku I, am the Somberlain. Join Date: 2003-01-10 Member: 12128Members
    ^Agreed X3^ Awesome work though.
  • kyliegirlkyliegirl Gorge Master Australia Join Date: 2002-12-11 Member: 10586Members, Reinforced - Shadow
  • homerxhomerx Join Date: 2003-04-01 Member: 15094Members
    Good work. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • IcarusIcarus Join Date: 2003-04-21 Member: 15706Members
    Thanks all for the comments.
    I have an idea for the bullet, well keeping the curent bullet, just shortening the end a bit and puting maybe a wave (ala matrix) with a refractive propertie, surrounding the bullet with a bit of fire at the end of it?
    And about the roof, i really sux at UV mapping things so yeh.
  • GoPeDeRiCkGoPeDeRiCk Join Date: 2003-03-21 Member: 14742Members
    make that bullet matrix style with that jet wash behind it. or like in TS, make a white trail of some type..
  • Fox_OneFox_One Join Date: 2003-01-15 Member: 12310Members
    The Marine looks too...calm. Have someone skin a sneer onto his face or something.
  • LordLestatLordLestat Join Date: 2003-06-03 Member: 16976Members
    Maybe also... the muzzleflash....

    it got this black around it



    otherwise.. nice

    like the window(as said the reflection)
  • Mr_JeburtOMr_JeburtO Join Date: 2003-08-29 Member: 20340Members
    <!--QuoteBegin--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->Your bullet still looks nothing like a bullet, and it has no sense of motion<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->

    i agree with Redford it looks abit to square and it has no point so its a pritty **** bullet.

    apart from that i think it very kool. i like the reflection in the glass.
  • DuhflyinlerkDuhflyinlerk Join Date: 2002-11-27 Member: 10071Members
    err..i cant see the picture <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • Dirty_Harry_PotterDirty_Harry_Potter Join Date: 2002-11-21 Member: 9500Members
    <!--QuoteBegin--Revolver+Oct 26 2003, 05:52 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Revolver @ Oct 26 2003, 05:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> The Marine looks too...calm. Have someone skin a sneer onto his face or something. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    no its 'iceman' the marine that defeated a Onos barehanded XD
  • DuhflyinlerkDuhflyinlerk Join Date: 2002-11-27 Member: 10071Members
    Wernt these marines like genetically altered to be like a super fighting machine type thing?
    I mean..If your made to kill, youd prob have no emotion, so the emotionless face fits perfectly.
  • Dirty_Harry_PotterDirty_Harry_Potter Join Date: 2002-11-21 Member: 9500Members
    no i think you're messing it up with Halo -_-
  • DuhflyinlerkDuhflyinlerk Join Date: 2002-11-27 Member: 10071Members
    Oops hehe, my bad, mis-read something
    But eh I still think its a pretty good render
  • SkieSkie Skulk Progenitor Join Date: 2003-10-18 Member: 21766Members, NS2 Playtester, Reinforced - Shadow
    My opinions:
    Yes. The bullet should have some sort of trail thingy.
    Make the darks more dark, and lights more light. Pictures look great if they have a huge scale of brightness and darkness. In my opinion.
    The muzzle flash should affect the marine, fade and the walls. Maybe photoshop it some? Or just add light somehow. I'm not into modeling, so I don't know how to make it look best. :)

    Anyways, great so far!
  • Fox_OneFox_One Join Date: 2003-01-15 Member: 12310Members
    <!--QuoteBegin--Dirty Harry Potter+Oct 26 2003, 03:15 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Dirty Harry Potter @ Oct 26 2003, 03:15 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <!--QuoteBegin--Revolver+Oct 26 2003, 05:52 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Revolver @ Oct 26 2003, 05:52 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> The Marine looks too...calm. Have someone skin a sneer onto his face or something. <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    no its 'iceman' the marine that defeated a Onos barehanded XD <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    ROFL
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