It Says Post Poems
<div class="IPBDescription">and i write them heres one</div> [EDIT]:lol, somehow the first stanza got put before the message... go fig... its fixed now.
Hey, It says we can post poems, and i write them, so here ya go, feel free to use if you think it will further ya with teh ladies...xor.... and tell me what ya think
Slowly and softly the sun fades away
The world relenquishes the last shreds of day
And the dark of night veils the world
Yet the odor of the air smells more sweetly than ever it did before
My mind thrills, every sense is electrified
and upon every breath floats a hint of euphoria
But what is so different
What has changed so much
that this night should be so electric
'Tis only you that has changed
And not truly you, but your presence
That you are here seems to have made the difference
For long now you have lived in my heart
Whether you knew or not
It is so, and shall be forever
Hey, It says we can post poems, and i write them, so here ya go, feel free to use if you think it will further ya with teh ladies...xor.... and tell me what ya think
Slowly and softly the sun fades away
The world relenquishes the last shreds of day
And the dark of night veils the world
Yet the odor of the air smells more sweetly than ever it did before
My mind thrills, every sense is electrified
and upon every breath floats a hint of euphoria
But what is so different
What has changed so much
that this night should be so electric
'Tis only you that has changed
And not truly you, but your presence
That you are here seems to have made the difference
For long now you have lived in my heart
Whether you knew or not
It is so, and shall be forever
Comments
Most topics posted... Not triple.. Quadruple (sp?) but SIXTROPICAL <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif'><!--endemo-->
Pld.
Jokes aside, the poem reall is nice. Better than I could write, at any rate <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
anyhow this topic is open i might as well use it. <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
this is actually a song not a peom. the Italic part has a differant tempo, thats differant from the rest of the song, thats why that part doesnt rhyme. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
You never really know how to feel
Knowing life is one big lie
Making happiness seem so real
Only to watch it die
You?ve always fought to love him
He made life worth another day
Till your love for him grew dim
Not ever knowing what to say
A voice is calling deep in your heart
Telling you to find happiness
So this little voice could never part
Leaving you cold and lifeless
You always tried to hide
Wanting to come out
You want to decide
All that life is all about
You couldn?t make this choice
Just go away and leave
Then bring out this cryptic voice
And convince it to believe
Never will end, Its all been said
who ever really knew you?
The questions in your head
Who is there to show you?
You always tried to hide
Wanting to come out
You never did abide
The rules of life, no doubt
<i>Tragedy is the best way to
Describe this suicide
The strenuous painful death
Of this cryptic one inside
So that?s the way it goes
No one ever really knows
The rivalry that goes on
Deep with in the heart
?and how these cryptic rivals die
Never finishing what they start?</i>
You always tried to hide
Wanting to come out
Put these voices to the side
And come see what lifes about
?rest in peace?
<!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> i wrote that 4 years ago when i went through something most people shouldnt have to deal with. <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo--> thats the reason for the dark vibe. ive gotten away from the dark depressing music..kinda sorta... i like all music. this is just one...i actually am writing a novel. but im quite the perfectionist, and it will never be finished. <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo--> i wrote like 100pages and trashed it... i started again a year ago. but i only have 1 page down. <!--emo&???--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/confused.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused.gif'><!--endemo--> so at this rate it will never be finished, so maybe if i find it good enough ill post some of it. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
Roaring outside our spawn door
Oh no! Onoses!
*bows* thank you.
all territorial squabbles aside, nice,
and poets, as a group, aren't a particularly bright, chipper bunch
Static.
Mirrorshades flash in the neon darkness
archology shadows, fungal life vats.
A new star is rising in the east
of neurosurgery, and dataflow detox
You are your reality and everyone is dead,
replacement parts, the morass of god.
Soul echoes in the chambers,
the chirping pattern inlays
where man and machine scream unity
and fade into the night as one.
Roaring outside our spawn door
Oh no! Onoses!
*bows* thank you. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
*Snaps* Very cool daddy-o... very cool.
...I'll title it 'Ohne Dich' for now, it's untitiled in my word doc though <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->.
Weil du von mir fliegen.
Ich werde ohne dich liegen.
Wann ich will nur allein werden.
So ich kann ohne dich sterben.
Meine Meinung hat geschalten.
Warum habe ich dich nicht gehalten?
Hast du mich schon vergisst?
Hast du mich nicht sogar vermisst?
Bin ich nichts zu dir?
Willst du nichts zu tun mit mir?
Meine Augen sind voll mit Tr?nen.
und der Hals mir ist spannen.
Und ich weine weil ich bin ohne dich.
Feel free to correct the grammar...lol. If someone wants to know what I was trying to say in english I can post that too. Since my german's probably not right.
Listening to: When I come around, by Green Day
...burrrp.
more, more
If given a choice to suceed or fail
I shall choose the latter
If Darkness swept over
Can and it will falter
For many are those who die
And those who yield
But only through suffering
Can one truly see within
God gave me a decision
To live and die with voice
Give me my cry
And I shall choose to fail
For with my last shade
I shall live to my sound
EDIT: Is there a poem thread?
Where's it gone, darnit? My desk is a mess... Ah, here we are.
Dragons, dragons, everywhere
Swooping, diving through the air
Returning to a mountain lair
And then 'till dawn they sleep.
Dragons, dragons, hoarding gold.
Shining coins and bars of old.
Stolen in the morning cold
Then off to gloat they creep
Dragons, dragons, fierce and proud
Gliding high above the ground
They cut the air and make no sound
As they hunt for meals of sheep.
Dragons, dragons, roar and shriek
As they fight around the mountain peak
With spiky teeth, and not one beak.
The prize? The loser's gold to keep.
Dragons, dragons, hunting now.
Listen and I'll tell you how.
They find an unoffending cow
And then bite off its head.
Dragons, dragons, armed with claws.
Massive blades on massive paws.
Their foes will always lose because
The fight with swords instead.
Dragons, dragons, huge in size
With fearson, burning, blood-red eyes.
To try to kill one is not wise
Because you'll end up dead.
Dragons, dragons, wearing scales.
They have sharp spines along their tails.
Their flaming breath burns smoking trails
And makes steel swords glow red.
Dragons, dragons, green and red
Don't like to walk, they fly instead
They spot a sheep and off they head
To flame and eat it when it's dead.
Dragons, dragons, hunted down.
Angry people in the town
Went to the man who wears the crown
And ordered him to fight.
Dragons, dragons, stayed right there
Though heroes came from everywhere.
The king, sitting upon his chair
Continued on in spite.
Dragons, dragons' fires burn
And stupid knights who never learn
Stand and wait to take their turn
To run away in fright.
Dragons, dragons, soon got bored
When they could find no gold to hoard
So they packed up and flew abroad
To find another site.
Dragons, dragons, didn't fight.
They bore no malice, had no spite.
They flew away and out of sight
And the people soon forgot their fright.
Dragons, dragons, forever sleep.
No longer in the night-time creep.
Safe, for now, are herds of sheep
But the stories, still, are ours to keep.
...
Mostly, I re-write songs Wierd Al style. Like <a href='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/index.php?act=ST&f=6&t=19656&' target='_blank'>this one</a>, which I'm particularly proud of <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
Broken bones so brittle and white
shattered soul so easily shorn
blood runs from veins split open
and my tears flow from eyes weary and worn
my broken bones ache and wail
not with half the passion of my soul
wrenched and torn by the world to which it was bourn
still more is the burden, of bearing this
of healing myself as one, the only one, alone
it crushes me more, and shreds me just a bit
but i fight it, i bear it, and go on
this world to be conquered like myself
alone
Where's it gone, darnit? My desk is a mess... Ah, here we are.
::DRAGON POEM:: (Or maybe it's a song?)
...
Mostly, I re-write songs Wierd Al style. Like <a href='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/index.php?act=ST&f=6&t=19656&' target='_blank'>this one</a>, which I'm particularly proud of <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> <!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
That is a high quality poem, it's pretty funny, has morals, is interesting. Makes me want to write a riddle or poem for my NWN module... <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> . I got a rather swear-filled poem, not sure if I should post an edited version, basically bleep out the 20 f-words or so...heh, I was **** that day... I'll try to edit it so most of the swears are removed...
For the wait, we'll throw out the ol' Haiku (I guess this would mean its 5:7:5):
Dog
A black dog lays down
Staring at the bare wooden floor
He lays down his head
I've got another poem if I can find the filename.
Listening to: Losing my Religion, by REM
...moew?
Dedication to a Girl
Mistakes I've made towards you, can I atone?
What can I do when I am just alone,
Knowing any thoughts I ameliorate myself with wont last.
Since my time with you has long passed?
I know it is impossible to try to forget,
While I flounder in remorseful regret.
Within many memories that remain unevoked.
That review sublime qualities easily overlooked.
The aura around you encompasses more than physical;
Every quality about you is apical.
Your name presents its own ethereal radiance.
Subtle ripples in the mind. Something missed in a glance.
You present an image of love and fear
Brought to me through a tear.
Joy and sadness, enveloped in one.
Next to beauty and radiance akin to the sun.
Your resplendent countenance,
accompanied by an intellectual ambiance.
You are embraced by Beauty and Intelligence,
Also imbued with Personality's innocence.
A spirit I’ll never glimpse again.
A visage of flawlessness, a perfect ten.
To me this rings true.
Perhaps it’s altered for you.
My mind sprints in place,
Revisiting the vision that is your face.
Your silhouette constantly materializes in my mind.
When I look inside, repentance is what I find.
Where are you now is what I wonder,
while I constantly revisit my blunder
Because I have lost all my possibilities…
Leave me by myself with my absurdities.
There it is with 2 stanzas removed. What I was going for was using some of the most beautiful and flowing words in the english language. Which is why it's not done yet, some parts are still rough (and the fact, when I say it unevoked and overlooked don't rhyme). Still editing the ...swear poem...heh. It's called F-word It...which might give you an idea why it would need to be edited for this forum.
Hope you enjoyed it. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.natural-selection.org/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
Listening to: Stuck in the Middle with You, by Steve Miller's Band
...if only...
four-star daydream,
think I'll buy be a football team.
C:/
C:/dos
C:/dos run
I think I got that from a shirt, I'm not to possitive though.
The world overwhelms me
It stands me up and knocks me down
It tears my soul and shreds my mind
The only outward evedence, my frown
Now I walk away,
Tears pooling in my eyes
They come to wash away
The pain that incites my cries
But simple tears on their own
Can never soothe my pain
So I'm standing in the rain
Left to cry alone
Chorus:
I want to be rid of this
I want to reach the end of this
The sorrow confines my life so
It chips and scratches at me oh
No matter how hard I try
I'm walking away
At the end of the day
And I'm left to cry
Verse 2:
One foot then the next, my feet fall right away
Alone in my mind, alone as I plod through the day
Looking down at the ground, not hearing what you say
Even if you reach out to me, I wouldnt hear it anyway
Whispers of your message
Hints of your call
Now I hear what you say to me
and I know I was never alone at all
If you let me catch my breath
If I can say what I need to say
Maybe night will be bright
And darkness turn to day
Chorus:
I want to be rid of this
I want to reach the end of this
The sorrow confines my life so
It chips and scratches at me oh
No matter how hard I try
At the end of the day
I'm walking away
And I'm left to cry
Ending:(softer)
Whispers of your message
Hints of your call
Now I hear what you say to me
And I know I was never alone at all
...I'll title it 'Ohne Dich' for now, it's untitiled in my word doc though <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->.
Weil du von mir fliegen.
Ich werde ohne dich liegen.
Wann ich will nur allein werden.
So ich kann ohne dich sterben.
Meine Meinung hat geschalten.
Warum habe ich dich nicht gehalten?
Hast du mich schon vergisst?
Hast du mich nicht sogar vermisst?
Bin ich nichts zu dir?
Willst du nichts zu tun mit mir?
Meine Augen sind voll mit Tr?nen.
und der Hals mir ist spannen.
Und ich weine weil ich bin ohne dich.
Feel free to correct the grammar...lol. If someone wants to know what I was trying to say in english I can post that too. Since my german's probably not right.
Listening to: When I come around, by Green Day
...burrrp. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
german can be hard <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
then again look at english and how hard it is. <!--emo&;)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wink.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wink.gif'><!--endemo-->
cool that someone wrote a peom in german though.
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In This You Will Find
The Answer To Your Troubles
Correctness Is First.
Chips
Crispy potatoes
Usually in bags of 60g
Each piece addicting
C:/dos
C:/dos run
I think I got that from a shirt, I'm not to possitive though. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
"Only one person in a thousand would find THAT funny!"
"Yes, we call that the Dennis Miller Ratio!"
- Lisa Simpson and Professor John Q. Frink, from that Mensa episode