"ferai"
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Armonkyi Join Date: 2003-04-21 Member: 15731Members, Constellation
Armonkyi Join Date: 2003-04-21 Member: 15731Members, Constellation
<div class="IPBDescription">A different NS story</div> <span style='color:red'>*Updated story pages, improved layout and setup.*</span>
OK I can now answer all your questions about this here:
<a href='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/index.php?act=ST&f=7&t=39895' target='_blank'>http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/in...=ST&f=7&t=39895</a>
To answer your questions before you ask them:
<b>What is a Ferai?</b>
That is what you were looking at in that concept art; it is NOT a skulk, nor was it ever a skulk in the sense you think.
<b>Buh, wuh?!</b>
This story takes place before the events of the kharaa and stuff. The Ferai existed before the kharaa in my story, and in my story, guess what the kharaa skulk is based on <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> You guessed it, Ferai
<b>Ferai? How do you pronouce that?! Sounds like a car.</b>
It's pronounced "ferr-ayyy". Yes it sounds like "furry", but if you carefully pronouce words you will realise that it sounds different.
<b>Umm, this doesnt make sense, wuh? buh?</b>
The story is first person narrative from the viewpoint of a Ferai. The names therfore are in the Ferai's native language. I doubt they will call themselves "bob" for instance ^-^
Oh, and "Lakath" Is the planet they live on - more will be explained later in the story, yes it seems short but this is actually 2 pages worth of story, at least according to msword. It's only a single part though, More will come later.
So here is the story:D
<a href='http://www.haxgames.com/ferai/' target='_blank'>Click here!!</a>
*url updated*
OK I can now answer all your questions about this here:
<a href='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/index.php?act=ST&f=7&t=39895' target='_blank'>http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/in...=ST&f=7&t=39895</a>
To answer your questions before you ask them:
<b>What is a Ferai?</b>
That is what you were looking at in that concept art; it is NOT a skulk, nor was it ever a skulk in the sense you think.
<b>Buh, wuh?!</b>
This story takes place before the events of the kharaa and stuff. The Ferai existed before the kharaa in my story, and in my story, guess what the kharaa skulk is based on <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> You guessed it, Ferai
<b>Ferai? How do you pronouce that?! Sounds like a car.</b>
It's pronounced "ferr-ayyy". Yes it sounds like "furry", but if you carefully pronouce words you will realise that it sounds different.
<b>Umm, this doesnt make sense, wuh? buh?</b>
The story is first person narrative from the viewpoint of a Ferai. The names therfore are in the Ferai's native language. I doubt they will call themselves "bob" for instance ^-^
Oh, and "Lakath" Is the planet they live on - more will be explained later in the story, yes it seems short but this is actually 2 pages worth of story, at least according to msword. It's only a single part though, More will come later.
So here is the story:D
<a href='http://www.haxgames.com/ferai/' target='_blank'>Click here!!</a>
*url updated*
Comments
In other words, look for it by the end of september. ^^
Good one, eager to read the rest.
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UPDATED!!!
<a href='http://www.haxgames.com/story.html' target='_blank'>RAH! More ferai stuff!! (scroll down past section 1 nubs <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->)</a>
Section 3 should be later this week...maybe.
Nice balance between the action of the racetrack and the sneaking around, then the dialogue.
I'm struggling not to give away bits I know from MSN <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->
in the next chapter were headed for a little action eh?
this looks to be good
but maybe the thing that dropped from the sky isn't hostile, just maybe....
Thanks for the continued good feedback guys <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> I'll keep you updated ont he story's progress.
(IE was mean to me and I did it by accident)
I just hope I can manage, section 3 is allready huge at half-way to it's completion O_o.
You'll be waiting a while for part 2, as I need to have a break, nearly gave myself rsi from typing this story <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
I also have yet to plan part 2 in any serious detail, but it should be of similar detail to part 1 <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
Man, this is a great piece of work. The descriptions are simply awsome. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> Whish I could describe like that......
Sorry if I seem to be repeating myself, but what else can I say?
I take it he isn't a violent creature and I take it that the cave was spaceship and teh creatare was a pre tsa black ops man <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo-->