Please Check For Errors

chubbysteve

Here is a background story for a map I'm making. It's short but relates alot to the history of the phases and other such relevant information.

I want to check that I can use these planet names and technology in my story, or whether it clashes and goes all melted and bubbly.

<a href='http://www.parkway-capital.com/steve/sigs/ns_bg.html' target='_blank'>http://www.parkway-capital.com/steve/sigs/ns_bg.html</a>

So what I'm checking is - Electricity and the whole reactors thing, correct relation to the techtrope article, and no bad names for planets and 'stuff' (do suggest better names if you want).

Cheers all

chubbysteve

Oh well.