cheers Bytor! feel free to put the existing comics somewhere...cos there will definately be more <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> when i decide which of my ideas to use...mmm
ART Line quality as usual is perfectly varied as needed, marines are drawn great with a good sense of anatomy, color scheme of the unimportant background helps to deemphasize it, splashing liquid looks great, question marks and "ouch" symbols are clean and unobtrusive, brilliant depiction of emotion: annoyed "hackers!" marine vs jovial Jeff etc, nice use of a pattern motif in the last frame as opposed to actually drawing the pattern - gives a feeling of distance, cracks in the wall and other scenery isn't blatant and adds atmosphere (BTW are they in "mess hall" <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> ). Again, you might want to center-justify the text boxes for easier reading.
CHARACTER DESIGN Like I said Jeff is back and funny as ever, still got that chubby look!! It's great how he talks to himself/boasts, marine outfits are consistent though they each have a distinctive body/head shape, Bob is done quite nicely, his snout really does look like a nose in the first shot, and his claws hanging out of his sleeves - GOLD! Oh, nice addition of the black marine, it really helps the variety of the last frame.
HUMOR Nice surprise effect with the third frame - I wasn't expecting that! The triple punchline is nice (skinhackers, Bob?, and Ferret IQ) Kinda makes the last frame a nice conclusion... umm I LOVE the tooth falling out of bob's jaws, that's funny, and what IS that he's eating? A lump of butter? Marine rations? Oh wait, in the first frame, Bob's lookin at the food as if he's disappointed/disgusted! I would be too i guess, if I was a fade lookin for some nice marine leg for dinner and all i got was some compressed oatmeal <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> . Nice job making light of an issue people got really upset about.
You've done it again! Great-looking, funny strip. Keep it up, you have a gift there!
im sure i can think up a few other ideas for ns comics.. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
Ive always wanted to see some satire on the Khaaras uncanny ability to work switches and doors. You would think having nails for feet would complicate things eh?
lol, maybe <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> but i was thinking more along the lines of the dreaded hitbox bug...once i have an idea going, ya cant stop me!..well you can but...mm
First one didn't make sense?? I thought it was the better of the two ... I just loved Jeff's reaction to the alien. But they both rock. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
<!--QuoteBegin--Sephiroth2k+Jan 27 2003, 06:31 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Sephiroth2k @ Jan 27 2003, 06:31 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> just look at the new topics with people bishing about changes! tons of ideas there! btw great comic, i love it! do you have a link to your first one? <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd--> <a href='http://groups.yahoo.com/group/making_games/files/Unrelated/windowwiper.bmp' target='_blank'>http://groups.yahoo.com/group/making_games...windowwiper.bmp</a>
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feel free to put the existing comics somewhere...cos there will definately be more <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
when i decide which of my ideas to use...mmm
Ok here's what I got for ya this time, norn:
ART
Line quality as usual is perfectly varied as needed, marines are drawn great with a good sense of anatomy, color scheme of the unimportant background helps to deemphasize it, splashing liquid looks great, question marks and "ouch" symbols are clean and unobtrusive, brilliant depiction of emotion: annoyed "hackers!" marine vs jovial Jeff etc, nice use of a pattern motif in the last frame as opposed to actually drawing the pattern - gives a feeling of distance, cracks in the wall and other scenery isn't blatant and adds atmosphere (BTW are they in "mess hall" <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> ). Again, you might want to center-justify the text boxes for easier reading.
CHARACTER DESIGN
Like I said Jeff is back and funny as ever, still got that chubby look!! It's great how he talks to himself/boasts, marine outfits are consistent though they each have a distinctive body/head shape, Bob is done quite nicely, his snout really does look like a nose in the first shot, and his claws hanging out of his sleeves - GOLD! Oh, nice addition of the black marine, it really helps the variety of the last frame.
HUMOR
Nice surprise effect with the third frame - I wasn't expecting that! The triple punchline is nice (skinhackers, Bob?, and Ferret IQ) Kinda makes the last frame a nice conclusion... umm I LOVE the tooth falling out of bob's jaws, that's funny, and what IS that he's eating? A lump of butter? Marine rations? Oh wait, in the first frame, Bob's lookin at the food as if he's disappointed/disgusted! I would be too i guess, if I was a fade lookin for some nice marine leg for dinner and all i got was some compressed oatmeal <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> . Nice job making light of an issue people got really upset about.
You've done it again! Great-looking, funny strip. Keep it up, you have a gift there!
YAY!..again!...
im sure i can think up a few other ideas for ns comics.. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
Ive always wanted to see some satire on the Khaaras uncanny ability to work switches and doors. You would think having nails for feet would complicate things eh?
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