American Pie
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<div class="IPBDescription">song for Box revamped by Gen lee c. razy</div> Transformation of American Pie for Box
Gonna make this song about him! I'll slowly edit this post when I make a new verse to the song. I'll start things off with the first lines, if you have any ideas post them, and if I like it, I might change the lyrics to fit your idea for that part of the song. Here goes!
A long long time ago..
I can still remember how those fortresses..
used to make me laugh.
And I knew that if I had the chance..
I could make those marines prance..
and maybe..
theyd siege me..
in a while..
But NS_Hera made me shiver
with every chamber id deliever
Sieges on the doorstep
couldnt make.. one more def.
I don't remember.. how I died..
when they made the final rush on the hive..
but something changed me deep inside..
the day.. my chambers.. died.
So bye, bye, constructive building bye bye.
If the marines see me then I'll kiss my **** goodbye.
And then the skulks where yelling curses and lies
asking "Who the f**ks saving for the hive?"
"Who the f**ks saving for the hive.."
Ohhh.. did you make enough defense chambers,
and do you have faith in the kharra race..
If the hive tells you so..
And do you believe in hide and seek
that hiding, can save your whole team
and can you teach me how to build.. real low. (Referring to the underground tunnel from the vent in CC on eclipse)
Well I know that you're going to build one again..
cus I saw ya.. gestin' in engine..
you then ran off alone..
man I wonder where you'll go.
Ohh, I was a lothsome fraggin, biting skulk
with a.. 30 carapace and a hint of luck
but I knew I was out of luck
the day, the gorges died.
I started singing
bye, bye, constructive building bye bye.
If the marines see me then I'll kiss my **** goodbye.
And then the skulks where yelling curses and lies
asking "Who the f**ks saving for the hive?"
"Who the f**ks saving for the hive.."
Gonna make this song about him! I'll slowly edit this post when I make a new verse to the song. I'll start things off with the first lines, if you have any ideas post them, and if I like it, I might change the lyrics to fit your idea for that part of the song. Here goes!
A long long time ago..
I can still remember how those fortresses..
used to make me laugh.
And I knew that if I had the chance..
I could make those marines prance..
and maybe..
theyd siege me..
in a while..
But NS_Hera made me shiver
with every chamber id deliever
Sieges on the doorstep
couldnt make.. one more def.
I don't remember.. how I died..
when they made the final rush on the hive..
but something changed me deep inside..
the day.. my chambers.. died.
So bye, bye, constructive building bye bye.
If the marines see me then I'll kiss my **** goodbye.
And then the skulks where yelling curses and lies
asking "Who the f**ks saving for the hive?"
"Who the f**ks saving for the hive.."
Ohhh.. did you make enough defense chambers,
and do you have faith in the kharra race..
If the hive tells you so..
And do you believe in hide and seek
that hiding, can save your whole team
and can you teach me how to build.. real low. (Referring to the underground tunnel from the vent in CC on eclipse)
Well I know that you're going to build one again..
cus I saw ya.. gestin' in engine..
you then ran off alone..
man I wonder where you'll go.
Ohh, I was a lothsome fraggin, biting skulk
with a.. 30 carapace and a hint of luck
but I knew I was out of luck
the day, the gorges died.
I started singing
bye, bye, constructive building bye bye.
If the marines see me then I'll kiss my **** goodbye.
And then the skulks where yelling curses and lies
asking "Who the f**ks saving for the hive?"
"Who the f**ks saving for the hive.."
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<!--QuoteBegin--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> </td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->So bye, bye, constructive building bye bye.
If the marines see me then I'll kiss my **** goodbye.
And then the skulks where yelling curses and lies
asking "Who the f**ks saving for the hive?"
"Who the f**ks saving for the hive.."<!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
I literally bust out laughing when I read that while humming the tune. I'm still in tears laughing just by glancing up at the quoted section as I post this reply. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
HMG's in hera reception
the skulks blew up in less than seven seconds
8 to spawn and rising fast
building ressource towers in holoroom
yellow blobs approach - my impending doom
with the skulks, at our hive, afk
now the gorge is dead and his money gone
so half his team go gorge just as they spawn
they all ran out to build
oh but they never got the chance
I'm listening to the original mp3 while reading that - great. I like how you kept some of the original words in there too, like "But NS_Hera made me shiver..."
I'm glad you all like it. It is now completley finished and you can read the rest of it at the c|E forums - Main Forum. website is eternity.digitalguile.com
If you ever release this on mp3, I will listen to it all day long cause it pwnz0rs!
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aww what a nice guy =P
can't wait for yer next song!
Anyway this is funny, but i prefered the onos rap.
Let me see what I can do in eclipse and in maint
In other words, drop med packs!
In other words, commiee love me!
Fill my clip with caps and let me shoot for ever more
Kills are all I long for all I worship and adore
In other words recognize meeeee
In other words... Drop Jaayy-Peeeee
Fill me up with fuel and let me weld for ever more.
You are all long for all I worship and adore
In other words
Drop Jay-Peeeeee
In other words...
In other words...
In other words, Commiee loooovvvveeeee...
ME
Dedicated to CaBBaGE and [FSA]Kickarse for their 'l33t' hive wealding skills in Eclipse just now.
And all the ironic bits about ramboish behaviour doesnt apply to them, they were told to go <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
Not quite up to the standard of the thread starter I admit hehe
ps if anyone can come up with a better 2nd line doso, its blatantly wrong <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='sad.gif'><!--endemo-->
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