Love lorn poetry
<div class="IPBDescription">Poems inspired by time spent with emily.</div>All of these poems were created after Emily hugged me. Unfortunetly, words cannot fully express how it felt, and memories cannot fully revive the wonderous emotions that coursed through my body, but I can try.
I was asked by Three people in the MIRC Chatroom for Natural Selection to post these for them to read and to share with the community, so I have. Enjoy.
<span style='color:green'><i>Poem 1</span></i>
The gentle wind about us
As I feel your soft embrace..
The sun warms my skin
as your touch warms my chest..
We part,
But my heart still beats,
My breath comes slow,
And your embrace still lingers.
<span style='color:green'><i>Poem 2</span></i>
The beating of my heart
Comes swift and powerful,
Just like this love inside,
That my body strains to hold..
I long for your kiss
And the feeling of your embrace..
I long to see that love
Reflected in your face..
If only the words came as swift
As these feelings in my heart,
Perhaps then
We could obtain a start.
<span style='color:green'><i>Poem 3</span></i>
I long for your embrace,
To see your lovely face,
To hold you,
And gaze in your eyes..
Every moment,
Every day,
I would spend them anyplace,
Just to be by your side.
<span style='color:green'><i>Poem 4</span></i>
A gentle touch,
A soft embrace,
The perfect love
Reflected in your face..
Your stunning eyes
Gazing into mine..
My heart beats,
I can hardly breathe,
But I hold dear
Every second you are near.
<span style='color:green'><i>Poem 5</span></i>
You look at me,
I look at you
Time slows to a crawl..
Suddenly,
The Moment's gone..
We look away,
How shy we are..
I love you,
You love me,
That much I can easily see..
So why do we
Always look away?
Give us time,
I know someday,
It will change.
<span style='color:green'><i>Poem 6</span></i>
Gazing deeply into your eyes,
Love and tenderness I see..
I pray that one day we can be together,
Both in love,
You and me.
<span style='color:green'><i>Poem 7</span></i>
You move close,
You hug me dear,
You make me feel
Like I'm meant for here..
I love you so,
But how do you feel?
I think it's the same,
As you hold me near..
It's not that long,
But it goes on,
You move away,
But the feeling stays..
I pray it's true,
That you share the love
I feel for you.
<span style='color:green'><i>Poem 8</span></i>
Every day,
Every night,
Thoughts fill my mind
Of a life
With you by my side..
This love I feel
I hold so dear,
And I long
To hold you near.
I was asked by Three people in the MIRC Chatroom for Natural Selection to post these for them to read and to share with the community, so I have. Enjoy.
<span style='color:green'><i>Poem 1</span></i>
The gentle wind about us
As I feel your soft embrace..
The sun warms my skin
as your touch warms my chest..
We part,
But my heart still beats,
My breath comes slow,
And your embrace still lingers.
<span style='color:green'><i>Poem 2</span></i>
The beating of my heart
Comes swift and powerful,
Just like this love inside,
That my body strains to hold..
I long for your kiss
And the feeling of your embrace..
I long to see that love
Reflected in your face..
If only the words came as swift
As these feelings in my heart,
Perhaps then
We could obtain a start.
<span style='color:green'><i>Poem 3</span></i>
I long for your embrace,
To see your lovely face,
To hold you,
And gaze in your eyes..
Every moment,
Every day,
I would spend them anyplace,
Just to be by your side.
<span style='color:green'><i>Poem 4</span></i>
A gentle touch,
A soft embrace,
The perfect love
Reflected in your face..
Your stunning eyes
Gazing into mine..
My heart beats,
I can hardly breathe,
But I hold dear
Every second you are near.
<span style='color:green'><i>Poem 5</span></i>
You look at me,
I look at you
Time slows to a crawl..
Suddenly,
The Moment's gone..
We look away,
How shy we are..
I love you,
You love me,
That much I can easily see..
So why do we
Always look away?
Give us time,
I know someday,
It will change.
<span style='color:green'><i>Poem 6</span></i>
Gazing deeply into your eyes,
Love and tenderness I see..
I pray that one day we can be together,
Both in love,
You and me.
<span style='color:green'><i>Poem 7</span></i>
You move close,
You hug me dear,
You make me feel
Like I'm meant for here..
I love you so,
But how do you feel?
I think it's the same,
As you hold me near..
It's not that long,
But it goes on,
You move away,
But the feeling stays..
I pray it's true,
That you share the love
I feel for you.
<span style='color:green'><i>Poem 8</span></i>
Every day,
Every night,
Thoughts fill my mind
Of a life
With you by my side..
This love I feel
I hold so dear,
And I long
To hold you near.
Comments
Here's one I wrote when I was 15...
When I look at you,
your body explodes into light.
Diffusing in the air around you,
like a beacan in a world of darkness.
You are my guide.
I turn and follow your brightness
You take me to the edge of the ocean
and your reflection spreads out over the horizon...
I wonder why you have taken me here
the world stretches away under the sea
I reach out to hold and kiss your face,
but when I touch you,
I burn away.
Here I lay, broken hearted,
Tried to poop, but only farted.
<span style='color:black'>I think Jedisar is a loser and will never get this chick he is trying to get. It is quite clear! Jedisar = loser.</span>
The Small Tree
Said the Tall Tree to the Small Tree:
Why do you look up at me?
What up here's so grand to see?
Said the tall tree to the small tree
Said the Small Tree to the Tall Tree:
'T's not my fault, please don't blame me!
'T's merely the way I've grown, you see.
Said the Small Tree to the Tall Tree
Said the Tall Tree to the Small Tree:
My my I am truly sorry.
I thought you thought I was sexy.
Said the Tall Tree to the Small Tree.
hehe, more to come if ye likes them <!--emo&:)--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/smile.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':)'><!--endemo-->
Light can only futilely
Hide it for a while.
*This haiku brought to you by the servitors of the Balance*
Today Is A Gift
Tomorrow Is Mystery
Slow down, think it out -
This game's more than just shooting.
Use the Force, Jedi.
They fall like cut grass
afraid, before me: Revenge,
lightsaber in hand.
Yet another patch
Countless gameplay balances.
Now Humans don't suck!
Berettas blazing,
I'm god-like, untouchable.
Bullet-time dodge THIS.
***
I _do_ write real poetry - I'm actually pretty good at it, if I do say so myself. But I'm gonna agree with Moleculor on this one. <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo-->
yadda physics blah ho
is yadda yadda blah
ho pfft supposedly bah
yadda ho hum the blah
deeper pfft blah yadda
ho hum yadda blah meaning
blah yadda hidden pfft
yadda in blah blah
all yadda blah yadda
ho hum this yadda
pfft yadda mess blah
<!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo--> - Read closely! This was a bonus question on a phsysics exam, asking what was the deeper meaning, the answer was 'physics'
Sorry to be so off topic of this off topic post, but I am with Mole on NOT posting anything I have written
<!--EDIT|Comprox|April 16 2002,20:35-->
Young green grass,
Two hands clasp,
Two loves side by side..
The golden sun
Shining down,
A cool breeze blowing..
Two sets of eyes
Gaze inside
Of each other..
Pure sweet love
Flowing from
Two young lovers hearts.
<span style='color:green'><b> Poem 10</span></b>
My heart beats
Our eyes meet
My love overflows..
Can't you see
What you mean to me?
What shyness won't let me show?
This love so deep,
Your heart it seeks,
In hope you'll let it in..
I love you so,
But do you know
It's your love I need?
I see him in the shadows
Long, Slender, Smelly
I see him in the mirror
Glowing Eyes, Green, Claws
I see him in my face
Drule, Bad Breath, Angry
I see he is bob
Crap! Doh! Awwwwww, Run!!!! oh wait...
I see him making bob-love to another bob
Nice, a Kodac Moment, Something Jedisar is really into
<b>Last Train Home</b>
The whistle resounds,
It's time to depart
For the only destination
I've held in my heart.
For so long I've waited
To come home to you,
My lips have forgotten
How they love to taste you.
Why did I wait
For the last train home?
Trouble myself
To remain alone?
Now I remember.
It's so much sweeter
To finally return
When it's not something given,
But something I earn.
I stare out the window
At the countryside,
Patiently waiting
To be at your side.
And if I am certain
How well I know you,
You won't be discouraged.
You'll feel this way too.
There once was a squirrel named ralph.
Who sat on the highway by himself.
He wandered too far and was hit by a car
now he lives in a jar on a shelf.
TA DA!
(assuming you haven't shown her already)
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no, I probally won't..That may backfire.
If she likes you I'm sure it'll do very good.
School #2: you tell her you wrote 10 poems for her because of a simple *hug*, and she's blown away that such a simple act could inspire so much emotion. She's yours.
School #1 is the more worldly woman... school #2 is the naive or trusting one who believes in fairy tales. If you think she's a #1, forget it. If you think she's a #2, prove to her you really *are* Prince Charming. (:
This is a story about a kid. we'll call him "Max." Max was 17. Max had a girlfriend. We'll call her "Katie." She was very pretty. Max had a lot of musical talent, and was in a punk rock band with some of his friends. Max wrote songs for his band about politics, and sex humor, and lots of other healthy teenage rock topics. Max was soon completely infatuated with Katie. The focus in his songwriting took a turn and soon all of what he wrote was dedicated to her. The only problem was, the songs sucked. And they were emo, which, as anyone loosely acquainted with punk (monse, kfs) knows, is pretty much cancer for the writer. Soon Max's creativity was completely drained and the band kicked him out. He became depressed, and started failing school, not going home at night, spending every waking hour near Katie. (Note: he had not "gone anywhere" with her yet; the only thing they had done was cuddle. He also had not made any moves towards "going somewhere" with her.) Katie was soon fed up with his constant melancholy attention, and dumped him. Adding insult to injury, she assumed that his lack of effort to sleep with her meant that he was a homosexual, and told every single other girl that she knew, via the Female Telepathy method. This story took place 4 years ago. Max is still single, not to mention homeless, jobless, and a heroin addict.
Moral of the story: I'll let you guys figure this one out.
p.s. it's a true story, by the way. Names changed, for privacy.
what do you mean backfire? If she likes you she will think they are so sweet and she will like u more. If she dosent like you she will think you are crazy. Its best just to show her the poems becuase its not like waiting will do anything. Just say you enjoy the time you spend together and ask if she does too, or something like that. Not 'j00 Üb3r h0t.' If she goes for it, show her the poems.