Errors on Below Zero Salad Days page

HaliosHalios OzMembers Join Date: 2015-11-27 Member: 209514Posts: 260 Advanced user
After reporting this with the last update

I didn't even have to watch footage to find mistakes this time.

Ring ring, who’s there? Oh, just a friendly alien who has taken up residency inside your brain. If you’re busy, you can send him to voicemail."

The phrase is "take up residence".

Residency is a word but not used in this phrase.

"At crushing depths deep below Thermal Vents, giant vents cast an eerie pink glow onto the surrounding features. Several precursor sites were recently uncovered here; Their purpose is still unknown."

The "Their" should not be capitalized.
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