Story Development Idea
ArcticWarrior
Join Date: 2017-01-27 Member: 227305Members
Join Date: 2017-01-27 Member: 227305Members
(SPOILER alert on the last paragraph)
For me at least, having you meet other people would ruin it. I think that you should get a message from other survivors saying to meet at the rendezvous point (probably the floating island). Then you get a signal which shows you to the beach. On your way to the island, when you are approaching, you see the small silhouettes of the other people. You are not close enough to them to talk or anything, just close enough to see them. Suddenly you notice a tail in the water. It's a reaper! The reaper jumps up into the air and grabs one of the survivors, as well as knocking the others into the water. Their screams are silenced. The ocean is tinted red, but neither the reaper or the survivors can be found.
I think this would truly give a sense of isolation, similar to when the sunbeam is shot down.
For me at least, having you meet other people would ruin it. I think that you should get a message from other survivors saying to meet at the rendezvous point (probably the floating island). Then you get a signal which shows you to the beach. On your way to the island, when you are approaching, you see the small silhouettes of the other people. You are not close enough to them to talk or anything, just close enough to see them. Suddenly you notice a tail in the water. It's a reaper! The reaper jumps up into the air and grabs one of the survivors, as well as knocking the others into the water. Their screams are silenced. The ocean is tinted red, but neither the reaper or the survivors can be found.
I think this would truly give a sense of isolation, similar to when the sunbeam is shot down.
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