Spelling and grammar errors in NS2's product description on Steam
nawoa
Join Date: 2012-12-11 Member: 174777Members, Reinforced - Gold
Join Date: 2012-12-11 Member: 174777Members, Reinforced - Gold
English mistakes in a product description immediately make me think "amateur". If a company can't be bothered to even proofread their sales presentation, it makes me wonder how much effort they put into the product itself.
- "Gorges" and "Babblers" shouldn't have apostrophes, they're plural not possessive.
- Viscous is a description of a material's viscosity, ie, oil is more viscous than water. I think you meant "vicious", ie, grammar nazis.
I just noticed that one paragraph at random but didn't look at the rest of the description, there might be other errors. You should fix them.
Gorge’s can now spawn Babbler’s - Viscious little minions that become your personal army. You can direct them to attack enemies, attach to friends (granting them protection from marine fire), or just follow you about like mini alien bodyguards.
- "Gorges" and "Babblers" shouldn't have apostrophes, they're plural not possessive.
- Viscous is a description of a material's viscosity, ie, oil is more viscous than water. I think you meant "vicious", ie, grammar nazis.
I just noticed that one paragraph at random but didn't look at the rest of the description, there might be other errors. You should fix them.