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Writing Athena's Plunge: A Subnautica Story.
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My God you are a fantastic writer! I swear, Bugz, you, Scifiwriterguy, and Jamezorg could all write books someday!
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...maybe
Or it was the ILLUMINATI
Also 1K views! Yay! People like my story!! -
I waited for a response over the links, but it seemed they were unresponsive. Well, to me at least. It looked like they were having a very meaningful conversation with one another, probably over a private communication line that Delilah's AI, M.I.K.…
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*Ahem*

Come at me bro. I'll blast you to the Moon.
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Great! Already breaking my heart with a love story! FANTASTIC!!! I swear, every time...
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The no-water glitch, in which you load up the game and all the water and fog is gone. Soooo annoying.
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Friend, I know how you feel. I wish the best of luck on this journey that is writing. Some succeed, many will falter and fade away. I have a feeling, however, that you will not be one of those people. Good luck, friend. May the Force be with you!
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As we walked farther into the wreckage, the crew trailed loosely behind me in the form of an old military patrol line, ensuring that the chances of attack would be minimal, or concentrated on the leader at the front. Me. I slowly began to piece toge…
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All of the above.
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To put it simply, yes. But also no.
To put it complicated, C.A.R.S.O.N. is and AI created by Nicholas to be his personal AI companion. He also created the rest of the crew of the Athena's AI companions (Names in the works), h… -
All of the above.
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Add a McDonald's.
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Probably... Arlo after my cat that passed, or Oscar after my dog that passed. I want to always remember them and the joy they brought me and my family.
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*Clears throat* OF COURSE!! I would love to have a scale model of my Cyclops (C.A.R.S.O.N.) sitting next to my LEGO Saturn V!
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Challenge Accepted.
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I want the Beluga. It looks SO COOL!!
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Umm... around since Observatories, Multi-Purpose-Rooms and Moonpools were implemented.
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After searching for nearly 4 minutes, Alexis turned on her communications link and announced the location of a new path.
"I see a piece of structural girder that fell on both sides of the deck, going around the obstruction. It appears to be lo… -
@Timelord_Fred Athena is built to survive high speed impacts. Plus, the Reaper hangs basically in what was the bow of Aurora. Athena was parked 176 away from what wo…
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Fear not, my dear friend! All will be revealed in due time. As for Alexis, she is just a part of the crew. I just forgot she wanted to stay back, but oh well.
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After nearly half an hour of preparation for the trip and silent grieving, one by one we climbed out of the airlock on Athena's keel. I went first to ensure that the coast was clear of obstacles, my navy blue suit nearly matching the exterior of Ath…
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A cyclone? Oh dear... that won't end well... OR WILL IT?!
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I see a Bugzapper reference on the horizon!!!
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Another story is on the horizon!
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CHAPTER 9: AURORA'S CORPSE
After ensuring the crew were all well rested and geared up, I kicked Athena into gear and we were of to the Aurora. I handed control over to C.A.R.S.O.N. so I could go down to the "kitchen" and ta… -
My god... I forgot how beautiful the Grand Reef was.
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CHAPTER 8: HIS APOLOGY
After nearly a day and a half, I finally opened my eyes. I saw a bright light shining on my face, the soft tick of a clock going by to my left. I felt the press of a mattress on my back, a pillow unde… -
@the_mariner I have your answers.
1. Honestly, I realize this is an issue. I'm... not a good writer. (Pretty frickin' terrible, in my opinion) I will try t…