The assault
Dunsby
Join Date: 2002-08-01 Member: 1042Awaiting Authorization
Join Date: 2002-08-01 Member: 1042Awaiting Authorization
<div class="IPBDescription">By sbv</div>ok im bored so im gonna do one....
by the way some things arent in ns and some are just made up... there arent teams this is like erm real life
The Assault
we had just arrived at a big open space and we decided to build our base... we brang in a portable command center and set it up... the commander got us to build some buildings around the command centre so it would be harder to find...
anyway we had finished building when we were attacked be 4 aliens 1 ran towards me. it lunged me and i fell on my back. i pulled out my lmg and blasted a clip into his face my teammates were either injured or dead.. there was just 3 of us left and 4 aliens dead
our team consisted of a welder, medic, and me... i had a lmg with 125 bullets left some tripmines and c4, our medic had a broken arm and a pistol with 28 bullets left and our welder only had a knife and a welder, we called for immediate evacuation.
we had lost 2 buildings in that attack and we didnt have time to build them... i put some tripmines by the door c4 in the airvent... we sat in the corner the medic was irritaded by his broken arm and kept complaining.. then we heard a noise..
the noise sounded like metal being peirced, i looked up and i saw some holes in the airvent and 4 tiny claws coming out of the vent, near the end i, i pulled out the remote for the c4 and BOOM gibs flew out of the vent and all over the welders face.
you could see the welder was scared, he was constantly shaking and smoking, i saw a piece of metal on the floor from the vent and got the welder to stand on my shoulders with the medic using his arm to hold him steady, the welder welded the metal to the end of the vent so that no aliens could suprise us by coming through it..
we heard another sound and looked towards the door, the door started getting dents in it... the door was almost off, i started to panic and prepared my gun then the door fell down
i started firing then they ran towards us.. i shot the tripmines in a panic and 2aliens died, i was reloading when the 3rd alien was close... the medic pulled out his pistol and shot it. right between the eyes!
then again. there were noises coming from the vent, i didnt worry since i thought that the newly welded piece of metal to the vent would stop tem coming through, i was wrong, the biggest alien i had ever seen came roaring through it, it hit the wall at a fast speed, then fell down the wall and split the welder in half i ran... i turned around and the medic was being ripped appart by the aliens, 2 more aliens came through the door and another through the vent, i hade 3 c4 left and 1 tripmine, i put the tripmine by me and the c4 near me, they all came running after me, i quickly moved then dived as they ran through the mines and then i blew the c4...
evacuation arrived,i got the medics pistol and the welders knife and then i jumped in the turbo jet and we exited. i thought i was safe again, the hairs on my neck started to stand on end.
the pilot screamed and i heard the smashing of glass, i got up picked up my lmg and there were 3 aliens with wings in the cockpit, i blasted fire inuring 1, then i grabbed a jet from the side of the door ( standard with all turbo jets ) i opened door and dived out, my face was ripping appart from the speed we were flying at.
i turned on the jet, the 3 flying aliens ripped open the roof of the plane and flew out, i jetted backwards and released fire, a spike come shooting from one of them and went straight through my jetpack, i was losing pressure fast and had to land before i ran out of pressure and fight off 3 flying aliens.
i turned off the jet and flew straight down i aimed up as i fell and blasted some more bullets into them, 1 fell down dragging down another alien with its wing, the alien caught tried struggling but the wing was wrapped round him.
i turned back on my jet using the last of its pressure and gently landed, i had lost site of the other one, i started travelling north to the closest marine base where the pilot had been taking me, i put down my jet so i could move faster then i heard an alien cry.
a shadowed swooped over me blocking the glazing sun, the alien was back and was floating above me, i shot some bullets into him but... i was now out of ammo for my lmg.
i pulled out my pistol and popped a clip into its wing, the aliens lost balance and fell down, i walked over to it... i tried hitting me with its claws i jumped back and shot it again, i pulled out my knife and stabbed it nine times... just to make sure.
it was getting dark and i had to hurry up to the marine base, i saw a building ahead of me and ran there as fast as i could.
when i arrived hundreds of marines were around, i was safe atlast...
the end
#### or good?
by the way some things arent in ns and some are just made up... there arent teams this is like erm real life
The Assault
we had just arrived at a big open space and we decided to build our base... we brang in a portable command center and set it up... the commander got us to build some buildings around the command centre so it would be harder to find...
anyway we had finished building when we were attacked be 4 aliens 1 ran towards me. it lunged me and i fell on my back. i pulled out my lmg and blasted a clip into his face my teammates were either injured or dead.. there was just 3 of us left and 4 aliens dead
our team consisted of a welder, medic, and me... i had a lmg with 125 bullets left some tripmines and c4, our medic had a broken arm and a pistol with 28 bullets left and our welder only had a knife and a welder, we called for immediate evacuation.
we had lost 2 buildings in that attack and we didnt have time to build them... i put some tripmines by the door c4 in the airvent... we sat in the corner the medic was irritaded by his broken arm and kept complaining.. then we heard a noise..
the noise sounded like metal being peirced, i looked up and i saw some holes in the airvent and 4 tiny claws coming out of the vent, near the end i, i pulled out the remote for the c4 and BOOM gibs flew out of the vent and all over the welders face.
you could see the welder was scared, he was constantly shaking and smoking, i saw a piece of metal on the floor from the vent and got the welder to stand on my shoulders with the medic using his arm to hold him steady, the welder welded the metal to the end of the vent so that no aliens could suprise us by coming through it..
we heard another sound and looked towards the door, the door started getting dents in it... the door was almost off, i started to panic and prepared my gun then the door fell down
i started firing then they ran towards us.. i shot the tripmines in a panic and 2aliens died, i was reloading when the 3rd alien was close... the medic pulled out his pistol and shot it. right between the eyes!
then again. there were noises coming from the vent, i didnt worry since i thought that the newly welded piece of metal to the vent would stop tem coming through, i was wrong, the biggest alien i had ever seen came roaring through it, it hit the wall at a fast speed, then fell down the wall and split the welder in half i ran... i turned around and the medic was being ripped appart by the aliens, 2 more aliens came through the door and another through the vent, i hade 3 c4 left and 1 tripmine, i put the tripmine by me and the c4 near me, they all came running after me, i quickly moved then dived as they ran through the mines and then i blew the c4...
evacuation arrived,i got the medics pistol and the welders knife and then i jumped in the turbo jet and we exited. i thought i was safe again, the hairs on my neck started to stand on end.
the pilot screamed and i heard the smashing of glass, i got up picked up my lmg and there were 3 aliens with wings in the cockpit, i blasted fire inuring 1, then i grabbed a jet from the side of the door ( standard with all turbo jets ) i opened door and dived out, my face was ripping appart from the speed we were flying at.
i turned on the jet, the 3 flying aliens ripped open the roof of the plane and flew out, i jetted backwards and released fire, a spike come shooting from one of them and went straight through my jetpack, i was losing pressure fast and had to land before i ran out of pressure and fight off 3 flying aliens.
i turned off the jet and flew straight down i aimed up as i fell and blasted some more bullets into them, 1 fell down dragging down another alien with its wing, the alien caught tried struggling but the wing was wrapped round him.
i turned back on my jet using the last of its pressure and gently landed, i had lost site of the other one, i started travelling north to the closest marine base where the pilot had been taking me, i put down my jet so i could move faster then i heard an alien cry.
a shadowed swooped over me blocking the glazing sun, the alien was back and was floating above me, i shot some bullets into him but... i was now out of ammo for my lmg.
i pulled out my pistol and popped a clip into its wing, the aliens lost balance and fell down, i walked over to it... i tried hitting me with its claws i jumped back and shot it again, i pulled out my knife and stabbed it nine times... just to make sure.
it was getting dark and i had to hurry up to the marine base, i saw a building ahead of me and ran there as fast as i could.
when i arrived hundreds of marines were around, i was safe atlast...
the end
#### or good?
Comments
edit...someone please rate this story i am bored out of my head waiting
There are multiple reasons. One is your constant use of the forums as a chat room with your little friend ginger. Another is how you constantly spam inane and useless comments, scripts, and links in the irc channel. And then theres your constant immature attitude towards anything and failure to comply to simple rules. Also don't forget how you lack the ability to use simple grammer. I don't want to continue with this topic because I'll go down avenues I don't want to and it obviously won't help anything.
just rate the ####### story!!!!!
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How? I'm sorry, but I didn't even get past the first paragraph. Not only is your spelling bad, but your grammar is apalling. A free tip: write it out in Word or whatever wordprocessor you use, and then for god's sake use the spellcheck.
thank you nukem <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo--> <!--emo&:D--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/biggrin.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':D'><!--endemo-->
What has that got to do with anything?
What the hell, thing stuffed up ffs, soz all <!--emo&:(--><img src="http://www.natural-selection.org/iB_html/non-cgi/emoticons/sad.gif" border="0" valign="absmiddle" alt=':('><!--endemo-->
Note: I know all you want is a rating, but writing doesn't become better without feedback. And check your facts, auothor's liecense can only go so far.
[edit]for now i rate it 3 on 10