The Fallen

Smoke_NovaSmoke_Nova Join Date: 2002-11-15 Member: 8697Members
<div class="IPBDescription">Novella i'm gonna try and write</div> well, i'm going to try and write a novella.

the basics: There are two species. Humans and the Seraphs. The Seraphs are basically the same as humans, but with wings.

The Seraphs were chased off the main continent by the humans, and so they had to flee to a small continent. Like goin from Australia to New Zealand.

The Seraphs live in relative peace for about 200 years, then the humans new spiritual leader finally gets an army of knights and mercenaries and invade the Seraphim controlled land.

After the Seraphim flee'd the humans the first time, almost all of the Seraphim clans gave up war. Only one clan, which lives in the north, on the Frost Plains trains for war, and that is because they don't trust the humans.

good backstory?

I need some input on Seraphim clan names, and names for continents and what should I call the humans?

My idea's
Frost clan - The Seraph clan that lives on the Frost Plains

Ashwood clan - The clan that lives on the border of the Frost Plains, making their homes on the great Ashwood tree's, each Ashwood being larger then the oldest Redwood's in California

Smoke Wolf clan - Seraph clan that lives in the Ashwood forest, free-range hunters who are very shamanistic and have very close ties to the Frost clan.

Farsight clan - Seraph clan in control of the Great Council.

The Great Council - A council, made up of all the Seraph clans elected represenatives, that holds half the power. Every clan is present except the Frost clan.

so, anyone think this is at all a good idea or should I just scrap it?

Comments

  • K-suspendedK-suspended Join Date: 2003-02-09 Member: 13301Members
    hey, have u already scraped it?

    if not i like the idear keep going sounds good <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->

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  • panzerSPpanzerSP Join Date: 2003-02-11 Member: 13419Members
    <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--> I think that at the moment is a good idea, but i?m sure when you have writed all, some of the history have changed.
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