Angel I Drew

TraxxasTraxxas Join Date: 2002-11-01 Member: 1872Members
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<div class="IPBDescription">Not to do with ns</div> hey Sketch i did.. forgive the bad quality because i had to take with a digital camera.. Scanner broken. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif'><!--endemo--> Anyways gimme some feedback. Not yet done.
<a href='http://www.boomspeed.com/alexf2/BattleAngel2.jpg' target='_blank'>http://www.boomspeed.com/alexf2/BattleAngel2.jpg</a>
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  • TzarconTzarcon Join Date: 2002-02-28 Member: 259Members
    It looks really nice, but of course make sure you do some nice shading on him
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  • LikuLiku I, am the Somberlain. Join Date: 2003-01-10 Member: 12128Members
    I like, alot.
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  • RoadMasterRoadMaster Join Date: 2002-06-01 Member: 718Members
    A bit flat... just by the angle you drew it. If you are going to do an action picture like flying than it should be more angled and dynamic. The flatness you have resembles concept pictures, such as a person simple standing with his arms out. At first glance your character looks like he is "damaged" like a mech who is supposed to look like an angel, but on further looking it actually looks like only his wing is broken, since his damage is made evenly down the center. Try to think of how terminator looked when he got damaged, he wasn't just a removal of skin "plates" off his chest, is was like a wound with wires beneith it. Also.... think more about the mechanics inside this thing. Somehow it looks too "busy" while still not conveying what is inside. Perhaps make thicker wires, or fill up that space between them with whatever computery stuff you can think of. The blank areas make it feet automagical as if the wires really do nothing. The character is interesting and all, just take your drawing in steps, thing about angles, and you should do fine.
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  • TraxxasTraxxas Join Date: 2002-11-01 Member: 1872Members
    Good point Road.. if i had posted this a lil earlier when i was drawing it i would have probably changed but i finished it like last night and gave to a school magazine :\. Plus im lazy bwhahaha. But i know what your talking about and its a really good point thanks for info for my future drawings.
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