Thanks all. Arby: the lower half of a marine's face is exposed, there friend. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
I always like game releated stories. Can't wait to read this chapter cuase the rest = cool. When does chapter 17 come out? <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
I've been taking a little break, just too much writing lately. But I got started on the next chapter and I know what I'm doing. Thanks for the comments!
Nice story... It took me a bit of time to read all sixteen chapters, but still it was a very good story. Do you have lots of time on your hands? And how often do you post a new chapter?
Advisor: I don't think I've got much more time on my hands than anyone else, writing's just a hobby of mine. As for how often I get out chapters...well, it all depends on how long it takes me to write them <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
<!--QuoteBegin--Nomble+Jan 9 2003, 11:55 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Nomble @ Jan 9 2003, 11:55 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->I always like game releated stories. Can't wait to read this chapter cuase the rest = cool. When does chapter 17 come out? <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--><!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd--> For those, that haven't been to his web site lately, chapter 17 is up so read. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> It has been up before January 22, 2003... that when I saw it.
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I'll go read it now.
edit: ominous ending. It was a good read, though I get the feeling other chapters were better... Still, I enjoyed it.
nice story, full o' action = win
Wouldn't the acid scar his face if it ate through armor like it did to another guy?
Arby: the lower half of a marine's face is exposed, there friend. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
Great story rob!
While I'm at it, I might as well suck all the exposure I can outa this thread...
When does chapter 17 come out? <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
--Scythe--
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Advisor:
I don't think I've got much more time on my hands than anyone else, writing's just a hobby of mine. As for how often I get out chapters...well, it all depends on how long it takes me to write them <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo-->
When does chapter 17 come out? <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='smile.gif'><!--endemo--><!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
For those, that haven't been to his web site lately, chapter 17 is up so read. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--> It has been up before January 22, 2003... that when I saw it.