[wip] Monotech Industries Ucc

SpaceJesus · March 2005

<u>Monotech Industries Urban Combat Carbine</u>

Still lacking a bunch of detail, mainly on the back of the stock area, aswell as on the top tac rail. Looks a bit 'chunky' to me, a bit too wide, but meh.
(vaguely inspired by Sid's TSA SMG concept)

(EDIT : gah @ smoothing errors)

PC: 1047

<img src='http://blacksun.wireplay.co.uk/img/smg1/smg1.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://blacksun.wireplay.co.uk/img/smg1/smg2.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://blacksun.wireplay.co.uk/img/smg1/smg3.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://blacksun.wireplay.co.uk/img/smg1/smg4.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

C&C plz

HellspawnUK · March 2005

Can you post a flat shaded render pls?

And maybe a wireframe

Everwatchful · March 2005

looks....cute

SpaceJesus · March 2005

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I can't get max6 to render in anything other than smooth + highlights.
I feel like a boon.

2_of_Eight · March 2005

It looks so big and fat <img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' /> Trim it down a bit, everywhere.

Sid · March 2005

</div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (SpaceJesus @ Mar 28 2005, 04:45 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> (vaguely inspired by Sid's TSA SMG concept)
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I like this... thanks so much. <img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' />

It looks very good and unique... not your run-of-the-mill gun. Keep up the good work and thanks again.

Drfuzzy · March 2005

Make both the grips more p90 like and then I'll have to see it skinned before I can say much more...

SnappyCrunch · March 2005

It's not really too wide per se, but it's too fat. It doesn't look like it's made out of metal; or maybe it's made out of metal, but covered with foam. To be more specific, I think the sides need to be straighter, and the corners more defined. Maybe simply changing your smoothing groups will fix that; it's tough to say from the screenshots.

nogoodnickname · March 2005

nice

Dr_X · March 2005

Fix the smoothing.

RSX · March 2005

</div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (SpaceJesus @ Mar 28 2005, 06:11 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/sad-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad-fix.gif' />
I can't get max6 to render in anything other than smooth + highlights.
I feel like a boon.  </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> 
Press M, then click the Faceted under shader prop. then apply it to the model and render.

SpaceJesus · March 2005

^^ <3

(EDIT :: Obliterated the tac-rail cos it looked crap, ill re-do it when i have some spare time)

<img src='http://blacksun.wireplay.co.uk/img/smg1/smg_flatshade1.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://blacksun.wireplay.co.uk/img/smg1/smg_flatshade2.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://blacksun.wireplay.co.uk/img/smg1/smg_flatshade3.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://blacksun.wireplay.co.uk/img/smg1/smg_flatshade4.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://blacksun.wireplay.co.uk/img/smg1/smg_wire1.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://blacksun.wireplay.co.uk/img/smg1/smg_wire2.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

<img src='http://blacksun.wireplay.co.uk/img/smg1/smg_wire3.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

SpaceJesus · March 2005

updated pic, changed the foregrip/handle

<img src='http://blacksun.wireplay.co.uk/img/smg1/test2.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

nogoodnickname · March 2005

hope youll get good animator for that

SpaceJesus · March 2005

Ratonetwothreetwoone · March 2005

actually.. it looked like its coming along pretty nicely.. only problem is the render doesnt do it very much justice...

SpaceJesus · March 2005

which is why I've spent the last hour messing about with a new renderer <img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' />

<img src='http://blacksun.wireplay.co.uk/img/smg1/test.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

Ratonetwothreetwoone · March 2005

nice... youll probably have to be ready to do custom animations too... i bet you could use that olde p90s lmg fire anims and stuff.. but reload will have to be reanimated..

SpaceJesus · March 2005

Update:

Back of the stock needs more detail, and the magazine needs to be remodelled, most of the rest is final / finished.

PC: 1690

[old render]

MrSocks · March 2005

i'm liking the changes you made between the last two renders, this new render looks much more polished than the last one, especially with the handles and the areas around the trigger guard

nice work

Sid · March 2005

Wow. This is shaping up awesomely!

Lt_Gravity · March 2005

compared to "the basics of weapon construction" it looks pretty weird.

I would like to see a bigger muzzle. its just too tiny.

Traken · March 2005

Beefing it up near the front (muzzle, foregrip?) will help it look a bit more balanced. Right now it looks like it literally weighs 20 lb on the back.

Also, for a magazine that big that barrel sure is small. It looks like you have 50mm bullets coming out of a 10mm hole. (Exaggeration but w/e)

Hawkpulse · March 2005

well youve got 50 10mm or something it kind of needs to be big?

SpaceJesus · March 2005

</div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (Lt Gravity @ Mar 31 2005, 12:11 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> compared to "the basics of weapon construction" it looks pretty weird. </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'>
But then again so would the P90, or the Bizon-2 and similar.

(EDIT: 2080 polys)

<img src='http://blacksun.wireplay.co.uk/img/smg1/render2.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

SpaceJesus · March 2005

PC: 2204
Yet to be optimised

<img src='http://blacksun.wireplay.co.uk/img/smg1/render.jpg' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

NEX9 · April 2005

is it just me or have you sank the sides of the stock in a little to much that there scraping the sides of tht clip, still looks f ing hot

SpaceJesus · April 2005

It's just you <img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/confused-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='confused-fix.gif' />

(Update: PC 2200)

This also needs UV mapping and animating, PM me for the .3ds

<img src='http://blacksun.wireplay.co.uk/img/smg1/BS_render2.JPG' border='0' alt='user posted image' />

SpaceJesus · April 2005

does anyone fancy having a go at skinmeshing / skinning / animating this ?

[/shamless bump]

Dark_Soul · April 2005

nice design, but I don't see why that one hole is so huge (you only just put 1 thumns through it)

CoolCookieCooks · April 2005

Actually DarkSoul I believe you put the thumb of one hand through it, and the forefinger on the opposite hand through it.

Edit: Ill give it a shot at skinmeshing next week, anyone can feel free to skinmesh it in the mean time.

[wip] Monotech Industries Ucc

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