[mwip] Jin Roh La V2
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Join Date: 2003-03-12 Member: 14436Members, Constellation
Join Date: 2003-03-12 Member: 14436Members, Constellation
<div class="IPBDescription">Still drooling about forums being back</div> First version hat too minor changes compared to the HA.
Critizism points where:
-The back
-The front
-The facial area
-Some small stuff
So I got off my butt and haxed ona new back, modifed the front armor and went back to the gasmask facial design, with some changes. Main changes are front and back, though, plus some minor smoothing fixes and such.
Oh, and I reworked the muzzle flash positioning and scripting inside the models.
Critizism points where:
-The back
-The front
-The facial area
-Some small stuff
So I got off my butt and haxed ona new back, modifed the front armor and went back to the gasmask facial design, with some changes. Main changes are front and back, though, plus some minor smoothing fixes and such.
Oh, and I reworked the muzzle flash positioning and scripting inside the models.
Comments
Looking good m8! keep it up
Looking very good..he walks funny lol
Ratonetwothreetwoone
ah yes.. the model looks good too <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
kinda similar to the Helgahst from Killzone <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
Oh release it plz already <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo--> *drools* (sry im overexited because the site is back and i could finally regist) <!--emo&::nerdy::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/nerd-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='nerd-fix.gif' /><!--endemo--> .
EDIT: btw it look like my avatar 2 (copyright???=P)
<!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo--> <!--emo&::lerk::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/lerk.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='lerk.gif' /><!--endemo--> heres a pic of a cool model..
I am a 3D-Artist, my 2D skills are like, non existant <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
the model looks good too, but maybe add some stuff to the guy, ammo packs and stuff?
looks kinda simple and bare
Still alot better than the first one. GJ!
Anyways stick with the jin-roh theme, if people want killzone, they can start their own pack. Keep up the good work <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
couple tips probably already mentioned here
-add a couple ammo packs and stuff to him
-add a tube or two heading from the gas mask to the backpack
The model looks a bit too simple. Soldiers need at the very least a small amount of supplies. Im not sure on your poly count, but i think a few poly's here and there could add to the look without increasing too much overhead (mainly in the mask). This might not be in the poly's, but in the skin (as you've said, you aren't skinnly-blessed <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->) so a wire overlay would definately help out.
On a different note, from what I can see, Jin-Roh seems to carry alot of WWII inspirations, while Killzone (tho not the same but inspired by?) has a more present inspired future. I think the best example is the difference between the helmets. Jin-Roh (your's) has the WW stamped helmet design with the flare at the bottom. Killzone has a more current US military inspired helmet. I think a meld between the two could result in something quite amazing, if you consider a V3.
Sorry for not being quite so brushed up on this Jin-Roh and Killzone thing, but my limited viewing of what references I could find led me to my final opinion.
In any event, keep up the good work.
Anyway, I will slap some stuff onto it. Lemme see....
-Added that stuff from the gasmask to the back (It was really naughty to find a position where animations didn't clip too horrible...)
-Added magazin pockets (Maybe too small adn wrongly placed, dunno, I'm tired...)
Meh, when I tried to upload via editing the last post my windows froze. I won't try that again <!--emo&:0--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/wow.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wow.gif' /><!--endemo-->
don't know it the gas mask stuff will fit the final LA model, but imo you need something more than the color to tell, if it's LA or HA <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
just a thought <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/smile-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
maybe give him an ammo belt instead or something to beef him up around the waste cause that area is looking plain atm.
p.s. forums back w00t w00t ( but i lost my name in all caps =[ )
Anyway, let me try what I can hack onto it.
But first, I need to do something "else" <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->
but the armor looks much nicer now!
first post!!! HAX <!--emo&::marine::--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/marine.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='marine.gif' /><!--endemo-->