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HatredHatred Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7589Members
<div class="IPBDescription">Poems eh? I got nothing else to do...</div> As I sit here wondering
As I live here pondering
I feel something deeper strive
I feel something the seems more alive
It rips and shreds my very being
The darkness it hold feeds off my being
The demons haunt me now
Laughing and cackling at my crys
screaming to the world
I release my life, the blood runs warm from me
I am living in a daze of past days
There is something inside me, something that lies to me
I cannot control it
I will not control it
I am it's puppet
It is my hate
It is my pain
It is my depression
It is my sorrow
It is only suffering
It is me.



I guess we all have something evil inside, the ones that can control it are the greaters. Even the release of the beast is dangerous, understand the question to answer it. Some things will never realign like they should, any ideas on this thing which is called a poem (?) Go ahead and reply, maybe we could start a group project.

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  • DOOManiacDOOManiac Worst. Critic. Ever. Join Date: 2002-04-17 Member: 462Members, NS1 Playtester
    some Haiku for j00:

    Heavy Armor and
    webs do not go together.
    Lunch time for the Bobs.

    and now a disgruntled piece reflecting upon the General forums:

    NS is out now.
    Every day: turret balance.
    Please shut the hell up.
  • UGLLeifUGLLeif Join Date: 2002-11-13 Member: 8495Members
  • DezmodiumDezmodium Join Date: 2002-10-23 Member: 1575Members
    oooooh me want to do a haiku.

    Cloaking to hide from
    Heavily armored marine
    equals frightened skulk


    And now for a cinqain.

    Skulk
    Hunter, Killer
    Hiding, Stalking, Biting
    Hates marines with grenades
    Alien
  • LegionnairedLegionnaired Join Date: 2002-04-30 Member: 552Members, Constellation
    Whining for GL,
    We do not have resources.
    Die away from me.
  • HatredHatred Join Date: 2002-11-07 Member: 7589Members
    Ok I got another one, try to see what it means.

    As I walk to the place of warmth
    As I fall onto softness
    I begin to realize what my past is
    As my world turns black
    As the day fades away
    I slip to the place of dreams
    Warm paths and sunny days
    But as moments, even seconds pass by
    The paths become cold and the sun, is clouded over black
    My fears become real as the world turns to the demons within
    I run as fast as I can, never escaping this torment
    My fear rises to it's peak
    When suddenly, the sun shows
    A new day is born within and I am alive again
    The fear is lifted, the life reborn
    It is, a new day


    Got any ideas on what the base story is about? It's not that hard to decypher so take a crack at it, feel free to post your own poems.
  • DOOManiacDOOManiac Worst. Critic. Ever. Join Date: 2002-04-17 Member: 462Members, NS1 Playtester
    Being Commander.
    Every day you hear the cry:
    Gimmie shotgun plz.
  • pielemuispielemuis Join Date: 2002-01-25 Member: 72Members, NS1 Playtester
    what is with people and haikus? The SI forums had a haiku post and now the NS forums aswell....
  • kanserikanseri Join Date: 2002-11-14 Member: 8629Members
    yeah life sucks and then you die
  • DezmodiumDezmodium Join Date: 2002-10-23 Member: 1575Members
    edited November 2002
    surrounded
    by disgust, pounded
    into dust


    -cannable corpse

    dont hate our haikus
    they are the best way to kill
    time. i hate my life
  • TychoCelchuuuTychoCelchuuu Anememone Join Date: 2002-03-23 Member: 345Members
    You know some of my CS haikus got on CS-Nation.

    Horseshoe is attacked
    The marines don't give a crap
    They just want some guns

    Hera's set on Mars
    Bast is on a spacestation
    Aliens spread fast

    Marines get cool guns
    Turrets and heavy armor
    But they can't make webs

    Sensory chambers
    Hidden in the dark corners
    Are the ugly ones

    Remember Half-Life?
    The barnacles and headcrabs?
    Oh how we've evolved
  • DOOManiacDOOManiac Worst. Critic. Ever. Join Date: 2002-04-17 Member: 462Members, NS1 Playtester
    Tycho is a noob.
    Hera is not set on Mars.
    I had to post this. :D
  • LegionnairedLegionnaired Join Date: 2002-04-30 Member: 552Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin--DOOManiac+Nov 15 2002, 08:30 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (DOOManiac @ Nov 15 2002, 08:30 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->Tycho is a noob.
    Hera is not set on Mars.
    I had to post this. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--><!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    LMAO!

    That was great!
  • FamFam Diaper-Wearing Dog On A Ball Join Date: 2002-02-17 Member: 222Members, NS1 Playtester, Contributor
    edited November 2002
    Yes, I playtested.
    No, I'm not a *** *******
    Please stop asking me.

    We all love Flayra,
    He'll never gain my heart though.
    Goatees freak me out.

    Haikus were my art,
    Until NS came along.
    Now I have forgotten how to do them.

    The <a href='http://www.box7.co.uk/ec' target='_blank'>EC</a> forums had a <a href='http://www.box7.co.uk/ecforum/index.php?board=5;action=display;threadid=74' target='_blank'>haiku thread</a> long long ago. NS are just copycats. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo-->
  • TychoCelchuuuTychoCelchuuu Anememone Join Date: 2002-03-23 Member: 345Members
    <!--QuoteBegin--DOOManiac+Nov 15 2002, 05:30 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (DOOManiac @ Nov 15 2002, 05:30 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->Tycho is a noob.
    Hera is not set on Mars.
    I had to post this. <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html/emoticons/biggrin.gif' border='0' valign='absmiddle' alt='biggrin.gif'><!--endemo--><!--QuoteEnd--></td></tr></table><span class='postcolor'><!--QuoteEEnd-->
    It is a red place
    Screw it if I cannot tell
    What planet I'm on

    Wafting through the breeze
    The smell of a spore cloud's here
    Or did DOOM just fart?

    Let's have haiku wars
    Or maybe just play NS
    I don't really care
  • DOOManiacDOOManiac Worst. Critic. Ever. Join Date: 2002-04-17 Member: 462Members, NS1 Playtester
    If its war you want,
    my friend, it is war you got.
    Prepare to face me!

    Because I can be
    better, faster, and stronger.
    That and I have Ops.

    :D
  • DezmodiumDezmodium Join Date: 2002-10-23 Member: 1575Members
    edited November 2002
    hallucinating
    from an extreme case of the
    flu is so not fun




    boy, let me tell you
  • DOOManiacDOOManiac Worst. Critic. Ever. Join Date: 2002-04-17 Member: 462Members, NS1 Playtester
    Why oh why must you
    bring a topic from the dead?
    Necropheliac?
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