Ns_ruin

CloistCloist Join Date: 2004-02-04 Member: 26041Members
edited March 2008 in Mapping Forum
<div class="IPBDescription">First map, dont kill me</div>Right this is my first ns map been working on it for a while and finally got the courage to
post.

Concept of the map:
-Takes place at a research facility that is developing a type of weapon for the TSA's battle against the Kharaa.
-There are three areas in the facility Storage/Cargo area (MS), Water Treatment/Maintence, Research and Development and Testing/Production.
-The facility has been infiltrated by the Kharaa and the TSA are sent in to recover the plans of the new weapon, also to clear the facility.

Give me some critisism, pointers and suggestions but dont kill me please. <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/sad-fix.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=":(" border="0" alt="sad-fix.gif" />
Bear in mind some areas look bare and nothing is final.<img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/tounge.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid=":p" border="0" alt="tounge.gif" />
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  • SwiftspearSwiftspear Custim tital Join Date: 2003-10-29 Member: 22097Members
    ARG, DIE!!!

    j/k, look pretty ok for a first map, some obvious texture stuff but you'll learn to get better. The first pic reminds me of something from CS <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • lyndaklyndak God Join Date: 2002-11-13 Member: 8419Members, Constellation
    Hmm...
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  • todd1Oktodd1Ok Join Date: 2004-04-19 Member: 28018Members, Constellation, NS2 Playtester
    this, i like.

    when will it be completed?
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  • NzNexusNzNexus Join Date: 2004-02-16 Member: 26605Banned
    only i can say about this map is : work on it more

    !i know this problem but now listen on one important thing. Your map looks like every room has been created of a box. Try to make the floor maybye more floor!

    use -Floor textures. <!--emo&:0--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/wow.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='wow.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    and the hive area need more infest to sucess completly.

    But anyway it looks goood. <!--emo&:)--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/smile.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='smile.gif' /><!--endemo-->
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  • CloistCloist Join Date: 2004-02-04 Member: 26041Members
    edited July 2004
    ok nexus mate iv changed texture styles alot throughout development, i did say the rooms are bare i.e: there is hardly any detail work done yet.
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  • todd1Oktodd1Ok Join Date: 2004-04-19 Member: 28018Members, Constellation, NS2 Playtester
    aye. he made the "work in progress" disclaimer
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  • lyndaklyndak God Join Date: 2002-11-13 Member: 8419Members, Constellation
    I think he needs to work more on STRUCTURE than details like INFESTATION at the moment. PS. How's the decompile going then mate?

    Yeah, it's looking good so far, would love to see it when it's finished and polished.
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  • ConfusedConfused Wait. What? Join Date: 2003-01-28 Member: 12904Members, Constellation, NS2 Playtester, Squad Five Blue, Subnautica Playtester
    i'm sure this map is in its infancy. i cant really offer much ion the way of guidence except to say that the details need to be fleshed out. i'm sure you are aware of this. the details you have added are quite good especially for this stage of develpment keep the same attention to detail through out and you could have a great final product.
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  • lyndaklyndak God Join Date: 2002-11-13 Member: 8419Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin-confused!+Jul 26 2004, 12:21 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (confused! @ Jul 26 2004, 12:21 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> i'm sure this map is in its infancy. i cant really offer much ion the way of guidence except to say that the details need to be fleshed out. i'm sure you are aware of this. the details you have added are quite good especially for this stage of develpment keep the same attention to detail through out and you could have a great final product. <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    ^^ ...yeah, what he said.
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  • CrispyCrispy Jaded GD Join Date: 2004-08-22 Member: 30793Members, Constellation
    I want an update on this map, it's been long enough since the last post so I'm sure there's more to say on it/see from it. I also wanna see how far you've got in removing the blockiness etc.
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  • BulletHeadBulletHead Join Date: 2004-07-22 Member: 30049Members
    2 surprises

    1) Nz-Nexus made a post (didn't know he was back... w/b man, hope you're ready to try anew)

    2) This is very very good for a first map... is htis your first MAP total, or first NS map?
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  • KesterKester Join Date: 2004-02-21 Member: 26770Members, Constellation
    <!--QuoteBegin-BulletHead+Oct 26 2004, 10:22 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (BulletHead @ Oct 26 2004, 10:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> 2 surprises

    1) Nz-Nexus made a post (didn't know he was back... w/b man, hope you're ready to try anew)

    2) This is very very good for a first map... is htis your first MAP total, or first NS map? <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Look at the dates, all i need to say really.
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  • BulletHeadBulletHead Join Date: 2004-07-22 Member: 30049Members
    DOH, I just look at the year normally XD
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  • RadagastRadagast Join Date: 2003-06-29 Member: 17776Members, Constellation
    im supprised the pics still work.

    and when i saw nz-nexus i was like "WTH" lol.
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  • GhozerGhozer Join Date: 2003-05-22 Member: 16617Members, Constellation
    Yes t3h Cloist'y -- when you gonna get this map Finished???

    Stop deleting Corridors and rooms and get the map done <!--emo&:(--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/sad-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='sad-fix.gif' /><!--endemo--> people want it.. <!--emo&:p--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/tounge.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='tounge.gif' /><!--endemo-->

    tbh tbh !!!111oneoneone
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  • CloistCloist Join Date: 2004-02-04 Member: 26041Members
    Well i wasnt going to update this thread because it died pretty fast a while ago.
    Im still working on the map have been reworking bland areas as this is my first map EVER. Iv learned alot by making the map and im more motivated now knowing people are interested in whats going on <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->.
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  • GhozerGhozer Join Date: 2003-05-22 Member: 16617Members, Constellation
    got an EST on completion?
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  • JezpuhJezpuh Join Date: 2003-04-03 Member: 15157Banned
    <!--QuoteBegin-BulletHead+Oct 26 2004, 11:22 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td><b>QUOTE</b> (BulletHead @ Oct 26 2004, 11:22 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> 2 surprises

    1) Nz-Nexus made a post (didn't know he was back... w/b man, hope you're ready to try anew)

    2) This is very very good for a first map... is htis your first MAP total, or first NS map? <!--QuoteEnd--> </td></tr></table><div class='postcolor'> <!--QuoteEEnd-->
    Nexus isn't back, it's just that this thread is back from July <_<
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  • CrispyCrispy Jaded GD Join Date: 2004-08-22 Member: 30793Members, Constellation
    Wait, deja vu. Wasn't that said by Kester IN THE POST UNDERNEATH. Way to tell us something new Jezpuh.

    @Cloist: Well even if you think the map's on its way to the cemetary I wouldn't mind seeing how your actual mapping's coming along...
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  • CloistCloist Join Date: 2004-02-04 Member: 26041Members
    edited November 2004
    I will post some screenies soon but my PSU died last week,but a good friend sent me a replacement,so im just checking the rmfs are ok <!--emo&:D--><img src='http://www.unknownworlds.com/forums/html//emoticons/biggrin-fix.gif' border='0' style='vertical-align:middle' alt='biggrin-fix.gif' /><!--endemo-->.

    Iv been reworking alot of areas with less blocky architecture should be compiling in the next day or two.
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  • lyndaklyndak God Join Date: 2002-11-13 Member: 8419Members, Constellation
    Yeah, I sent him a replacement PSU, at a cut price.
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